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New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16 (Page 75)

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Posted: 09 August 2015 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Chandnii.

Originally posted by suearmaniac

Originally posted by Chandnii.

Originally posted by suearmaniac

Originally posted by Chandnii.

Originally posted by suearmaniac

Originally posted by Chandnii.

Originally posted by suearmaniac

Originally posted by Chandnii.

Originally posted by suearmaniac

Beautifully explained emotions Clap
I loved the update
Par yaha kitni hottness he yar
I need ac LOL
I loved the way he takes care of her
And m happy the past didn't created bad things between themthem Tongue
But chandnii can u pls explain wat happened at the last??? Angry
Kaha tha na kuch bhi galat salat mat hone dena


Thank you Surbhi darling. I'm so glad you liked it.Embarrassed

We don't know still ke misunderstandings create hue hai ya nahi...Evil Smile

Aur maine kuch galat nahi kiya na!EmbarrassedLOL
kiya tune galat
mela ashad kaha gaya?


Hhahahaha..


Bhaag gaya woh Zoya ko akele chodh ke.
maje mat le mere nd update dede pls chandni
ur a gud grl na


LOLLOL

Sachi spoiler de rahi hu teko.
Next update mein pata chalega ki Asad actually has left Zoya and THE END.Heart

Kuch likha nahi hai maine.Sleepy
achaaw? Himmat he esa karne ki
asya fans ke naampe kalank bulaungi me tujhe agar esa kuch likha he


LOL

Sab stories ka happy end thodi hota haiOuch
anha kyu tease kar rahi he mujhe pls update dedena



Arey kaha tease kar rahi hu?

Spoiler diya hai maine teko. Itna dhamakedaar woh bhi.

You should be happy.

now, fatafat Thank you bol!Embarrassed
ghanta thanku bolu me tujhe! Kya tali bajau? Wah wah kya badiya spoiler he!
Chandni joote padenge tujhe nd do tin me padwaungi samjhi

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Posted: 09 August 2015 at 11:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Chandnii.

Originally posted by suearmaniac

Me update update chilaungi kurta phad keROFL



Haww!

Besharam Aurat!



Censored



LOL
ROFL hahaha ab ye besharam ko update dede

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Posted: 09 August 2015 at 9:57pm | IP Logged
I read 9parts in one go
Lovely upate
Plewse pm me

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Posted: 10 August 2015 at 10:04am | IP Logged
Asad kahan gaya???? Zoya Cry... An don't tell me u planning to take a leap where both AsYa think they left other as it was only deal and nothing more and hate each other :(

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Posted: 10 August 2015 at 10:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -hotsauce-

Finallly!

Loved it!

It was an amazing update!!

NOOO Please dont separate them!

Hope Asad comes back before she leaves!

Continue soon!

Hey Hotsauce,

Thank you so much. 
I'll try..No promises on not separating them! EmbarrassedLOL
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Posted: 10 August 2015 at 10:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by radadolcevida

res Tongue
Unres

Well, well, you should have precise that we had to hold on our seatbelt strongly because its' going to be really eventful, what a roller coaster update. I just finished my dinner when i started reading it LOL. jokes apart, I am coming to the update and I have many things to do say about actually (you will say as always Big smile)


Acha? Next update mein dungi statutory warning.LOL

And like always, I am going to mention what should now be redundant, that is I love your comments. So elaborate and heartfelt. Smile


For me there is 3 part in this chapter, the liberation, acceptance and finally doubt.  the first one show how she finally let  her past behind her and how she let herself to someone else than her, she release from all her chains, and it feels so pure and peaceful to feel not alone, to be understand by someone else, who didn't see you as monster. The first paragraph when she realize that she opened her heart to him, was really beautiful, intense and I could feel it. Especially this sentence, which showed how much she felt lonely all her life.
How they didn't run away from each other after hearing about such wretched pasts, neither judge the other nor feel disgusted about being together.
She didn't only showed herself naked physically but emotionally and opening our heart to someone, it always hard and it means a lot, and that why sometimes, it hurts when our trust was broken. It's really amazing how love can heal everything and how it can destroy everything too.

