A thin Line-A Siyali fanfiction

shakthi217 Newbie

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Posted: 06 May 2015 at 10:16pm | IP Logged

Namaste! This is my first forum fanfic, and honestly I don't know Hindi. I'm a fanfiction and Wattpad writer and please note that my style of writing is different from the others. The story contains some explicit contents so don't read it if you don't like it.
The light which passed through the curtains blinded the lass' eyes. The cold hard mattress beneath her was pretty old restricting any kind of sleep. Her clothes were old and torn with a hint of ashes and grease over her white top. The first thing she see's when she opens her eyes is the uneven cement wall, it was neither even nor painted, and the curtains were as bad as her clothes. Amongst all these un-satisfied facilities she sits, just like every other morning for the past two years. She was beautiful, the kind of beauty that would even make Aphrodite jealous, but that never worked in her favor, it worked against her.

She was beautiful, the kind of beauty that would make the strongest of men go crazy. She built a lot of walls so that no one would see the real her, but none of them lasted, they weren't meant to, but they were supposed to. She was kind, the type of kindness which would light the darkest soul and mend hearts, the type of kindness which was envied by all being. She meant no harm, inspite of all the sufferings, she still meant no harm. She was a dreamer, the type of dreams that would change the whole world, she was living her dream until that dream was envied. Along with that dream, she lost her voice. Not immediately, not even when her dream got crushed but when her life did. She had so much of light around her which was admired by a few, hated by a lot.

But now she lost everything, she didn't know who she is anymore, all the hope in her eyes were drained by the people who claimed that they love her, the people who broke the walls that she build, and the worst part is...she let them, and when they broke she was happy. The dream which hid behind the walls were crushed, she was happy even then, but that happiness was envied by a lot, not by her happiness but the person who gave that to her, the one who broke down her walls the one who crushed her dreams...the one who stole her voice.

The door to her room opened revealing her caretaker, caretaker; she brings her rotten vegetables everyday and didn't care whether she ate or not, she refuses to give her blankets and take her out. She won't blame her though, considering the fact that she's being paid to be harsh. The other caretakers were harsher and her caretaker was barely a pint of them. Though she didn't voice it out loud suspiciously grew within her, she was early today and she only visits to deliver her food.

"You have a visitor" she haven't got a lot of visitors, even if she gets, it's usually the ones who made sure that her life's miserable. She doesn't ask a lot of questions, she just obeys. Knowing that she can't answer her caretaker grabs her arm and helps her up.

She lived in Dras, Kashmir; the city which is known for terrorism, merciless cold and Komplikovan zpsob' a place filled with drug addicts, murderers, retarded, serial killers, stalkers who were taught about humanity and life the hard way. But they needed help she didn't, she won't blame them though she had to blame the person she fell for. He was there when the times were good but when life got harder he wasn't around.                                                                                                                                     

She walked carefully through the garden filled with perennials, the kind which could withstand the coldest of winters. Her fur coat hung loosely around her fragile body as she walked through the slippery snowy ground and sat at the coffee table at the far corner. She looked down at her cup of coffee and begun to stir slowly, mostly thinking.

 Her name's Siyali, she's a student in warrior high or atleast she was, she was first in her class, pretty good dancer and athlete. Though she was kind she never made friends in the beginning. However, she had her best friends Niti and Utkarsh, Parth tagged along later. She made though the first week with the help of her teacher Veebha Anand, though Ms.Kamini was strict she had a soft spot for them, she later won every ones trust and friendship except Krissane, considering the fact that her boyfriend has taken a liking towards her. Siddharth Rajput took a liking towards Siyali from the beginning. Like way beginning... 
 Hope you liked it.  

Peace out


Edited by shakthi217 - 06 May 2015 at 10:46pm

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cooljav1234 Senior Member

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Posted: 06 May 2015 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
Nice I like it plz do write more Smile
A.Green IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 May 2015 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
Nice one..
But u mentioned explicit content i doubt if it is allowed on the forum!! Just saying no offence ur writing is really good.

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EuphoricDamsel. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 12:29am | IP Logged
Plz dont stop.
Continue soon.
ankusanu IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 12:50am | IP Logged
Liked it
ArHianSidYali Senior Member

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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 1:01am | IP Logged
Really awesome ! would to love to read more ! Clap

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