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New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16 (Page 66)

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Posted: 24 July 2015 at 9:20pm | IP Logged
Really emotional n a wonderful chapter but hey dat was cliffy.. Plz continue soon

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Posted: 25 July 2015 at 6:43am | IP Logged
Very emotional chapter.
Loved it.
Zoya's past is sad n horrifying.
Nobody should 
Contsoon

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Posted: 26 July 2015 at 8:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by radadolcevida

res soon Tongue
unres

Hi chandni (i hope you don't mind to call by your name Big smile) , so sorry for not replying on your story, I used to click on like button but I didn't get time to stay and to write properly. And you know me I didn't want to write just a few words about your story. I wouldn't be fair with you and the story too. After so long, i get the time to comment finally Big smile

Hi Rada, Hope you're doing well! Big smile
So happy to see your comment here after so long.
No, I don't mid you calling me by my name! SmileIt's okay, I totally understand. And as usual I loved your comment! It's so sweet of you to always take out the time and leave behind such detailed comments! Hug

Anyway, i missed two chapters and I must say that you developp a lot about their past and it was needed for the story. Those last chapters bring them closer emotionnally and we can appreciate your skills in writing about emotion and drama in the two last chapters. 

Yep, I needed to move ahead with the story a bit! Aww, thank you darling! I'm glad you liked how it's written. It was quite a task for me, to get the emotions out and right..


Asad's past was really painful but waht to say about Zoya, it was harder I must say. Both saw horrible thing at their young ages. When the love turned to be fake relation (for Asad) and when love turned to be poison (for Zoya). ~ Loved this line! We can perfectly now understand why both choose not to be with someone, at the end, we are always scared to do the same mistake as our parents. Genetic we can say Confused, but emotion are not transmitted like this, anyway emotions has more impact in our heart than genetic.

So very well put, Rada! Very true! Emotions do have much of an impact on us, but sometimes, fortunately or unfortunate genes win!  Stern Smile Let's see what has more of an impact of these two, genes or emotions! Because, Love for them has been a word they despise! 


I really love those last chapters, because it was all about human and how they stood for each other, holding, talking and sharing their pain, as much as their past was painfull to read, as much as I appreciate their bond, it was really beautifully penned. Asad and Zoya was not only making a baby but they are educating their heart to fall in love and to trust another person, which is always hard to do in this life. And this travel was perfectly written.

You know, I really Love how catch these little little things from the update! And how you love these little things. True quality of an ardent reader and a fantastic writer herself! (Have heard about your stories... waiting to get some time in hand to be able to read them.)


Asad's last question was important but Zoya's reaction make me scared, what she was hidding more?  I am really curious to know her motivation. And for a change, i have no clue about, maybe she don't want to be alone, even if she choose to live alone to be safe. Having baby can be selfish act in her case, but no one can blame a women to embrace a motherhood, it' s important for any women. Well, I will wait to read your next chapter, dear.

You're very correct again. No one can blame a woman for embracing motherhood! I haven't thought of it as yet but maybe going to put a little twist ... let's see! Smile
And as usual, beautiful and well written part.
Continue soon Big smile
PS: sorry again for being late, but I spent crazy weeks, but now i am fine and I am back in sha Allah

Thank you so so much, darling! It's absolutely fine. Happy to see you back! Big smile

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Posted: 26 July 2015 at 10:03am | IP Logged
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Hmm...
I guess that is okay...but if this is honest then let me confess...i have left 2 chapts in this story without commenting on it...reason being..i didn't really know what to say...isiliye.[/QUOTE]

Uhh, I'm pretty to the face, so that's ^ all honesty.

Aw! That's fine. some chapter's you skip and all ... theekhe.But any doubts, can always clarify ha
!
[/QUOTE]
Skip nhi kiye..bas comment nahi daale...
all the office deal portions wahan samajh nhi aaya shot bas ki kya bolu.. isiliye left it like that.[/QUOTE]
Koi nahi.. It's okay! 
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Posted: 26 July 2015 at 10:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by radadolcevida

Originally posted by Chandnii.

Originally posted by radadolcevida

res soon Tongue

Rada, where have you been ?

Gayab hi ho gayi thi .

Hope you're doing well?


And unres when you get the time. it's okay! Smile


Hi, dear

I was so busy and those last weeks were crazy physically and emotionally. and i must say I was a bit low but now I am fine and i am back to stalk your story LOL
I left my comment on page 65
take care of you sweety  Hug

Oh, np sweety! 
I hope you're doing fine now! 

It's good to see you back! Big smile
Absolutely loved your comment! Always do! Hug

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Posted: 26 July 2015 at 10:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by suearmaniac

Originally posted by Chandnii.

Originally posted by suearmaniac

Originally posted by Chandnii.

Originally posted by suearmaniac

mine

yay!!!!
is baar bhi pehla like and ist spot meraDancingParty
pichli baar tune pm ni kiya ni to aaj meri head trick ho jaati naSleepy

unres
this was so painful to read yaarCry
such emotional things u can write so well
to pehle to uske liye thumbs upThumbs Up
then came the horrible past
and how much she'd seen and gone thruOuch
but still itni acchi insaan bani wo to kabiliyat taarifClap
i liked it when asad patiently supported her
just hope dono ke beech aage koi problem naa ho
kyuki the point u left us is making me worried yaar
kuch to he ...
i want to know more
pls continue asap
yar how can u end there???Angry
i want update
pls chandnii
pretty plsEmbarrassed

Aww, Surbhi .. Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! Big smileEmbarrassed
It's a bit difficult to write such emotional and sad stuff.

Hhaha.. you guessed it right... I'm planning on a little twist maybe... lets see.. ! Evil Smile


Update will come only after I have thought of what next  to write and when I get some time to write! 

Embarrassed

*Goes and hides*

m happy ur gladLOLWink
yeah i understand its tought o write those sad ones
being a writer myself m running a story where the horrible past revolvesSleepy
haww!!!!!...now m becoming hell curious to what this devilish mind of urs is planningStarStarStar
okay write when u feel like
as a reader i have to wait i guessTongue

Haa! See, some one understands how it gets difficult to write some times.. and things get delayed then! EmbarrassedLOL

I'd love to read your story! Hopefully soon,Smile
Even I don't know re.. Maybe temporary seperation! LOL or permanent perhaps! LOL

Sochungi fir likhungi..

Aade logo ko shayad shamja bhi nahi end ka part. That there maybe some twist, so koi reactions mile nahi ke dont put a twist or put one so yes, I'll see kya karna hai! EmbarrassedLOL

ofcourse ur not allowed to put a bad twist chandnii
just please don't scare me with temprory word
i will stop reading if it gets permanentAngry
wese wo to tu kar hi nahi sakti hena????
kyuki tu acchi bacchi hena
ur a good girl na
pls koi khatarnaak twist mat daalna
pls pretty pls

Hhahah..

Abhi tak kuch start nahi kiya likhna re! If there is one, It will only be 2 or 3 updates.. Itna toh allowed hai na?Ermm

Nooo.. I'll make you come back for more! Cool
Acha khatarnak nahi daalungi! Approve

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Posted: 26 July 2015 at 10:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cutie15

Can we get the update sooner this time..??

Aww! 

Hello cutie,
Acha I'll try.. I may get an off tomorrow, so in case I can write kal, I'll try updating soon! Smile

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Posted: 26 July 2015 at 10:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pumpkin.honey

Really emotional n a wonderful chapter but hey dat was cliffy.. Plz continue soon

Hey ,

Thank you so much! Smile
yep , a cliffy! LOL

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