Originally posted by: Gudakesha-------------Reserved--------------
This effort needs a huge applause.The first drabble on vidarth is simply awesome.I dont read sandhir works usually. Since u have written i'll read them.Till then this post is reserved...
Originally posted by: shreyad27Nyc 1 ash luv it aisehi vidarth likhte rehe n iske peheleka bhi acha tha :)
Originally posted by: FireNIceThanks for the scrap! 😃
Fabulous piece! An apt title, by the way! 😉I loved how SanDhir attempted to knock some sense into our thick-headed LoverBoy! 😆 Namit seems like a sexual predator, from how you described him. Will you be delving more into the brothers' past in your future drabbles? I would love to read more of what actually caused the friction between the two.Deny how much ever you want, Parthy, you ARE jealous! 😆 Loved the nickname, by the way! Taichi Baba! 😆Eagerly waiting for the sequel to this! 😃 You know why! 😉
Originally posted by: newmoon18Yipeee we got jealous parth
U know from the time parth is behaving as a complete jerk to vids I was wtng to see table turns
He had so much fun in hurting her
Bt now ball is in her court
Really uska face dkhne layak hota h whenever vids is with namit
Burning like a coal
Yesterday fight when he was stopping her to go away with namit was superb
Poor boy kya kya kia use rokane k lia
Now I'm loving it
No matter how much he's insecure he's not going to admit he's jealous
Boys and their big fat ego
Arrrggghhh ladki haath se jyegi tbhi akaal ayegi
Really lovely drabble
Full on entertaining
Yr write sum thing on dream team I'm missing their spark
Love u
Keep smiling
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