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Posted: 24 June 2015 at 1:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mona12345

Originally posted by jas91

Originally posted by mona12345



Hi guys!


Big smile



How ya doing? 


One question...


Can I put this story on hold tooo? And run away? 


Embarrassed



Yeah, that's all! 

Thanks!
 
Han ttu kar hold phir main btati hun tujheAngryAngry

Hhaha.. Darr gayi main tere se! DeadDeadROFL
sad poutUnhappy
 
yahan incomplete storiyan likhne aati hai kya

Hahhaaha, okay this really cracked me up, even though it shouldnt have! (besharam me :P)
 
aur hume wait karke stane ke liyeCryCry
 
upar wala unres main jo I love u bola who cancel I hate u "turning my face other side"

Peace woman! I love you okay, and I love I love yous, dont change stuff! ErmmApprove
Maarungi teko! Stern Smile
Tu aisa bolegi toh aur kya Karun mainOuch

Acha but seriously, sorry lekin aajkal likh nahi paa rahi main, toh thodasa time lagege... hopefully I'll complete the next chapter soon. Aaj hi start kiya hai, one parah- current status. so please be patient and non- violent! EmbarrassedLOL
Mujhe samajh nahi aata time limit kisne set ki hai I know story plan karne main likhne main time lagega yeh thodi bola har din updt kar. Week main 1 updt kar chalega 2 week le toh bhi.
But story chodne ki baat na kar mujhe gussa aata hai.
 
1 kaam kar tu koi achi story pad shayad new idea mile aur tera writer block dur ho.Big smile
Suggestion ke liye PM meWink
 

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Posted: 28 June 2015 at 2:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nilusoni

Plz update soon 

mostly gonna out uo the next part in a day! Smile
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Posted: 28 June 2015 at 2:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ChocoBerry

MONA!!!!Angry

Like really you put that message Shocked????


Am shocked ShockedShocked


I read all the threats you got and trust me, I will put an infinite sign to them all, utna threat hai mujhse. Better not try anything on this one. I love this story yaar Day Dreaming



Chalo ab start writing, one para a day, or two doesn't matter, what matters is that you are doing your best as per time.


Am waiting OK. Don't forget Embarrassed


Love you dearly Hug


Choco darlingg!! Heart

Okay, honestly, your message did get me going ... I'm scared of you ! OuchLOL
And, just for you and all the other readers you have been patiently waiting, I've written a bit, not happy with it but written anyway...

Thank you for that ^threat... got me going! LOL

Update in a day or so after I'm helped by the genius herself! Wink 

Love you more! Hug

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Posted: 28 June 2015 at 2:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cutie15

Originally posted by mona12345

Originally posted by cutie15

Originally posted by mona12345




Hi guys!


Big smile



How ya doing?


One question...


Can I put this story on hold tooo? And run away?


Embarrassed



Yeah, that's all!

Thanks!

Whattt..???? Nooo Dead
no no yr plzzz..
we are such lovely ppl..dont do this to us..
ab jldi se update and make us pls..
pls pls..


Hahaha,,

Hi Cutie,

you guys sure are lovley people!Big smile

Yeah, I'm facing a bit of a block right now. I'm writing at snails speed.. which is why ... But I'll try to work something out,


Its ok.. take your time..but plz dont leave this story.. :)
All d best.. Wink

I was never leaving the story, just a short break though! LOL
Anywho, next part in a day or so! 
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Posted: 28 June 2015 at 3:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jas91

Originally posted by mona12345

Originally posted by jas91

resBig smile
unres
 
ok here I m wid my super late comntEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
both part 5 & 6 were basically same wid Asad & Zoya's POV
1st it was Asad's
it stared wid him admiring d pic he snapped of Zoya widout her knowledge & thinking how beautiful she is inside & outside that's trueTongue
earlier d night Asad asked Zoya 2 shift 1 day b4 despo he is & even Zoya eagerly agreedLOLLOL
Gharke staff ko chute bhi de di aur same Room main bhi shift ho gaye MR KhanLOLLOL
his monologue that he felt he had given himself 2 her intentionally was very nice
true both have given themselves 2 each other widout their knowledge or they know but don't admitWink
they felt shy & embarrassed at start of d evening but later threw their sharmo hya our of KVEmbarrassed
their sweet yet passionate kisses were magical 2 readDay Dreaming
Soon both couldn't wait 4 more but Asad wanted 2 make it special & both groomed themselves 2 impressed each other I like what I see oops readLOLLOL
both shamelessly admired & complimented & finally claimed each other
D love making or I say baby making was very passionate & intense & at d same time overwhelming u gave it an emotional touch which should b thereThumbs Up
 
nxt came Zoys's POV
she was hesitant 1st but didn't wanna lose 1 extra nightWink
she kept d dress simple & sexy were 4 laterEmbarrassedLOL 
Zoya's checkout session zyada detail likha kyun Mona Darling KSG AAK hai isliyeEmbarrassedWink
She was touched wid Asad's small gestures like dismissing house help keeping in mind their privacy & calling Zoya all d week asking things she will need awe so sweet of himDay Dreaming
All his care & gentleness has struck a chord in heart Heart
she feel pampered precious cherished happy satisfied secure & at home in his arms.
Zoya agar itna sab feel hota hai toh what more u want just marry d man & do d love making & baby making as much u want 4 d rest of ur life.WinkLOL

