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YuvAni FF- Falling Apart- Part 4, p.7 (Page 5)

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 10:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by princessmanu

Sooper se oooper!!Clap Loved it!!
Great job Mehwish dear!!
Do update soonHug


 thanks Manu Big smile

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 10:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rumu

First of all sorry for commenting late and the credit goes to my internet connectionAngry...

Do u know I cried while reading this part again..The way you described Suhani's pain was Amazing..My heart broke when she said 'You hurt me,when you touch me'. In this part I could feel both their pain. 
Yuvi is hurt to for hurting her badly..He can't see her like this..Loved what Sharad said..
And the last part Yuvi showered and Suhani trying to get up Embarrassed
Day DreamingTongue kuch hoga kya ? Big smileEmbarrassed Why did you stop here dear? Tongue 
pleaseee update sooon ...
love u...



 Awww you cried??? Cry Hugsss ur too sweet Rumu. Sharad rocks. We need to find him a wife soon so he can get a partner in crime.

 Kuch hoga kya? LOL U know me naa

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 10:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by divyareddy123

another lovely update
i knw u never dissappoint ur readers
i read dz part early in d mrg itself but unable to comment bcoz im newbie
suhani in drunken state as i always wish either suhani or yuvraj to drunk
emotions will cm out in drunken state and u did it perfectly in ur ff
i wish u could be one of d writers of ssel these cvs dnt knw wat to give to viewers
waiting for nextupdate
can i get up again early tmrw for nxt part??


 Yes Divya I'm going to update so you can get up early for the next part EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

 I also want to see one of them drunk. I actually also don't rly care who it is...him or her.

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Part 3:

 

"Do you need water?" I asked. I touched her forehead. It felt cool. She shook her head. With everything that had been weighing on her heart now out of her system, she smiled sweetly and hugged me.

"I need you..." She said. It didn't sound like her so I knew she wasn't in her senses just yet. I was still taken aback by what she had just said. "I need you..." She repeated. This time it sounded like she was begging.

"Suhani..." I tried to make her lay down again but she refused. "Touch me. I love you." She said. I shook my head.

"You said you hate it when I touch you." I said. She looked confused. She giggled. "That's impossible..." She replied in the most carefree manner. She jumped into my arms again. "I want you so much..." She whispered into my ear. Her confession was in a totally intoxicated state, yet it excited me in a way that nothing had ever before. I didn't know what to do.

She kissed my cheek. I swallowed hard. "Suhani, go back to sleep. It's late." I ordered her. She shook her head and refused, like a petulant child. Her innocence was so appealing. I tried to gently coax her into lying down again but she was adamant.

"Suhani, you're drunk. I'm not going to listen to you in this condition." I said. She giggled. Why was she so adorable? I smiled. "You never listen to me."

"Tell me what you want me to do, and your wish is my command." She said, seductively. I blushed. This definitely wasn't sober Suhani. She tried getting up and staggered to her feet and fell. I caught her.

"I love it when I fall and you catch me." She said. "Yayyy!" She clapped. I watched as she celebrated and ran off. I ran behind her. She ran into the bathroom and locked the door. She turned on the shower. I knocked.

"Suhani! Open the door. What are you doing?"

"It's raining!" She replied. I laughed. This was the cutest thing ever. I smiled. She opened the door slowly and peeked out.

"What's the password?" She asked.

"Um, Samosas?" I said.

"Wrong." She replied. "One more try..." She said.

"I don't know." I said. She opened the door and grabbed my hand and pulled us both under the shower.

"Look, Yuvraj...it's raining!" She said. I smiled and she hugged me. Both of us got wet. She opened a bottle of body wash and tried pouring it on both of us. I managed to hide that from her. I held her arm. She was wet from head to toe, fully drenched. Her hair was sticking to her face. I moved closer to her and held her face.

"Enough, ok? No more games. It's late. You need to sleep." I said in a stern voice.

She clung to me and refused to listen. She grabbed my face and kissed me. I kissed her back softly a few times. I turned off the shower although she objected as much as she could. I gave her a towel.

"Dry off, please. You can't sleep this way. You'll get sick." It was late and her clothes were in Maa's room. I gave her mine, which she refused to wear.

"Suhani, you'll get sick."

"Your clothes are ugly." She said. She pouted. She refused to change which was extremely problematic for me. If she slept like that with the air-conditioning on, she'd get sick.

"You can't make me change." She said.

"Oh God, that was some alcohol Rags Bhabhi mixed into your juice." I mumbled.

I gave her my clothes and closed the lights. "Ok, you change, please...and I'll wait." I said. She took a few minutes and finally said she was ready. I turned on the light and saw her lying on her stomach on our bed, with my clothes on, which didn't fit her properly. I climbed into bed beside her and she faced me. She looked adorable with my white tee-shirt and black sweats.

"It's loose...how do you wear it?" She said. I smiled. "It's ok. Just sleep." I told her.

I lay down and she climbed on top of me and sat on my stomach. She moved closer to me and looked into my eyes.


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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 10:55am | IP Logged
I lay down and she climbed on top of me and sat on my stomach. She moved closer to me and looked into my eyes.

Stern SmileStern SmileStern SmileStern Smile

THAT IS SOME HOT SHIT GIRLStern Smile





if she was just in a shirt of his n sat on his stomach that would kill my insidesBlushing



i cant even think wat u have for part 4LOL

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 10:57am | IP Logged
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Nehiii !!!!! You can't stop here!!!!!!! Nooo !!!!!!
 Omg !!!!! what did you just write ? Do you have any idea how beautiful this was? An extremely sexy update jaanemaanBig smile..

Suhani telling him to touch her and she needs her gave me goosebumps again..And I m blushing madly Embarrassed...Wow ! Alcohol made her super bold and I really loved her this way.. Catching and falling scene always makes me happy..

And then the shower scene (Why can't we get something like this in the show ?Ouch) this was funny,sweet and very sexyEmbarrassed...So they kissed..He kissed her backBig smileEmbarrassedEmbarrassed(wow)...

Suhani is in his clothes Blushing..I wanted him to help her wearing his clothes but no problem..He can also help her to get rid of her clothes TongueBig smileEmbarrassed any time ( u understand what i meanLOL)

And Last scene is killing me now...Why Why Why did u stopped here ?????Cry

Awesome update as usual..
want the next part sooon !!!!!!!!!! Heart



Edited by rumu - 08 May 2015 at 11:24am

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 11:06am | IP Logged
What can I say another great update she is so cute and adorable when she is drunk

It would be nice to see suhani drunk in the show hope that happens one day

Yuvraj is sweet he is trying to be strict with her but he can't which is cute

Suhani running in the shower lol, she thinks it's raining, she is so carefree if only we got to see that in the show it would be brilliant

I hope one day we get to see them both in the shower that will be nice

Her wearing his clothes complaining it's too big lol

Suhani sitting on his stomach wow I can't wait to read what happens next

Hope we get the next update tomorrow can't wait thank you for this brilliant update

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I am probably going to melt by Chapter 5 Embarrassed

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