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NEW ASAD AND ZOYA STORY:WHEN ONLY LOVE REMAINS PART10 ON PAGE67 (Page 38)

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Posted: 16 June 2015 at 5:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PragnyaKiran...

Originally posted by asya7

Originally posted by PragnyaKiran...

hey titir 
i like ur asya scene and 
the description on moon is  very good
i hv no words to describe ur writting
the last paragraph on moon
"If moon is the real icon of beauty, it has to be the ultimate icon of hope also. After a full moon night, everyday it dies a little to die completely one night, just like we start to come near our death as son as we are born. But this is the time from where moon starts its lesson. The night it dies, it starts to reborn slowly exactly from the next night. This is what moon try to teach us. It teach us to never leave hopes as every death gives birth to a newborn, every end starts a new beginning and every old, unfinished journey reaches its destination through a new yet familiar road and a new journey. A journey of emotions, a journey of hearts , a journey to form new bonds and recognize the old ones."
Hey Titir cn u write a short story on asya whch deals wid life after death concept.
Thanks for this lovely comment dear. I am glad that you are liking it. It really means a lot.Big smile
By the way I have a concept in my mind for a asya story which deals with reincarnation. Please tell me if you like this concept. I guess it somehow fits the concept you asked me to write aboutBig smile
yes i lliked the concept very much.
I am thinking to start this story after this one ends. Will you wait?Smile

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Posted: 16 June 2015 at 7:10am | IP Logged
Love the update 
Aww,the moon so beautiful 
She did keep her promised 
They r by each other but they just don't know 
So love Zoya made asad laugh nice 
He was happy seeing his family laughing 
Oh asad irritating Zoya was to much 
So much work but he still waited for her on a pretence of work 
Love it 
Continue soon

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Posted: 16 June 2015 at 8:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anopama

Love the update 
Aww,the moon so beautiful 
She did keep her promised 
They r by each other but they just don't know 
So love Zoya made asad laugh nice 
He was happy seeing his family laughing 
Oh asad irritating Zoya was to much 
So much work but he still waited for her on a pretence of work 
Love it 
Continue soon
Thanks a lot for this lovely comment. Glad that you liked itBig smile
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Posted: 16 June 2015 at 9:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by bloodyISHQ

Good..
ThanksSmile
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Posted: 17 June 2015 at 2:59am | IP Logged
Another mind blowing update...though the story is adopted but it has your charm with it...!
I love the way you described Moon's presence here!
Their silly promises with their longing for each other all were observed by it silently...
A hope ...yes they will meet and the y will survive...as the moon solely writing their future story together!!
It was really fun to read and I enjoyed every bit of it...
Continue soon and thanks for PM Smile

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Posted: 17 June 2015 at 3:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swapno

Another mind blowing update...though the story is adopted but it has your charm with it...!
I love the way you described Moon's presence here!
Their silly promises with their longing for each other all were observed by it silently...
A hope ...yes they will meet and the y will survive...as the moon solely writing their future story together!!
It was really fun to read and I enjoyed every bit of it...
Continue soon and thanks for PM Smile
Thanks a lot for this lovely comment. It really means a lot that you liked this.Big smile
This is actually not an adoption. The story from which i got this idea ends at the childhood and my story starts from after that. So that story gave me the base to build this story. I have changed many things and have also included many new things like this flashback. But I am really glad that you are finding it enjoyableBig smile
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Posted: 17 June 2015 at 7:07am | IP Logged
WOW! U r amazing writer..
I like ur writing style..
Everything u describe beautifully...
Loved it..
Waiting for Asya next encounter...
Update next soon
thanx for pm..

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Posted: 17 June 2015 at 8:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kanwal4salman

WOW! U r amazing writer..
I like ur writing style..
Everything u describe beautifully...
Loved it..
Waiting for Asya next encounter...
Update next soon
thanx for pm..
Thank you very much for this lovely commemtBig smile

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