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SwaRon OS: It Hurts. (Page 2)

aneesha93 Senior Member
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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 11:00pm | IP Logged
Memories refreshed. It felt too good reading thisTongue. You have written it well. Thanks for writing this one and for taking us back to the Swaron landEmbarrassed.
Keep writing and thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 1:28am | IP Logged
beautiful 
loved it to the core
i can feel that hurt 
do write more
thanks for the pm..!!

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 1:35am | IP Logged
Nyc Os

luved swayam's POV a lot :-)

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 2:59am | IP Logged
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Nishi, this was yet another a brilliant piece of writeup. The way you kept the initial essence of this scene intact was beautiful.
Yes, while reading the oneshoot, i could clearly see images & motion in my head. Swayam in blue checkes shirt (not forgetting that scar on his cheebone) adoring sharon while she danced around in black, beautifully throughout the canteen. The hurt, the pain, the longing in his heart. "I love you so much that it hurts" Oh, Swayam. Sharon on the other hand, doing just similar thing for Swayam had swelled up all our hearts. They are beautiful :')
You wrote those emotions with such ease man! Depicting both of their POVs with such subtle use of words and emotions. This is phenomenal.
I have a complaint- after reading your works, I am always at loss of all damn words & adjectives. You deserve a hug for this oneshoot.

Keep writing.
-Ayushi


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srinidhi94 Senior Member
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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 5:17am | IP Logged
this is another one of those beautiful oss of yours nishi...
very well written
you deserve ClapClapClap

welldone

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
wow nishi it was awesome
beautifully written

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
Beautifully written.

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This is gonna take some time, pardon me.

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