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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: mishtypiya

very nice..
Continue soon...

Thanks a lot...Yep sure.⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: luvvivian286

Very Very interesting wanna read more...

I think shyam is gay thats why he is not giving any importance to khushi...
Continue soon...

Thanks a lot for liking the update.
Well the reason will be revealed gradually as the story moves.⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: Javeria3991

nice start

Thanks a ton.⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: lechuarshi

It is unfair for a beautiful wife like Khushi to be ignored by her husband.

But he is shyam the snake..so I agree...

My Arnie baby is so much obsessed and very much possessive abt his jalebi..
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He is damn sure in ideology that Khushi is his soul mate.. 😳

So first seed of passion is born in Khushi..but..uff she is married & that knot is restricting her..

😭

Arnav went to khushi's home.. 😳

Continue soon..it is awesome 👏

well said dear...The possessiveness has just started...just wait & watch how it culminates. Yep he has been never sure of anything else more than this. Ya the knot is suffocating as well as its important for her too.
Thanks for loving the storyline so much.
Yep sure will do so...⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: nimzaa

well I think he's kind of forcing her.He should try to understand her give her the nreded time .He should free her from that damn marriage of hers and then take other steps .Anyway s good one.Upfate soon

Well you have said it all ...but the point is then the title will not be justified.
And what's love and life without any complications.
Thanks for commenting.
Yep sure just buddy me for PMS.⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: chinnulu

Good Chapter.

Poor Khushi, Arnav is tempting her to give in to her desires towards him which Khushi is trying to control because of the marriage which she is binded to shyam.

Arnav is following Khushi to her home. Waiting to see what happens next. Please continue soon.

Thanks for the PM



Thanks for liking it...Yep she is bonded in her marriage, but she is a woman with strong desires, waiting to be loved and cherished. Yep sure will continue soon.
Your welcome.⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: reshmi24

Awesome

Thanks a lot.⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: roshaan

Very nice update can't wait to read more

Thank you ...sure will update soon.⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome can't wait for the next chapter
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: sheen.sk

first of all welcome to Arshis world..
i m die hard fan of Arshi, so big thanks to writing on them as i m a sucker to Arshi fiction..
really loved it.
its very intresting, beaitiful & very intriguing..
for Shyam
i think something is not right with him as to why he behaving like that with her, will wait to know..
for Arnav
he not just attracted physically to her but have deep emotion for her, & the way he always mention about Jalebies & calling her by that which her nickname, i think he is someone from her past like childhood friend or something
& for Khushi..
what should i say about her, she is binded with a man who didnt give any attention or happiness which she deserve..& feeling something for a man who is not her husband..
really like the way they talk & behave with each other..

waiting for nxt..
& pls add me to ur pm list..

First of all thank you for such a warm welcome.
I am glad this concept has been accepted and loved by all Arshi fanatics.
It's such a heart warming thing for me can't express in words.
Well you have indeed caught up with some past connections.
And please read on to know further ...oh! It was fun writing their convos.
Will update soon.
Yep sure just buddy me for PMS...⭐️