Hahaha.. Hi Jassy! Embarrassed
Kaisi hai? Kidhar thi tu?
I missed you so mch.  :(
I was busy sweetu & missed u 2
 
Yes, very desperate to be with each other, spend some more time with each other, also, yes, they are stupid people who are unnecessarily complicating their lives, and making it difficult for me to write a balanced story! ConfusedOuchLOL
dimag ki dahi bna rakhi hai dono ne. Funny thing is 4 a change I feel both r ECLOLLOL
hahaha, both actually are! LOL

I think I'll just get them married and finish the story! Hai na?!Big smileBig smileLOL
ManuShockedAngry
Arrey think about it, ram kahani khatam, seedha shaadi and bache and blah whatever! 
 
Mona darling Fantastic piece of work ClapClap

Aww! Thank you Janemann! :*

I know maine humor dalne ko bola tha but its ok I loved this style as well

Yeh story main humor shayad himilega, One because its a different story line and two because main likh hi nahi pa rahi ! Pinch
Han I understand that koi na u write as u canSmile
 
Baby making process was big hit ab jaldi aage ka likhoBig smile
Love u sweetu
Take care alwaysHug

Love you too , babydoll! 
You too! Hug
 
P.S: Like always, I loved loved your comment! It's so sweet of you to leave back these detailed feedback!Star
Mwah! x

Oye I will keep giving my lovely comnts bus tu likti reh tabhi toh main comnt de paungi na. Take care muwaahHug

 


Love you ! Hug

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Posted: 28 June 2015 at 3:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jas91

Originally posted by mona12345

Originally posted by jas91

Originally posted by mona12345



Hi guys!


Big smile



How ya doing? 


One question...


Can I put this story on hold tooo? And run away? 


Embarrassed



Yeah, that's all! 

Thanks!
 
Han ttu kar hold phir main btati hun tujheAngryAngry

Hhaha.. Darr gayi main tere se! DeadDeadROFL
sad poutUnhappy
 
yahan incomplete storiyan likhne aati hai kya

Hahhaaha, okay this really cracked me up, even though it shouldnt have! (besharam me :P)
 
aur hume wait karke stane ke liyeCryCry
 
upar wala unres main jo I love u bola who cancel I hate u "turning my face other side"

Peace woman! I love you okay, and I love I love yous, dont change stuff! ErmmApprove
Maarungi teko! Stern Smile
Tu aisa bolegi toh aur kya Karun mainOuch

Acha but seriously, sorry lekin aajkal likh nahi paa rahi main, toh thodasa time lagege... hopefully I'll complete the next chapter soon. Aaj hi start kiya hai, one parah- current status. so please be patient and non- violent! EmbarrassedLOL
Mujhe samajh nahi aata time limit kisne set ki hai I know story plan karne main likhne main time lagega yeh thodi bola har din updt kar. Week main 1 updt kar chalega 2 week le toh bhi.
But story chodne ki baat na kar mujhe gussa aata hai.
 
Limit set readers karte hai, jaldi post karo jaldi post karo ! DeadLOL
Acha shaant maatey, sirf break pe jaa rahi thi lekin abh nahi.. in a day or so the next part shall be put up.
1 kaam kar tu koi achi story pad shayad new idea mile aur tera writer block dur ho.Big smile
Suggestion ke liye PM meWink
Hahahha, I read a lot of themWink but that doesn't always help... mann hota hai koi nayi story start karne ko, new ideas but that only after this one is done with.
 

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Posted: 28 June 2015 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mona12345

Originally posted by cutie15

Originally posted by mona12345

Originally posted by cutie15

Originally posted by mona12345




Hi guys!


Big smile



How ya doing?


One question...


Can I put this story on hold tooo? And run away?


Embarrassed



Yeah, that's all!

Thanks!

Whattt..???? Nooo Dead
no no yr plzzz..
we are such lovely ppl..dont do this to us..
ab jldi se update and make us pls..
pls pls..


Hahaha,,

Hi Cutie,

you guys sure are lovley people!Big smile

Yeah, I'm facing a bit of a block right now. I'm writing at snails speed.. which is why ... But I'll try to work something out,


Its ok.. take your time..but plz dont leave this story.. :)
All d best.. Wink


I was never leaving the story, just a short break though!LOL
Anywho, next part in a day or so!

hehe ok.. nd ya waiting for the update sweety.. Smile

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