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New SS - Forever - Note and teaser- pg 8 26 may (Page 4)

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 9:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _DarkLady_

Yay! Update wo bhi itni jaldi!DancingThanks dear authorBig smile

Loved, loved, loved it. Your writing style has me hooked... Tongue

Gods hate Ishita...LOL

I don't see any problem with the flow... your words flow well. Clap

You nicely captured the Iyer household's morning routine. Then the description of Raman standing just behind Ishita, was so real. I could totally picture it.

Only one complaint, the length of the update is short! Or is it me who can't get enough of your writing?!EmbarrassedLOL But, you know if you update this soonish, you automatically make up for the shorter length.Big smile
Please update soon.Smile

Hawww, Thank You so much. I am so glad you are enjoying this story. About the quick updat,  well I wrote that even before the prologue...ha ha. 

But I'll try and post the next Chapter by this weekend. :) working on it.


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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 9:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by janani_divan

Awesome update.so summer camp:-D.ishita she is so cute.raman heard all spoke by ishu.so raman is intrested to marry ishu:-).great going continue soon.
I loved this
they,say love is blind
Right.
They ,say love is forever
wrong.
Next part im expecting raman pov .

Thank you. Ye,  they meet at a summer camp as kids - more insight on that will come later. :)

I am glad you find Ishita cute :) well let's just say raman heard her indignance over the thought of marrying him. :)

Ramans pov will come soon
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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 9:08am | IP Logged
@ Pari - thanks!
@ pravalli - Thanks.
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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 10:45am | IP Logged
interesting story
waiting for next part

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 1:29pm | IP Logged
waitng 4 nxt part..
nd it was superb..
plz pm me whn u'll updt nxt prt

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
Awesome story..
Please pm me the next part..SmileSmile

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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 7:33pm | IP Logged
Hi thank you all for liking this story.. I had intended a mother's day special part, but couldn't post one in time. 
Anyways here is the teaser..

" maa kya hoti hai"
Ishita looked at the child, her own eyes watering to match the child'.  Scooting closer to her, she smoothed the child's hair gently, " well.."
Such a profound question. How does she answer this? How does she tell this motherless child what a mother means.
How could she possibly tell this child that right at this moment and with this question, she was her mother. 


That's it!

So you would have guess by now who that little child is.. And we'll see more of her in the next part. :)

HAPPY MOTHERS DAY to all the lovely mom's out there... 

Happy mothers day Ishita Raman bhalla!! :) 

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Posted: 10 May 2015 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
This is so not done... how am I supposed to wait when this is so intriguing?TongueEmbarrassed

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