Wow...I just read this TS and I am in love with it...beautifully written. ..u managed to tell their entire story in one update...
It was truly a depiction of a married couple. ..where one thing leads to another and before they know their marriage starts crumbling down. ...both of them are same as human beings being equally stubborn didn't help too...
I think u have done a marvellous job with this one...and wonderful characterisation of kabir and ananya. ..
Continue soon...
Pls do pm me whenever you update next. ..