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If Only... *CaVya OneShots* [#4 : Page 12.] (Page 6)

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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 10:15am | IP Logged
This.
I have been waiting so long. So long. *melodramatic, wipes tear*
You have no idea how hard I ship these two. They are such babies. My adorable, clueless, babies.
*sigh* if only this would happen on the show. (Waddup story title reference!)
Aaanywayz. I really love how you've brought out the conflict in Cabir regarding Navya. And how you've portrayed their bond, not friends, not lovers. Something that cannot be described in words. This literally spoke to me.
Eagerly waiting for more!

All the love. xx

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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 10:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -LarryGurl-

This.
I have been waiting so long. So long. *melodramatic, wipes tear*
You have no idea how hard I ship these two. They are such babies. My adorable, clueless, babies.
*sigh* if only this would happen on the show. (Waddup story title reference!)
Aaanywayz. I really love how you've brought out the conflict in Cabir regarding Navya. And how you've portrayed their bond, not friends, not lovers. Something that cannot be described in words. This literally spoke to me.
Eagerly waiting for more!

All the love. xx

Hey, thaaanks!

Oh, these two! I lurve them. That's the very thing about these two. I'm not all I-want-them-as-a-couple-BAS! when it comes to CaVya. It's like, I just want these two to be together, no matter what. Ab friends, best friends, lovers, simply roommates, whatever. But these two need to stay together.

Of course, fantasies regarding a bisexual Cabir and... (oooh, you get me, yeah? ;) ) aside, I'm totally fine with them being platonic only.

They're beautiful, these two, and I wish they weren't so sidelined. But, oh well.

Thank you for reading and commenting!

Glad you liked it. :)

Mugs.

P.S. #3 will take a while. Entrance exams and stuff. *sigh*

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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 11:32am | IP Logged
OMG it was awesome
loved it 
please dear wiorte more and make this in a real fic
loved it
bye sumi

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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
This was so amazing!!
Starting from that possessed scene!!! Haha!
I could literally imagine Navya there with that scary look on her face!
And Cabir gently consoling her was very cute!
And I so much loved the last part... He understands that Navya needs him more than he needs his space! Awww... That was so cute!
And yeah! We love it when you amplify the story dear!!
I actually dread the end! Because I love reading these drabbles! Now oneshots I guess?!?!
Anyways, loved it very much!
Waiting for the nxt one! Update soon!

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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 5:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sosweetsumi

OMG it was awesome
loved it 
please dear wiorte more and make this in a real fic
loved it
bye sumi

Hey, thank you so much!

Glad you liked it! :)

Mugs.

P.S. Uhm, "real fic" matlab?


Edited by NonComposMentis - 10 May 2015 at 7:41am
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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 5:46am | IP Logged
Double post *sigh*

Edited by NonComposMentis - 10 May 2015 at 7:43am
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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 7:17am | IP Logged
I am fine with scraps too Smile Else I shall look out for this thread Embarrassed Read the second part and really loving the way you are portraying CaVya here. There is the right mix of humor and emotions and hats off to u for keeping that balance Clap The nightmare part was funny LOL esp the connect to Chennai Express ROFL and Cabir planning to jump off just in case Navya decided to kick him off the bed LOL And then the aftermath of the nightmare. Loved the way Cabir comforted her. Their platonic bond is depicted beautifully here Clap
Looking forward to reading more Big smile

P. S - Don't worry about the word count LOL I had written an OS split in 2 parts, first was around 11000 words and the 2nd around 13000 words ROFL Doesn't really qualify for an OS now does it? Tongue
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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 7:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by NonComposMentis

Originally posted by Arshirox97

This was so amazing!!
Starting from that possessed scene!!! Haha!
I could literally imagine Navya there with that scary look on her face!
And Cabir gently consoling her was very cute!
And I so much loved the last part... He understands that Navya needs him more than he needs his space! Awww... That was so cute!
And yeah! We love it when you amplify the story dear!!
I actually dread the end! Because I love reading these drabbles! Now oneshots I guess?!?!
Anyways, loved it very much!
Waiting for the nxt one! Update soon!

Hey, thank you so much!

Glad you liked it! :)

Yah, #3 will be up as soon as would be possible for me. :)

Thaaanks!

Mugs.

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