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New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16 (Page 62)

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Posted: 21 July 2015 at 3:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ayat20

Felt bad for zoya... 
Hope asad always stands for zoya n never leaves her

Hey ayat.

Than k you. Glad you liked it Smile

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Posted: 21 July 2015 at 3:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by don girls

Interesting
Zoya past was dark and sad emotional type

Hey 

Thank you so much 1 Smile
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Posted: 21 July 2015 at 3:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sdusa06

it was well written update..Clap
it was very emotional update ...made me really sad UnhappyCry
I really liked the fact that asad and zoya are trying to share each other harsh painful ugly past...which would bring them more close to each other and have a better understanding.
The most adorable moment was asad trying to support zoya and light her mood Embarrassed
The end was not expected because the way it is left with the question ...it is giving worry feeling as to know what will happen next...
Can't wait to for the next chapter. plz update soon. SmileTongue


Hey sdusa06,

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed reading the chapter.Smile

It's so sweet of you to have come around! Big smile
Yep, there may be a twist in the tale, not sure as yet ! 

I'm not sure soon, but i'll try! Smile
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Posted: 21 July 2015 at 4:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Chandnii.

Originally posted by -ABI-

Pretty
Update


Hhahaha..

Pretty update kya hota hai ?ConfusedLOL
Interesting?

Anywhoo, thank  you, glad you liked it ! Smile
*pout*

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Posted: 21 July 2015 at 6:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Chandnii.

Originally posted by cutie15

Yeahh u updated..:)
Mind blowing update..
I dont know why are u not happy wid zoya's past.. but this was something so so emotional..
I got goosebumps reading this..
zoya has suffered so much..! Loved how asad took care of her..nd told her to be there always..
awesome update..
plz plz update soon the next ond nd do pm me.. I didnt received pm for this nd the previous one..:(


Hi Cutiee,

My very excited reader!Smile

Thank you so muchdarling.. I'm glad you liked it.
Yep, not happy with how it came out, I had a lot more planned , more impact full but never got the time to write it all down.. so yeah.. not how I planned it.

Arrey but I always send every one PM's ..ConfusedI don't know what's happening.. many of you guys are complaining in not receiving PM'S.

Anywhoo, I'll make send you a PM alag se next time. dwEmbarrassed

eeep.. thank u soo much.. Embarrassed
will be waiting. . Smile

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Posted: 21 July 2015 at 10:06am | IP Logged
res soon Tongue
unres

Hi chandni (i hope you don't mind to call by your name Big smile) , so sorry for not replying on your story, I used to click on like button but I didn't get time to stay and to write properly. And you know me I didn't want to write just a few words about your story. I wouldn't be fair with you and the story too. After so long, i get the time to comment finally Big smile.
Anyway, i missed two chapters and I must say that you developp a lot about their past and it was needed for the story. Those last chapters bring them closer emotionnally and we can appreciate your skills in writing about emotion and drama in the two last chapters.
Asad's past was really painful but waht to say about Zoya, it was harder I must say. Both saw horrible thing at their young ages. When the love turned to be fake relation (for Asad) and when love turned to be poison (for Zoya). We can perfectly now understand why both choose not to be with someone, at the end, we are always scared to do the same mistake as our parents. Genetic we can say Confused, but emotion are not transmitted like this, anyway emotions has more impact in our heart than genetic.
I really love those last chapters, because it was all about human and how they stood for each other, holding, talking and sharing their pain, as much as their past was painfull to read, as much as I appreciate their bond, it was really beautifully penned. Asad and Zoya was not only making a baby but they are educating their heart to fall in love and to trust another person, which is always hard to do in this life. And this travel was perfectly written.
Asad's last question was important but Zoya's reaction make me scared, what she was hidding more?  I am really curious to know her motivation. And for a change, i have no clue about, maybe she don't want to be alone, even if she choose to live alone to be safe. Having baby can be selfish act in her case, but no one can blame a women to embrace a motherhood, it' s important for any women. Well, I will wait to read your next chapter, dear.
And as usual, beautiful and well written part.
Continue soon Big smile
PS: sorry again for being late, but I spent crazy weeks, but now i am fine and I am back in sha Allah


Edited by radadolcevida - 23 July 2015 at 6:14am

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Posted: 21 July 2015 at 10:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by asifiqbalsh

Very emotional update
Zoya past was hurtful. She shared that with asad & he hold her. Hope they will open with their reservations & confess what they feel for other. Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

Hey asif,

Thank you so much. Glad you liked the update! 

Np! Smile
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Posted: 21 July 2015 at 10:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jas91

Mona darling wonderful partClapClap
 
thoda zyada emotional tha agreed
 
Zoya's past was really horrifying I understand now why she is reluctant 2 embrace love even if she may feel it 4 Asad.Cry
 
But it was really unfortunate as well a sweet loving family got destroyed just bcuz of doubtOuch
 
I don't get it why her mother always used 2 smile & bear his every abuse was is it bcuz what he doubted was true or she felt their love will change things soon or just 2 keep Zoya away from their dark side.Confused
 
D way she broe down telling d tale & Asad was their 2 support her was fantastically penned.Clap
 
It ended again on a cliffy now what's Zoya's reason 2 have a baby I also want 2 know EmbarrassedWink so 4 that updt soon Mona darling cuz I m impatient insaan.LOL
 
Love of love hugs again 4 a sincere effortHug
 
PS- itni late lateefi har baar nahi chalegi updt next part soonWinkLOL

Hi Jas! 

Thank you so much, That's so sweet of you! Glad you enjoyed it! Big smile

Yeah, I wanted to get into the details of that but fir time nahi mila itna lamba update likhne ka..
Her mother wasn't cheating, it was just her father was losing his shit and overreacted to anything, basically a drunkard... they don't know what is happening around them, they're drunk 24/7. And Zoya's mom was only trying to get him to understand her by apologizing and not arguing with him, when she knew things got out of hand. But there isn't much you can do with a man who is under the influence of drugs. And she was alone with a daughter who she too had to take care of, plus she never knew it would get so bad for real. so anyway.

I wish I could think soon, penstuff down quickly and basically get the time. toh main pakka jaldi jaldi updates deti.. I too am a reader, I know wait karna kitna difficult kaam ho jata hai.OuchLOL

And yes, I am thinking of adding some twist, abh tak decide nahi kiya hai lekin.Evil SmileLOL

Aww! Thanks love! Hug

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