I am in awe of how you classify the chapter into sections based on what exactly they mean. And girl, your sectioning of the chapter is on point haa! Like in this one - Liberation, Acceptance and Finally doubt! Clap

Now coming to her confession, we can see how she moved from feeling to feeling, how she fought her demons alone, trying to find an issue to escape from them. This part also was well explained and I can understand what she was saying, I can feel all her words because it happens to me, I was like seeing myself in her words. She took this option to live a kind of love who will not ask her to be someone else or to be strong or to fake, with her child she can be herself, looking for pure love might sound selfish but no one can blame her. She then realized that it was what she needs to accomplish herself, she didn't mind taking care of the child alone, she knows what it was to be alone, but for sure, she won't let her child to be alone. This woman inside of her was craving to be love and to give love and I feel that motherhood was her need, more than a love of a man. I really appreciate how you make her mature enough to be aware of her need, of her selfishness. You portray all her shade in her confession. I know that many people can be scared to face their own truth, but you showed her strong enough in this part. The mix between her weakness and strength were well mingled. Her heart spoke all his hidden word leading to the word of love...hard one, I must confess, I imagine him coming from her mouth life a whisper.


Sometimes, rather most of the time, I find myself at a loss of words at how amazingly you explain to me a chapter written by me so well! How you understand and pick out those nuances and intricacies of the chapter that many over look. I really look forward to reading your stories.


However, in this part, I felt Asad disturbed by her confession; I didn't find his word really appropriate. I don't know why, I felt something stranger going inside of him at this point. I don't know if you didn't in purpose or it was just me, but I couldn't connect to his words. I felt him scared about her needs to be a mother and I felt some doubt. I don't know if he was disturbed with his feeling for her too. Even if after they made love together.  

Ermm... I am not going to say anything about the above... whether your perception is correct this time or not, you shall know in the coming chapters.


Don't need to precise this part, it was damn hot and their chemistry was growing day after day.

I am glad you enjoyed reading the part. It's difficult to write these parts especially.


So came the last part that shakes me inside. This is what I call the dark side of being in love, the doubt was the perfect shadow which always follow love. No matter how strong your love can be, if small thing happen, the doubt will act like (h)earthquake. First I thought that he was in meeting, but slowly I realize that it was not the day that he was supposed to be out. So I wonder if my theory was good, that he needs some space to think about him, about his feeling and about her needs. He was lost I guess and as all men, he needs to be alone.

Again, Main kuch nahi bolungi! Wait until the coming chapters... Approve


I felt for Zoya in the last paragraph, trying to keep hope and her sanity that what they shared wasn't fake, that she didn't open her heart to someone who left her, once he saw who she was. She didn't give her body and her soul to someone who betrays her. How painful that part was, I can understand it happens to me in real (reading this story, sometimes I feel it's me), and I understand how all her existence crashed in one second, how you can feel thousand of swords in your heart. When your inner voice said: you shouldn't have opened your heart. And she cried, because she trusted him and she started dreaming about a new life with him. It gave me tears seeing her in this state, again she was alone. No matter how rational you can be, emotion will always screw up your brain. After sadness, came her pride, she left with the only thing that help when you are hurt, your dignity. It was a dream and was not meant for her. This part was painful, so painful for me. I will not blame her for leaving; the silence in the house told her again how much she was all alone. But till the last moment, she wished it was not true but you just stop here...

So apt, Rada, each word that you said... It's heart wrenching to feel what she felt and all that that's going on in her head... but she her reasons to think this way and perhaps she is correct... that she is all alone, once again fate has played its game.


Brilliant chapter and I guess one of the strongest and deepest chapters of this story. Keep going on, you are really doing a brilliant job.


Eee! Thank you so much, Rada! That is a huge compliment!Big smile

PS: too long, but this chapter was a glimpse of my past life, I couldn't stop myself Big smile


Like I said, redundant but I love long comments, especially ones from you! Hug

Oh, I am so sorry, must've been a very trying period... I too have had close one's going through something of the sort. 

I hope you're doing fine now!Hug


Much love to you, Rada! 

And write as much you want. Love them, long, meaningful comments.Heart


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Posted: 10 August 2015 at 11:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KeyaHira2

Aww
Poor Zoya
She's heartbroken
Where is Asad?

Hey keya,

Yes, she is. Let's wait until the next chapter to know.
Thank you ! 
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Posted: 10 August 2015 at 11:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -ABI-


Hey Abi,

Thank you so much! Smile

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