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New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16 (Page 41)

radadolcevida Goldie

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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
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First, this chapter was mindblowing, exceptionnel, wonderful, brilliant and stratospheric and I can add more and more adjective to describe this one and it won't be enough.
I know you will say that I am exagerated a bit, but NOT-AT-ALL. First, because it was unexpected and second, because I didn't expected this kind of chapter and third, because this is what I love the most in stories: emotions. 
You write, no... You painted such an amazing chapter, full of emotion, showing Zoya's inner battle between her mind and heart. And this is what I like to read and to write about.
Zoya's pov was really really beautiful, heartouching, you show so many shades of her: hesitation, confusion, clumsiness, confidence, even her love. This chapter is a delicacy and you describes very well  the up and down in her heart, in her body and in her head. You didn't miss any part.
You gave me as a reader a beautiful travel throught all this different and mysterious compartment, heart, body and soul. You merged perfectly all of them, and because I am a girl, this chapter touched me more because I went throught all this battle in my life. Not in the same situation, but I can understand how it works, this non-stop battle between close partner but yet so far when feelings came in between. I feel like emotion was acting like a beautiful girl and the heart-body-soul were 3 youngs boys fighting for her LOL (I know I am crazy Sillyand I assume).
I will finish with one word to describe your chapter, even if I know it will not make justice to how I feel after reading this. It is just P-E-R-F-E-C-T. You don't need to change any word in it, because the emotions that escaped from your chapter was in the right place. It was not only intense between character but the chapter was full of it.
Beautifull and well written piece. I am so glad that I came to your story.
I am in love with this chapter. Totally 

Edited by radadolcevida - 08 June 2015 at 2:19pm

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life4me Goldie

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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
Wonderful update. Please continue soon.

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asifiqbalsh IF-Rockerz

Joined: 28 May 2013
Posts: 8928

Posted: 08 June 2015 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
Zoya PoV was awesome
Both thought the same & then ignore it.
Hope they will realise what that attraction is. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

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-SilverSparkle- Goldie

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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
Their sexy time was most certainly sexy! Anticipate the emotional exploration that shall follow based on the intensity that's developed between them.

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cutie15 Goldie

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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
Oh that was awesome as hell!! Amazing update..
Reading both povs was just superb..
nd can u plz pm me the next time u update..?
Pretty plsss..
nd ya thanks for updating soon..
Next part soon as well..;)

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Manyata5 Goldie

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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 3:10pm | IP Logged
Beautifull and well written piece. I am so glad that I came to your story.
I am in love with this chapter

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-hotsauce- IF-Dazzler

Joined: 29 April 2014
Posts: 2876

Posted: 08 June 2015 at 3:17pm | IP Logged

Just read this story!

Loved it alll!

It was amazing!

Zoya wants to do a deal with Asad

She wants to be a mother and has asked Asad to help her in this deal

Asad want to be a father without being involved in a relationship

Zoya is attracted to AsadEmbarrassed

and so is Asad

Asad has agreed to this deal!

They are going to professional with this deal!

Asad sealed the deal with a kiss

Zoya blushed!Embarrassed

Zoya wants to go out for 7 days so they can make a baby with out a distraction

Dilshad going to Najma

Asad told her to come to his house

Omg they are so cute!

She comes a day before

Please continue soon!

Do PM me!Smile

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ikhlass Senior Member

Joined: 22 January 2015
Posts: 459

Posted: 08 June 2015 at 4:19pm | IP Logged
Wow Zoya POV was as hot as Asad POV  ! They are already in love but  don't know it yet, the way which they made love proves it... Both of them will share much more than a baby... excited to read how they will react after their week of love making, once they will be back to their normal life.

Continue soon

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