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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: KewlaniGarima

Awsm story!!!
Plzz do pm me!!!
continue soon!!!



Yaa... But plz u have to be in my buddy list ... Nd ya I vil pm u...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Hey nice update..in first meet only manik felt something for nandini...
Please pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Excited !!!!!
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Love it...already Manik is feeling something...can't wait to see where this goes...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: ..Mellifluous..

Interesting...love at first sight eh...

continue soon...
u penned it very well..
love,
Harika..keep smiling..it looks good on you..


Thanks... For liking it... πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aliavardan



Yaa... But plz u have to be in my buddy list ... Nd ya I vil pm u...

Okkk!!! I have send u buddy request!!! U just add me in ur buddy list!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
wow...nice start!
pls mention d pg number & update date in d title whenever u update! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART -2

Manik was mesmarised to see nandini.. She was wearing a beautiful read nd black one piece... Hair tied into pony tail..

Manik was lost in her... Wen suddenly he sensed someones touch near his pocket... Nd dat was non other dan... Tia..

Manik: Tinu... Wat r u doing??? Leave my pocket

She was busy pulling his pocket wen suddenly she fouch chocolate in his pocket... Took it off nd started running..

Manik: Tinu... Plz give me d chocolate.. Its,for alya.. Plz

Tia: for dat vampire...never... Nd how can u marry dat selfish. Person who only loves ur money but not u.. U want d chocolate na... Take it...

Manik: Good ... Now get into d car..

Tia: Bhai..., nandus house is also near our house... Plz vil u drop her

Manik: okay my... Elephant...

Deu were on d way home... Manik was driving nd frequently looking at nandu from d mirror...

Manik: vich way is ur home??

Nandini: Take left...

Manik took left nd was driving wen nandini noticed riahab her bro... Nd asked manik to stop d car..

Nandini: Manik.. Stop d car...

Manik: Wat on d road?? But why??

Nandini: actually... My bro is here he vil help me...

Manik : (sadly) okay...

She got down of car d bid good bye...

Nandu: Thank you guys... Nd bye tia.. Bye manik

Tia: byeee...my GF

Manik: Bye...

Dey left her nd started driving... Wen manik got call from alya...

Manik: hey... Alya... Wat s up??

Alya: Manik.. I dont have time for all dis... Wat to meet u... Ryt now.. Magdalline cafe.. Plz come over here... I need to talk..

Manik: Alya... I m driving... Nd I m vith tia... If I come I have to come vith her...

Alya: God!!! Fine... Bring her along... But come ryt now..

Manik: Ill b dere soon okay...

With dis he cuts d call... Nd reach d cafe

Manik: hey... Alya wat happened.. Y did u call me.. Wats d matter??

Alya: ssly... U r asking me wat happened.. Manik ur parents r postponing our marriage since one yr.. Not any more...,ask ur parents for atleast our engagement... Plz orelse forget me ill never ever come to u.. (she said acting lk crying)

Manik: Baby.. Dont cry I ll talk to dem... U plz dont cry..

Alya: Okay fine. I guess I m late Ill take a leave..

Tia.. Who was sitting inside d car heard it nd taught to tell it to nyonika.. Dey soon drove home nd reached..

Tia: Mamma...

Nyonika: my baccha... Tinu.. R u okay.. My darling..

Tia: I m fine mom... I need to talk to u... Its urgent...

Manik: wat do u want to talk???

Tia: Its girls talk... Come lets go in nd talk..

Dey headed in nd tia locked d room[/COLOR

]Nyo: Wat happened tinu... Wat was so urgent??

Tia: mom... Dat draculla alya... Wants to marry bhaii... Ryt now... She said.. Him atleast to get dem engaged..

Nyo: Wat?? Nooo.!! Dis cant happen... I have to do something..

Tia: Mom... Wat if bhai can love someone more dan FAB 5..den he can live dat draculla...

Nyo: but how ?? Were vil we find any person whom he vil love more dan fab 5... Its nearly impossible... But ill give it a try ...to

Whole day manik tried to talk to nyonika... Abt his nd alyas marriage but she ignored... Even he tried to talk to his dad.. Even he ignored.. D day ended .. Like dat itself..

[COLOR=yellow]Next day a bright sunny morging...


Nyonika as usual wen for her morning jog... While she was jogging a college boy on purpose threw a can so dat she can fall... But ryt on time a girl reached dere nd saved her... Dat girl was non other dan nandini

Nyo: Thanks beta... I would have broken my bones.. If u would not have helped me ..

Nandini: my pleasure aunty...

Nyo: wats ur name child??

Nandini: Nandini murty...

Nyo: R u Vivek murty's daughter??

Nandini: Yes... How do u know aunty??

Nyo: I m Mohit malhotras wife nyonika malhotra?? U must b knowing him ryt??

Nandini: Ya.. I know mohit uncle... He is like my father... I m sry I couldnot recognise u??

Nyo: Its okay... Beta..

Nandini: aunty I m getting late.. Ill take a leave...

Nandini leaves for her house.. Nd nyonika thinks..

Nyo: Yes... I got a perfect bride... Now only thing is manik shld fall for her...

Promo: mohit, nyonika nd tia on mission to make manik fall for nandini
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
this is fantastic...!!!
loving manik's parents and his cute sister tia...a lot
u penned it beautifully
so they r planning to make manik fall for nandini..wow
eagerly waiting for that
pls continue soon dear
take care
thanks a lot for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Hey .fabulous update... Even I want to join their planπŸ˜‰