Originally posted by: _DarkLady_Yay! Update wo bhi itni jaldi!Thanks dear author😃
Loved, loved, loved it. Your writing style has me hooked... 😛
Gods hate Ishita...😆
I don't see any problem with the flow... your words flow well. 👏
You nicely captured the Iyer household's morning routine. Then the description of Raman standing just behind Ishita, was so real. I could totally picture it.
Only one complaint, the length of the update is short! Or is it me who can't get enough of your writing?!😳😆 But, you know if you update this soonish, you automatically make up for the shorter length.😃
Please update soon.😊
Originally posted by: janani_divanAwesome update.so summer camp:-D.ishita she is so cute.raman heard all spoke by ishu.so raman is intrested to marry ishu:-).great going continue soon.
I loved this
they,say love is blind
Right.
They ,say love is forever
wrong.
Next part im expecting raman pov .
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