FF___JAB TUNE JHOOT BOLA___Chapter-28 on pg 126 TEASER Pg 137 - Page 42

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Posted: 8 years ago
so marriage is done๐Ÿ˜ƒ
nautanki raman
flashbackโ˜บ๏ธ
overall it was a fabulous update๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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wow... wonderful update...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

waiting for the next one...
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so marriage is done๐Ÿ˜ƒ
nautanki raman
flashbackโ˜บ๏ธ
overall it was a fabulous update๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
update soon


thank youuu... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
Your stories are so different! 
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Originally posted by: Indie2121

Your stories are so different!

Love reading them!


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Posted: 8 years ago
Love this story Gayatri.
You have a gift for writing a thrilling romance. U keep us wanting to want an update everyday. I am addicted to JTJB. 
It's a very gripping, thrilling, romantic, angering (som precaps), exotic story. Ran out of verbs here.
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Originally posted by: monalisa123

Love this story Gayatri.

You have a gift for writing a thrilling romance. U keep us wanting to want an update everyday. I am addicted to JTJB.
It's a very gripping, thrilling, romantic, angering (som precaps), exotic story. Ran out of verbs here.
Keep writing hon


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Will surely update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Kutties...๐Ÿ˜Š

Here is the teaser for the next part

Ignore typos and grammar/spelling errors

Not proofread

Enjoy reading... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ



TEASER



Mrs Bhalla: Angrily, "Shaadi itni jaldi huyi hai toh tu mera beta aur bahu ko dur karne ki koshish kar rahe ho madrasan...?"

(You're trying to separate my son and daughter in law because the marriage happened in a haste?)


Mrs Iyer: "Ayyooo...aise nahi hai Toshi...humare yahan aise sab kuch muhurtam dekhke karte hai"

(Ayyoo...it's not like that Toshi... We does everything according to the muhurtha)


Mrs Bhalla: "Oye...kuch bhi madrasan...! Aise baaton ko koyi muhurat dekhta hai...! Mujhe nah...yeh sab kuch zyada hi lag raha hai..."

(Anything! Anyone looks for muhurtha for such matters! I feels it too much)


Mrs Iyer: "Kaise samjhavun?"

(How to make you understand?)


Mrs Bhalla: "Chotti bachi nahi hun main...samajh main aya mujhe...lekin yeh sab drama mujhe tikh nahi lag raha hun..."

(I'm not a kid. I understood. But I don't like all these drama)

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"Agle hafte raat 10 bajeh se acha muhurtam hai Iyer amma."

(Next week has a good muhurtha from night 10 o'clock)

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Raman: Screams in shock, "Ek haftaaa???? Yeh sab kya bakwas hai?"

(One week???? What's this nonsense?)


Mihika: "Chill nah jiju...just one week ki toh baat hai...FIRST NIGHT special hona chahiyena?"

(Chill jiju... It's just one week. First Night should be special right?)


Raman: Smiling thinking about their passionate rendezvous, "Haan...shaadi ke baad FIRST NIGHT special hona chahiye...!"

(Yes...first night after marriage should be special)

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Mihika: In a puppy face, "Jiju aise kyun kaha akka?"

(Why did jiju say that?)


Ishita: Trying to hide her blush, "Because it's our FIRST NIGHT"

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Mihika to herself: "Mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai jaisa ki donon double meaning mein baat kar rahe hai...? I should find it out."

(Why am I feeing that both are talking in double meaning?)

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"Get out papa..."

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Mr Bhalla: Furiously, "Yeh tune kya kardiya Raman? Abi ke abi nikal lo ise yahan se..."

(What have you done Raman? Shoo him out now itself)


Raman: "Bending down his head, "I'm sorry mummiji...papaji...Yeh mera dost hai... Main iske saath aise nahi kar sakta..."

(He's my friend. I can't do that to him)


Mr Bhalla: Frustratedly, "Toh raho apna dost ke saath... Muh mat dikhana humein."

(Then live with your friend. Don't show your face to us)

Chapter-17



So that's it... ๐Ÿ˜‰

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Edited by Gaya3sb - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very Interesting.
Ummm is that raman trick to trap ishu?? friend ???
Can't wait pls update soon 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Tere pm se phle hi phad liya mai ne ๐Ÿ˜‰ tho yeh bath hai shanthi muhurath ๐Ÿ˜† aur yeh kya tha  I think Raman chupke se ishu se Milne gaya. Aur. Toshi. Ji ne Kuch aur hi samaj liya ๐Ÿ˜‰...ayooo. Why r they talking in double meaning ๐Ÿ˜ฒ update fast yar  I am exited and did u read the update I sent u is it ok ๐Ÿ˜ƒ