Kaisi Yeh Yaariaan


Kaisi Yeh Yaariaan
Kaisi Yeh Yaariaan


twinkle10 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 10:31am | IP Logged

DAY 53! - Together!

They say sharing pain halves its intensity. And sharing happiness doubles the joy. So when two lovers have vowed to fight every battle together...how will they let this one easily pass by.

Love...love is like a see-saw. Full of ups and downs...but the real challenge lies in how the two individuals balance out their ride...together. The real beauty lies in how do two hearts combine to form one heartbeat...together.


Their love is true love...one that promises forever togetherness. And with this togetherness come many promises. They've promised to hope together. They've promised to fight for each other together. They've promised to battle it out with the world together and to attain victory at every step together. They've promised to weep together. They've promised to smile together. They've promise to fear together as well as defeat that fear together. They've promised to protect one another together. They promised to trust on each other together. They've promised to heal each other's wound together and dream every dream, every nightmare together.


When in love...you promise to drink every drop of liquid together. Now be that a glass of haldi waala doodh or the bitter tears of each other's pain. You promise to never let the other suffer alone because when in love, your suffering is defined by the other's suffering. When in love...you not only promise to smile together but you also promise to become the reason of each other's smiles...together.

When in love...you promise to soothe every aching nerve...together. You promise to balm each other's wounds...together. You promise to reassure each other of your presence...together. You promise to calm every fearful thought...together. Her words; "Manik...mujhe neend nahi aa rahi"; assured him of her trust in him. His reply; "Koi baat nahi...main hoon na"; fills her with the assurance that she can trust him; because their love... promises to trust each other...together. His soulful voice hums for her...her eyes finally blink to speak to him; because their love promises to express to one another...together. His hands caress her forehead with tender care...her hand wraps itself around his fingers in a firm grip; because their love...promises to hold each other and embrace each other's touch during the dark nights...together. She wholeheartedly holds onto the memories of his touch, his voice, his presence as she dozes off, he refuses to walk away from her presence, her sight, her worldly space; because their love...promises for their souls to stay bound to each other when they fear each others' loss...together.


When in love...you promise to gather inner-courage...together. You promise to comfort each other's terrors...together. Your promise to share words of apprehension...together. You promise to lend each other the pacifying touch...together. She questions him "Manik tum...tum theek ho na"; upon what could have been a physical injury...he asks her "Kya tum...theek ho"; enquiring about her emotional wounds; because their love promises to cure each other's pain...together. His hands cup her face in assurance that she needs not to curtain her fears, that he will hold her whenever she shatters; her hands envelop his fingers in assertion, that he needs not to fear her breakdown; because their love...promises to become each other's strengths...together. He ensures her that with time everything will be fine and she promises him that with time she will be fine; because their love...promises to eradicate all seeds of sorrow over time...together. He had once allowed her to choose a brooch for him...today she wants him to choose her pair of earrings; because their love promises to always trust and respect each other's decisions...together. His words and her words took a little step forward today; "Listen...if it hurts..." "Not that much..."; because their love...promises to heal all scars of the past and weave new beginnings of the future...together.


"Together...we will survive this Nandini. We will."

Today they've decided to descend down the staircase together, tomorrow they will decide upon heading down a rocky road together; because their love...promises of treading every step of this journey...together. Today they've voiced against the demon in front of everyone together, tomorrow they will drag him back to his hell home together; because their love...promises to fight for righteousness...together. Today his heart and her soul failed to close their eyes at night together, tomorrow they will dream of each other whilst sleeping a peaceful sleep; because their love...promises to shine like his stars and glow like her fireflies...together.Today their fears seemed to be calm, tomorrow the fears may escalate to a new peak...but they will conquer every fear together; because their love...promises to be fearless, hopeful, optimistic...together.


Dehleez pe mere dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum

Never has he lived before her, neither can he envision a life without her. Never has she loved before him, neither can she imagine of love without him. Because their love...promises to teach them to live and rise in love all over again...together...


