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Originally posted by: PanchaliKaArjunAree wah . You all stalked and res . Very good I don need to pm ๐
And unres everyone . ๐ณ Don forget na. ๐
omg ? Mou I shall award you ! For the longest comment every k !Originally posted by: SonatiaRes
putra itna bada dussahas ??
Mughe pm nahi ki :x
but I am really really very very happy that finally mera putra ne update kia *damn exited to read but mera timing wrong hai :( i have math wala tuision
now*
I will be back to jump on ur FF tonight ;)Unres๐
So sorry putra ji for being late kal so gaye thi dinner karte and could not come here๐ญ
So you finally updated huh?๐
and the update was so awesome ๐romantic and as well as damn interesting.๐ณ
I should learn from you๐
pata hai when you told me you are updating I was like๐ฅฑ ye toh tu hamesha kehti hai "I am trying my best to update" but I am so happy the update is real๐๐I thought i was dreaming
so stop idhar udhar ki bate lets start from the line you started the update๐
it was so so so beautiful you stole my heart re it is so awesome.๐
~She survived because the fire inside her burned brighter than the fire around her~
i loved the part where you know drau fails to recognize arya's hand. mughe toh pehle se hi pata tha ye arya ka hand hai. ๐
it was so cute ehen arya says i'm hurt wala line . ๐he must have looked like a puppy making puppy eyes *aww*๐ณ
and then the part where drau gets shocked. ๐ฒ๐
A voice which sent hundreds and thousands of butterflies flying in Draupadi 's stomach .
pata hai mai hoti toh mera bhi aisa haal hota.๐๐
when arya says he found out that drau was alone i was like *Yeaay they are gonna kiss*
and I loved the line so muchโค๏ธ
"I found out that you were alone so thought to give you company but looks like something is more interesting than me "
@pink specially pink wala part๐๐คฃ
Aww ardi can't stay away from each other
"I missed you . "
"Me too . It's been 24 hours 38 minutes and exactly 42 seconds since I have seen you , held you and ..."
"And ? "
And my guess was right *jumps (but I should be jealous)*
Just then he pressed his lips against hers , before blowing into her ears "and kissed you "
I knew it yeaay
This was the part I enjoyed the most๐
You wrote it so awesome Wahh putra๐
Loved every bit of it and the part where daru exclaims the book I was like clapping my hands Pata hai I like the most when drau sends angry look to arya๐
"Oh this book ! Yeah the brother of the hero is the killer . You know there are four killers . He is one of them ! And his partner was the heroine 's sister in law . You know they had a affair and ..." Arjun bit his tongue looking at the 'are you serious ? I will kill you ' look in her eyes . it was pata hai one of my favourite moments in the whole part
"Anything . I mean we can go out or you know ..." "No I don't want to go out of my house . Lets do something here . " "Hmm I wouldn't say no " he said winking at her all the while pointing towards her bed naughtily. "Arya ! Lets watch a movie . Maybe horror ?" "No lets watch the star.
It was the most beautiful moment of the whole part I just can imagine how beautiful they must have looked when they were watching stars. ๐ณYou write so simple moments but so beautifully I think tere hath me jadu hai.๐
"Do people really turn into stars after they die ? " Panchali asked curiously as she ran her hands in Arjun's hair.
Aww how romantic .
They were lying in a bed sheet in her terrace . On one side was a basket of grapes and berries and on the other was a bottle of French wine Arjun thought would go best with the evening . "I don't know , why ? " he replied taking her hands in his and placing a soft kiss.
Just awesome re and that part where arya becomes serious It was damn awesome and how protective he sounded๐ณ๐ณ๐
"But whatever happens " he said with a serious face after their laughter died "whatever happens I will walk right by you side . We will never leave each other in any state "
And then the part when Arya says he have 3 gifts for Drau I was like it should be three magical words ๐
Loved the gift wala game Ardi played wih each other.๐ณ๐
I am speechless how beautifully you wrote everything๐๐
I love you re. ๐ค
And this one was epic I mean heart of the part.๐คฃ๐ I thought they would kiss but Arya ?๐ณ
You are really a devil๐ก๐ก๐ก
She looked at him and kneeled down . Panchali ran her hands in his face . His beautiful hazels . She slowly placed a kiss in his eye lids and he closed it feeling her wet lips . Then she moved to his nose . Panchali pulled Arjun's nose and laughed as he looked at her confused . She placed a kiss in his nose then moved towards his lips . Her fingers played with his soft oral organ and as she bent down to press hers against his it seemed as if the time had stopped . Their lips were about to meet...
"Times up ! " his husky voice made Panchali open her eyes . "What ? " "Times up . Your time is up madam . " "What , that's ridiculous ! We didn't set any time ! " "We hadn't . I had . Otherwise you wouldn't be able to take off your hands and eyes off this handsome face "replied Arjun smirking while Draupadi rolled her eyes . "You devil ! "
Loved the next satya and drau part So much. ๐๐ณIt was really very interesting.๐ And I really proud of drau she saved the poor girl but my blood was really boiling at that part loved how drau slapped that filthy mouthed.๐ก
"You girls are nothing but wh*re . And wh*re don't have any self respect so stop protecting what's not yours . "
Kuch log kavi nahi badalte kavi nahi.๐ก I hate that man. You will have a horrible death, I swear.๐ก
I felt really bad for her when she gets the visions of past. ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ
Panchali stood there , confused , angered , and disappointed as the flashes of her past played in front of her eyes . Slowly she got what she was seeing . Slowly she felt her surrounding and herself . Slowly her inner soul recognised her old self and re connected with it .
I am speechless.๐ณ๐ Itne din baad I got to read my fav FF.๐ณ please update soon. ๐You used to update almost in each and every week.๐ญ๐ญ I really miss that.๐ญ๐ญ I can't wait for the next part.๐
Update soon Sam .๐ณ please?
Love you.โค๏ธ
thanks ๐ and yes Panchali is getting flashbacks . ๐Originally posted by: Nonie12345Fantastic chapter Sam
Looks like Panchali is getting flashbacksโญ๏ธ
thank you so much . Hahaha I know right . People love spoiling others read like Arjun did ๐Originally posted by: ShreejataD.Nice update๐
The book portion was funny๐ if anyone spoiled the story like that I would be really furious๐กNow Draupadi will come across the villains.๐๐ฒJust wanted to know will they still be in a negative role always?๐ฒ
thank you ๐Originally posted by: Nonie12345Awesome update Sam๐
aww thank you so much . ๐ณOriginally posted by: mishreeI read all parts of your ff
It is awesome and wonderfulI love the Krishna part very muchUpdate soon
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