Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


29priya Goldie

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Posted: 05 May 2015 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
hi guyz...m priya...I have read many amazing stories on maneet and thought of starting my own..I have 3 stories on going on Arsh...and now I want to write on them...I may not be good like other writers here...but I can try right...hope u all give me a chance and read this...'fingers crossed'


A girl who was crying on her fate..she was totally broken and torn from inside...and who wouldn't be...any girl on her place would have killed one could ever bear this...but she couldn't do this...she couldn't snatch someone's happiness for her own..
the girl was sitting on the floor and clutching the bed sheet hard...she was digging her nails in her fist...while trying to not make a noise while crying...

and then someone enter in her dark room...
geet old lady called...while putting a hand on her shoulder...
geet after hearing her voice...looked up at her while her face was soaked eith tears...and wishpered..'kkkaki ma'in her broken voice...hugged her hard while sobbing very hard...
kaki-bas puttar tera faisla tha ab tu kamzor kyu par rahi hai...she said careesing geet's head..
geet-mmai jja...janti hoon...par main kya karu..mai...mai..geet was not able to complete her sentence...
kaki-mai janti hu ye assan nhi...par..tune ye rashta khud chuna hai...
geet-haan...kyuki unki khushi mai hi meri khushi hai...agar wo anayaji ke ke saath khush rahenge to mai vi unkivkhushi mai khush reh lungi...mai unke liye kuch vi kar sakti hu...kuch vi..she said with determination.
kaki ma-iske liye tune apne pati ki dusri shaadi ke liye haan kehdi...kuch nhi kaha tune kisi se...bas chup chap sab kuch seh liya...
yes today is the marriage of MAAN SINGH KHURANA with his girlfriend ANAYA MEHTA and she is GEET KHURANA his ex-wife and childhood friend...
so here is the hugeee its up to u to like and comment



Edited by pri.29793 - 13 June 2015 at 7:38am

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harshu... IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 14 January 2015
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Posted: 05 May 2015 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
Interesting start ,
Nice prologue !!! ,
Maan is getting married with someone else:(

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taahir004 IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 12 April 2012
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Posted: 05 May 2015 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
Interesting Prologue

Geet is Maan's ex wife and now he is going to marry someone else
but why what happened as Maan and Geet are also childhood friends
does he not love her

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khwaishfan IF-Addictz

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Posts: 58959

Posted: 05 May 2015 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
congrats! interesting prologue! update soon! Feeling 4 Geet! Maan is getting married! she is ex wife n childhood friend! Geet wants his happiness! update soon n do pm

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Drashtilove IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 May 2015 at 6:05pm | IP Logged
congo 4 new story nice pro feeling bad for geet cont soon
susm Goldie

Joined: 24 April 2012
Posts: 1870

Posted: 05 May 2015 at 6:46pm | IP Logged
Interesting prolong. Maan is Geet ex n Geet ready to do anything for Maan. What happen geetmaan r childhood friends. 

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preeti.1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 May 2015 at 7:09pm | IP Logged
Maan is going to marry someone else ..and geet is his ex wife. .
ye kya ho raha he.. :'(
Update soon

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tabby999 IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 27 December 2010
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Posted: 05 May 2015 at 7:15pm | IP Logged
congrats for new start 
maan getting married to someone else ??
poor geet 

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