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Posted: 8 years ago
May 23
Title: Green Eyed Monster
Pairing: Vidushi/Parth
(Occurs after Mother Knows Best. Which means Sandhir are a couple)

Parth would have laughed at the kissy faces Randhir was making at his phone.
Only if...
He gritted his teeth.
Namit was back.
That dratted idiot was stick to him like a leech, sucking out his life blood.
Aur uper se he's deaf. FITE mein mat ana ka matlab nahi janta bloody...
Woh thik hai, bachpan se hi ek number ka...
He shook his head. Namit was beyond saving, beyond understanding and definitely beyond redemption.
Aur dusri taraf Vidushi.
That girl.
No not girl, woman.
The woman who was his once upon a time.
"We broke up Parth! Get over it, you have no right to tell me what to do with my life. Just like I never had any right on you." Vidushi had yelled in his face minutes ago and stomped off, leaving him with his right arm raked in nail marks.
They were stinging, but not more than the pain in his head.
Where is she? 
What is she doing now?
Is she with him?
Parth shook his head.
No.. she wouldn't.
His hands immediatly went to his phone to press the 2.
He'd put her on speeddial. 
And then he remembered he'd smashed her phone.
"Are you jealous Parth?" She'd asked, her face mocking but her large eyes full of hope.
He'd scoffed then.
"Me, Jealous? Please. I don't give a damn."
Her face held hurt even as it twisted into a grimace.
"Good, then don't interfere in my life! You are nothing to me."
She'd walked off then, the sound of her heels felt like a slap to his face.
You are nothing to me
Nothing
Nothing.
"Are you jealous Parth?" Sanyukta had asked him as his knuckles turned white in anger, watching  Vidushi walk to Namit and be embraced.
He had his hands all over Vidushi, locked at her waist.
"No, I don't care." Parth had hissed.
Randhir had glared at Parth and pulled Sanyukta away.
"Admit it, you are jealous Parth." Randhir said at night, smirking.
"No I'm not. Namit is a bad person, she needs to stay away from him." Parth hit the punching bag so hard it flew off the wall and hit the floor with a thud.
He'd been hitting it for an hour, imagining it was Namit's face. Or his chest. or his Hands. 
He wanted to rip that basketcase's hands off as well as other appendages.
And part of him wanted to throw Vidushi into a room and lock her up.
To keep her safe.
"Are you jealous Parthu?" Namit's tone was playful, his eyes shining with cruel mirth.
"She's not your toy Namit, stay the hell away!" Parth'd grabbed his collar.
"Is she your favourite toy then Parth, still don't like to share?" Namit laughed 
"I'll kill you if you.." Parth hissed.
"You won't. You are too much of a saint, Tai Chi Baba." Namit had pulled himself out of Parth's grip and smirked "And you know what they say about good guys my hero? Good guys finish last..wait...you are not a good guy to her, not anymore. You are just her annoying ex"
Namit walked away, whistling.
Parth knew that tune.
He despised it.
Jealous
Jealous.
He was
Trying to protect her
Jealous.
He was 
Keeping her from harm.
Jealous.
And she was.
His.
She knew it.
He knew it.
He'd never admit he was jealous, he couldn't give her the satisfaction.
But not saying it didn't restrict him from showing it did it?

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Posted: 8 years ago
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This effort needs a huge applause.
The first drabble on vidarth is simply awesome.
I dont read sandhir works usually. Since u have written i'll read them.
Till then this post is reserved... 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nyc 1 ash luv it aisehi vidarth likhte rehe n iske peheleka bhi acha tha :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for the scrap! 😃
Fabulous piece! An apt title, by the way! 😉 


I loved how SanDhir attempted to knock some sense into our thick-headed LoverBoy! 😆 Namit seems like a sexual predator, from how you described him. Will you be delving more into the brothers' past in your future drabbles? I would love to read more of what actually caused the friction between the two.


Deny how much ever you want, Parthy, you ARE jealous! 😆 Loved the nickname, by the way! Taichi Baba! 😆 


Eagerly waiting for the sequel to this! 😃 You know why! 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yipeee we got jealous parth
U know from the time parth is behaving as a complete jerk to vids I was wtng to see table turns
He had so much fun in hurting her
Bt now ball is in her court

Really uska face dkhne layak hota h whenever vids is with namit
Burning like a coal



Yesterday fight when he was stopping her to go away with namit was superb

Poor boy kya kya kia use rokane k lia

Now I'm loving it



No matter how much he's insecure he's not going to admit he's jealous
Boys and their big fat ego



Arrrggghhh ladki haath se jyegi tbhi akaal ayegi



Really lovely drabble
Full on entertaining


Yr write sum thing on dream team I'm missing their spark


Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 8 years ago
Friday fun in office.. Less work.. So commenting before weekend. 😆

My.. My.. Ash.. You are on a roll ..!!.. Awesome drabbles.. Ek se badhkar ek saare. Be it any character of the show.. You wrote on all and beautifully. Fabulous writings and flawless too. Waise to sabhi bahut acchhe hain.. Including Sandhir's.. But there are two drabbles that gave me a pleasant shock. To be honest those drabbles are something I never thought you'll ever write. And I am lucky to read these write ups. Thanks for giving me the link.


