S$- Lehrein (note on pg 8) - Page 5

Posted: 8 years ago
Nd yeah.. In part 3A remaining characters vil enter...
So stay tuned...

Lots of love a
Alia vardan 😆
Posted: 8 years ago
beautiful...!!! ðŸ˜‰
continue asap
take care
thanks a lot for the pm
Posted: 8 years ago
nice one..
pedk on lips eh ?
interesting..very interesting...
all are on mission..lol..
update soon..
love,
Harika..keep smiling..it looks good on you..😳
Posted: 8 years ago
Hey love ur update
This is so awesome 
Loved it
Cont son
Precap seems intersting 
Posted: 8 years ago
alu I have a complaint.. ur updates r so short yaar.. & damn cliff hanging...
this is not happening... next time I WANT A BIG BIG UPDATE!
NAHIII!.. 😭
Nandu ka boyfriend hai!.. ab mere Manik ka kya hoga!.. 😭
Posted: 8 years ago
hii
read ur ff in one go...
its amazing loved it nice concept...
would love to read more plzz update soon nd pm me also..
Posted: 8 years ago
PART - 3A

Manik nd nandini.were starring each other.. Their eyelock was broken by ringing of maniks phone.. The phone was of ALYA... He picked d call

Manik: Haan alya..

Alya: We need to talk.. Meet me.. Ill txt u d place

Manik: okay ill b dere soon..

Manik cuts d call takes tia's laptop from her nd says goodbye to her nd lives.. After sometime manik reaches d destination.. Nd sees alya crying

Manik: Alya.. Is everythng fine..?? R u okay

Alya: manik.. Actually bhai... He us in d hospital.. To operate him dey r asking for 60 lakhs.. I have given 20 lakhs but I need 40 lakhs.more plz can u give me d amount.. Plz

Manik: Dont worry.. Ill try my best to get d amount ASAP... Ill take a.leave.. Bye

As soon as manik leaves alya calls someone..

Alya: Ill get ur amount.. Plz dont harm bhai.. Plz I have done as u said I said same to manik wat u had asked me to say.. Now plz leave my bhai.. Plz

A guy: not so easy.. I want to torcher d malhotra.. Its just d start

On d other hand in murty mansion nandini is confused abt wat happened with manik few hours ago... Just den she gets a mms.. She checks it nd is completely shattered... She txts d person.. "Baby I luv u.. How could u do dis.. Plz dont do it"


In return she gets a txt " Its over.. Now I m married.. So stay away

Nandini crys nd den she thinks to do somethng..

On d other hand manik txt vmcabir nd dhruv dat he wants to meet dem.. Same place
[COLOR=red]Cabir nd fhruv reach @ d place nd find manik..


Cabir: wat happened?? Y r u do silent?? Oh u might have forgotten ur hug anniversary, or kiss anniversay.. Or sime anniversary.. Ryt

Manik says dhruv nd cabir whole story of alya.. His encounter vith nandini..

Manik: I need a break.. Buddy plz do somethng.. Plz

Dhruv : Fine.. Will go on a trip to a beach.. Hows it I ll plan every thng..

Manik: But if I say abt trip to mom.. Den surely Tinu also will come..

Dhruv : its okay...

Cabir: Yaa.. I lk her she is just lk me a prankster.. So no problem

Manik: Okay..,den.. Thank u guys

Dey have a group hug...

PRECAP:Manik,Dhruv, Cabir, Tia, navya nd nandini.. on d holiday.. Manan romance..
Posted: 8 years ago
sweet and short update
loved it
thanks a lot for the pm
continue soon
take care
Posted: 8 years ago
sweet and short update
loved it..
waiting for the picnic..
cont soon...

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