Posted: 26 July 2015 at 8:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by radadolcevidares soon
Hi chandni (i hope you don't mind to call by your name ) , so sorry for not replying on your story, I used to click on like button but I didn't get time to stay and to write properly. And you know me I didn't want to write just a few words about your story. I wouldn't be fair with you and the story too. After so long, i get the time to comment finally .
Hi Rada, Hope you're doing well!
So happy to see your comment here after so long.
No, I don't mid you calling me by my name! It's okay, I totally understand. And as usual I loved your comment! It's so sweet of you to always take out the time and leave behind such detailed comments!
Anyway, i missed two chapters and I must say that you developp a lot about their past and it was needed for the story. Those last chapters bring them closer emotionnally and we can appreciate your skills in writing about emotion and drama in the two last chapters.
Yep, I needed to move ahead with the story a bit! Aww, thank you darling! I'm glad you liked how it's written. It was quite a task for me, to get the emotions out and right..
Asad's past was really painful but waht to say about Zoya, it was harder I must say. Both saw horrible thing at their young ages. When the love turned to be fake relation (for Asad) and when love turned to be poison (for Zoya). ~ Loved this line! We can perfectly now understand why both choose not to be with someone, at the end, we are always scared to do the same mistake as our parents. Genetic we can say , but emotion are not transmitted like this, anyway emotions has more impact in our heart than genetic.
So very well put, Rada! Very true! Emotions do have much of an impact on us, but sometimes, fortunately or unfortunate genes win! Let's see what has more of an impact of these two, genes or emotions! Because, Love for them has been a word they despise!
I really love those last chapters, because it was all about human and how they stood for each other, holding, talking and sharing their pain, as much as their past was painfull to read, as much as I appreciate their bond, it was really beautifully penned. Asad and Zoya was not only making a baby but they are educating their heart to fall in love and to trust another person, which is always hard to do in this life. And this travel was perfectly written.
You know, I really Love how catch these little little things from the update! And how you love these little things. True quality of an ardent reader and a fantastic writer herself! (Have heard about your stories... waiting to get some time in hand to be able to read them.)
Asad's last question was important but Zoya's reaction make me scared, what she was hidding more? I am really curious to know her motivation. And for a change, i have no clue about, maybe she don't want to be alone, even if she choose to live alone to be safe. Having baby can be selfish act in her case, but no one can blame a women to embrace a motherhood, it' s important for any women. Well, I will wait to read your next chapter, dear.
You're very correct again. No one can blame a woman for embracing motherhood! I haven't thought of it as yet but maybe going to put a little twist ... let's see!
And as usual, beautiful and well written part.
PS: sorry again for being late, but I spent crazy weeks, but now i am fine and I am back in sha Allah
Thank you so so much, darling! It's absolutely fine. Happy to see you back!