Sorry guys... a rather chotu si post today! But that doesn't mean they were any less perfect...my words just seem to be lacking depth and length I think...




Edited by twinkle10 - 07 May 2015 at 10:48am

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Preeshaxo Senior Member

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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 10:35am | IP Logged
A chotu post and you said it all! Like how? Need to get myself a dictionary so I can find some new words to appreciate your writing!! Your words are love Twinkling.. Just beautiful!


She couldn't see him struggle drinking the milk so she gulped it down all in one go. She told him she wasn't tired so he said I'm here and he sings for her to sleep. Her eyes never left him, the moment he walked away she got up again, changed positions so she could see him right in front of her. He comes and sits beside her, caresses her cheek and she grabs his hand, seeking that extra strength from him which makes her finally fall asleep. The forehead kiss, reassuring her of his love. Babies were so god damn cute Day Dreaming

Manik couldn't bring himself to leave her alone, so for his own piece of mind he slept outside her door. The flashbacks of loosing Nandini still haunting him, he quickly checks to see she's safe. I liked how they showed Manik being equally effected by this incident. His biggest fear was always darkness but now it will be the fear of loosing Nandini again.
"Together we will survive this Nandini"

Him waking up, falling on to her lap, her holding him, him noticing her hair tied. Little things like this are so cute.
I love how he said "ek raat mein kuch badal nahi sakta. Stop being so brave, say whatever you want". I'm hoping once this pandit track is all done she'll talk all her fears out.
Nandini isn't completely broken, she's not going to give up until justice is served to Pandit! She just wants him punished and then she'll be ok.
How Manik notices her earrings are missing, asks if her ear is still paining. She brings him her earring case, to choose a pair because she still remembers how her earrings also shine for him. And he oh so gently puts them in her ear, with so much love and affection caressing away her pain.
Just like that they try to erase all memories of pandit and fill it with memories of their love.

Preesha aka Your Soheesha Hug

Edited by Preeshaxo - 07 May 2015 at 1:42pm

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Kaju.acacia Senior Member

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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 10:36am | IP Logged
ur topics has its own charm.
will never get to read things like this.
ur words has depth haan but it is lacking length
luv uHeart

Edited by acaia - 09 May 2015 at 5:27am

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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 10:38am | IP Logged
Yes..they create wonders together...togetherness is the strength of MANAN...they never fails to fight together even they were enemies or friends or lovers...

the essence of MANAN is togetherness ..blank promise...trust...communication...Embarrassed

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moonstonespirit Senior Member

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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 10:39am | IP Logged
Twinkle Hug Awesome post as usual!! You have described their togetherness so well. I love reading your reviews...

The way he made her drink it Day Dreaming He told her through his actions that he will be with her not only through good times but also through the bad ones. He would share her burdens and sorrows, she need not have to shoulder them alone. Then she sees him struggling to drink it, so gulps it down just so he doesnt have to bear the bitterness.

The way he put her to sleep was so adorable. Singing for her, telling her how important she is to him... Her eyes never left him. She was filling her mind with his image putting it up as a barrier against the nightmares that were to plague her. Holding onto him, drawing strength from while she fell asleep. 

Manik truly touched my heart today. His greatest fear was no longer the darkness, it was the fear of losing her. He couldnt bring himself to leave her alone, for the sake of his own sanity he had to stay there. So he stayed their behind her closed doors, safeguarding her, promising to fight all the battles alongside her. 

The earring scene was cute. She is trying to erase all the memories of pandit and filling them up with the memories of their love. They are so perfect together!! 

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naddiya26 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 10:43am | IP Logged
after a heart torching episode

a beautiful post

 they have made us all speechless 

God bless them and you 

Edited by naddiya26 - 07 May 2015 at 10:48am

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bhavisweet IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 10:49am | IP Logged
osssummm post Twinkle

really u described them very well

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twinkle10 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 11:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Preeshaxo

I'll be back..


HAHAHA I think she's still asleep.. The child slept so so so late last night :(

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