1. Title:  Mind over Matter. 

Thoughts of Sahil on each pair. Sahil hardly gets screen space (which is basically good for his role otherwise he would also be butchered by CVs) . So reading his thought process was a blissful experience. His descriptions about every couple is so apt. So perfect ⭐️. Smoooth like his dance moves. 👏 👏 👏 👏

Highlight of this drabble :-

Sahil /OC pairing. 😲 (This one line I read five times making sure if I am reading properly) .. You writing about an OC with Sahil took me back to the days when you had said you don't like people pairing established characters with their own trash original characters.. that it makes you hate those Original Characters. Lucky for Sahil and this OC girl.. Sahil is not paired with anyone in the show 😆. Double Lucky for this OC girl and Ish of your other FF (I forgot the name of that FF) .. for they get to be paired with Sahil. 😉 

2. Title:  Judgement.
Pairing: Parth centric

What a amazing piece of writing this is. 👏 ⭐️ Simply awesome. Focusing on Parth's morals .. was a treat to read. And you did full justice to it. What words.. What depth. Awesome work. His equations with everyone beautifully penned down. Yep he is a man of honor and commitment and that's a rare rare quality in today's guyz. Sadly people in the forum finds it irritating, annoying and unreal. 😔 .. You have dived wonderfully into his mind. 👏

Parth's pathos is that he is bashed for being a moralistic person.. What an irony when the whole country cribs about immoral politicians and ministers. The biggest joke being CVs showing that a person with morals and no over hunger for money will end up being a garage mechanic. 🥱 🤔 

Highlight of this drabble :-

You gasped for not bashing Parth and I was stunned for the same. Have read this drabble 10 times till now. No gaali, no abuse to Parth. 😲  My goodness.. Must have been a mind paining experience for you to write this drabble.. Like Physically painful. 😲
Finally, jaise minorities ko reservation mein upliftment milta hai , Parth finally gets a positive drabble on 1% quota. 🤣.  Ganga nahaa aayega Parth.. From not deserving Vidushi ... to using Vidushi ... to he is still not over Arpita yet... to he should die ... to he is a douchebag.. to now THIS.. What journey man.. 😆 😆 😆 😆 .. Sau Chammat ke baad.. Pyaar ke meethe bol mile use.. No wonder Ankit headed to Panchmani for a trip.. Jannat mil gayee use.. 🤣

Awesome write ups.. Sandhir, Vidarth, Kabir all shined. Keep up the good work. !!.. 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: Gudakesha

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This effort needs a huge applause.
The first drabble on vidarth is simply awesome.
I dont read sandhir works usually. Since u have written i'll read them.
Till then this post is reserved... 


Firstly, thanks. I don't know what I've done to deserve your applause, but I'll take it.
And secondly, I don't write Sandhir often or read them. 
So you reading this means a hell lot to me,
Waiting for this to be unresed!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: shreyad27

Nyc 1 ash luv it aisehi vidarth likhte rehe n iske peheleka bhi acha tha :)


Thanks for reading Shreya!
I'll try to keep up this time!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: FireNIce

Thanks for the scrap! 😃

Fabulous piece! An apt title, by the way! 😉 


I loved how SanDhir attempted to knock some sense into our thick-headed LoverBoy! 😆 Namit seems like a sexual predator, from how you described him. Will you be delving more into the brothers' past in your future drabbles? I would love to read more of what actually caused the friction between the two.


Deny how much ever you want, Parthy, you ARE jealous! 😆 Loved the nickname, by the way! Taichi Baba! 😆 


Eagerly waiting for the sequel to this! 😃 You know why! 😉

 No problemo! 
Coming up with proper titles is sorta like naming a baby, it has to be just right!
Glad you liked it!

Vidarth have always been like blind leading blind when it comes to advising SanDhir and I wanted to be role reversal lol.

Namit. Yesh. He's creepy, but there is something about that smirk I tell you. This guy has a delicious secret and I have many theories. May write something for Namit soon. I dunno.
Ah, Parth Namit Tashan, I find it bloody intriguing. Who knows, a teenage Namit and Parth might just...slip in somewhere.
TaiChi Baba is what Sandhir ppl call Parth, it was developed During Sarth Phase.
I don't hate Parth but somehow Namit calling Parth that seemed so proper.

There's a sequel to the sequel and I think I'll be posting something soon!
 
Enjoy!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: newmoon18

Yipeee we got jealous parth
U know from the time parth is behaving as a complete jerk to vids I was wtng to see table turns
He had so much fun in hurting her
Bt now ball is in her court

Really uska face dkhne layak hota h whenever vids is with namit
Burning like a coal



Yesterday fight when he was stopping her to go away with namit was superb

Poor boy kya kya kia use rokane k lia

Now I'm loving it



No matter how much he's insecure he's not going to admit he's jealous
Boys and their big fat ego



Arrrggghhh ladki haath se jyegi tbhi akaal ayegi



Really lovely drabble
Full on entertaining


Yr write sum thing on dream team I'm missing their spark


Love u
Keep smiling


Yesh, He's getting his just deserts now  and they are anything but sweet.
I've always prefered the AYM version of Parth rather than the sweet one.
Past few days have been a treat!

Glad you enjoyed the drabble!