~Hamari Adhuri Kahaani~ A SanDhir Colaab FF Chapter 1 on page 8 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetynith

Interesting prologue. Short n sweet. Waiting eagerly fr chapters. Pls pm me too. Gud luck gals :)

Luv,
Nithu


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ikshu

nice one

continue soon


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Posted: 8 years ago

Hola ppl, this is the very first chapter of our collab.

Hope u like it!!

Hamari Adhuri Kahaani

CHAPTER- 1



SHIMLA, INDIA

 

There she was sitting in her balcony, remembering the blissful moments of her life with him which now seems to be nothing but painful memories .Although she claims to hate him but still her heart beats for him.

"Why you came in my life ?? Why you broke my trust ?? why u left me??" she asked, but her questions went unanswered.

She again went to memory lane of here past.

 

"Geez!! You are freezing to death Sanyu" said vidushi , wrapping a shawl around sanyukta.

"Ahh vidushi!! You are up, isn't it quite early for u??" asked sanyukta seeing her best friend.

"Ya I thought to give you a surprise. You know vidushi bhi jaldi uth sakti h" said vidushi raising her invisible collar.

"Ya YA why not??"said sanyu smiling.

"Keep smiling sanyu. You look good while smiling" said vidushi.

Thoughts of him again started lingering on her mind. She can't help but remember how he used to compliment her.

"You still remembering him" asked a worried  vidushi.

"NO. I don't remember him now. He is nothing but a pain nd I hate him" said sanyukta, bursting out her feelings.

"Achha OK ok. Now you get ready ,you have to go for your internship "said vidushi changing the topic.

"Arrghh!! This internship, hotel management waalon ko internship ki kya jaroorat hai,anyways, you please find someone for our guest house naa" said sanyu.

"But you have to go sanyu.And don't worry about guest house, I guess by tomorrow or the day after tomorrow guest house me koi na koi rehne aa hi jaaega"said vidushi.

"Ohk so I'll and freshen up" said sanyu.

"OK"said vidushi.

"Though you pretend to hate him, I know you still love him.This is your daily routine to sit long in the balcony remembering him.I know u'll never tell me, but sanyu I promise I'll make your life lively and happening again" vidushi made a promise to herself.



 VANCOUVER, CANADA

He stood there in his cabin, looking out of the window, drowned in the memories of past or to be more precised drowned in her memories.

"I don't know where are u or I may know?? I don't have the courage to face you neither I have courage to face your hatred??"he said venting out his feelings.

"Randhir where you lost??" asked parth.

"Umm nowhere.You tell how's your project going on?" said rd.

"Well I've finished my this project and now boss wants to send us on a new project"Said parth excitedly.

"Why you are sounding so excited ,dude??' asked rd.

"B-e-c-a-u-s-e Our new project is in INDIA" said parth.

"INDIA" word made a chill ran through his spine .Her never leaving  thoughts again occupied his heart as well as his mind.

"Dude u know na how much I love India and finally I am going to Indian as an Professional engineer.

"said parth again.

"Yaa I know!! But do I have to go with you" asked randhir.

"Because you are the best engineer of Vancouver an d I want no excuse from you .You are coming with me" said parth , being stubborn like a child.

"Ohhk.I've work , so I finish that first .Uhh When is our flight ?" asked randhir curiously.

" Tomorrow. Be ready" said parth.

"hmm ohhk" saying this he went from there.

" You are very bad at expressing , my brother and  you expressing your feelings in front of me is something that is never gonna happen. I know u still think about that girl.Years back, that girl has left an permanent print on your heart.I have already arranged everything and believe me your life will be back on track" said parth to himself.



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Edited by Frozen_Flames - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ress


Unress
Yipee moi first
Party tym

Moi dancing and jumping

Bt I won't take the credit
Sweeto anu thanks for informing luckily I got first ress

Love u and tight wala hug



Now coming to the update
It was awsme


After all two awsme writers r writing it
Toh blockbuster hona hi h



It was short bt nice
Intro of sandhir life

Sanyu lost in rd thoughts
She pretends to hate him
Bt deep down she knows she can never hate him

Her love is more powerful then any other emtn


Awww vids she cares for sanyu so much
I loved their bond

Rd in Vancouver
He's also drowned in sanyu memories
He's guilty
He don't have strength to face her


Excited to know what hppnd in the past

He's coming back to India


Vidharth wants their friend to be happy that means they r going to play cupid for them


I guess PaRan will be living in SanVid guest house as new guest


Excited for next
Update soon

Love u guys
Keep smiling Edited by newmoon18 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
res/unres
at last it started...
waiting for SANDHIR meet..!!
update soon..!!
and do pm me..!!
love u both...!!

not to forget 
me second...!!!

Edited by nidhi.nidsnicks - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
D very first update stole my heart!!πŸ€—πŸ€—
so beautifully penned πŸ‘πŸ‘
ohhh...sandhir can never forget each other!! But wats d real matter??
vidarth acting as true frndsπŸ˜ƒ
awrsome girlsπŸ‘
update soonyπŸ˜›
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Posted: 8 years ago
the first part is superb... lvd it soo much..
update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
it's superb lovely lovely lovely
lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely

awesome, fab, lovely part
very very nice and interesting.

sandhir intro just amazing
sanyu pretends to hate RD but reality's she loves him

vidhushi try her best... but sanyu never confess anything front of vidhs

other side Rd's also same 
he's guilty 
he miss sanyu.

poor sandhir... akir unka bich huya kya tha??
 Rd and Parth india ana bala

i hope sandhir meeting jaldi hi ho.

you penned it amazingly
you both are really superb writer 

love it. update asap.😊
thanks Anu for informing me.😳 
 
  
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome
superb update
continue asap :)))
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Aww Anshi n Anu.. A tight hug for both πŸ€— πŸ€—
U stole the stage on ur first update 
Really enthralling.. 
I can't get ovr it 
Read it twice... Love it ❀️
So I think randhir's gonna occupy the guest house? 
Sanyukta hates him but not her heart 
Randhir luvs her but scared of her..
Is he guilty? 
Various thoughts r running in my mind 
Jaldi post the next puleej 
No late update 
Thx for scrap anu :)

Luv
Chandu