This content was originally posted by: PriyaCherryThanks for PM.π
It was So Lovely OS.π³The way Ishita missing Raman was so Beautifully explained.π³The Song was so Nice.πThe Whole Os was so Lovely explained,I Loves it.π³Please write Like this On Ishra and Pm to me.πPriyaCherry.
This content was originally posted by: aarohi26res
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first of all, welcome back aani di. saw you after so many days. I was missing your writing but you compensate it in very beautiful manner. I have seriously no words to describe its beauty. first of all the main attraction of your writing is your detailing. you detailed each and every thing so precisely and beautifully and I am fan of your that quality.
now back to update, it was a perfect mixture of source and sweet moments of ishra. the pain of separation and the eagerness of intimacy and closeness are two different emotions and you took them parallely and executed them beautifully.
I liked their eagerness to meet each other. ishita day dreaming for her hubby, to feel him near her, it is a normal emotion of every wife who loves her husband. their cute banter suddenly went on mihir rinky topic was nice. this was a normal talk which happened between every husband wife. because I witnessed same scenario in my home also
I was laughing when they both talked about his Mumbai arrival for acting. puttar wants to tease biwi but our biwi is more smarter then puttar. the last paragraphs was so cute. Raman concern was so cute. one side he was worried for his wife health and other side he was all set to surprise her. now waiting for Raman's comeback in show. thanx di for this beautiful writing.
This content was originally posted by: ATTITUDEBABYThat was one cute and romantic part. Absolutely loved it!
This content was originally posted by: shalz_123such a beautiful piece...
ooh an a closure to his angry outburst too...lovely... thank u aani for writing this...made my day...π
This content was originally posted by: cloudy24Most romantic and simple long distance loveπ lovinv it to the coreπ
This content was originally posted by: lovableloveBaby! I really want you to continue this please , i really want to read further!! Do continue soon
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