||Destiny's Trap||-A Sandhir+Vidharth FF-||#Collab|Part 6 - pg 41 6Aug - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago
collab by three superb writer 
it's great.
coming to the update

it's superb,lovely lovely lovely
lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely

awesome,amazing,fab
it's very very interesting staring.

love it. update asap.😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
awsum part...post nxt soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
The first chapter has showed a good insight into the lives of the four main characters. :)

Interesting start...and well written! 👏

Update soon!

xoxo
Amreen
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanq fr updatin:)awesome fr now...
Res fr few wrds:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow...
superb story ya...Gangsters and Doctors...
m very excited for upcoming parts..

plz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: newmoon18

Wow first chapter

The story is very intrstng
Loved the update
It was a perfect start
A sneak peak to PaRan and SanVid life

They r bestest buddies
PaRan the gangster
Bt they r nice
Bcz the cleaning the garbage of society
They alwz targets corrupt PPP
What police should they r doing



On the other hand SanVid leading a total life
PaRan kills ppl and SanVid saves life



Their bonding was amzng

Alwz there first each other



Cnt wait to see how the worlds of these four different ppl crashes


Update soon
Wtng

Love u
Keep smiling

A big wala Thank u 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: katheriene

Thanks for pm
Awesome update👏
Loved the beginning😊
Paran & sanvid are so different from each other😊
Waiting for their encounter😊
Update soon

A big wala Thank u 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: ritikaagrawal

superb yaar...
lovely beginning...and awesome buddies both paran and sanvid👍🏼

A big wala thank u🤗 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: mika17

Awesome update

Thnku for the pm

A big wala thank u 🤗
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A big wala thank u 🤗