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New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16 (Page 40)

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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 8:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by suearmaniac

Originally posted by mona12345

Originally posted by suearmaniac

Wow!!
With the tym being stopped
u nailed it girl
even the minute hand paused...m lovin' ths description
u wrote it perfectly :)
nd yes the update was much more erotic
i had my insides stir nd toes curling
u amaze me chandani ;)
keep up the gud work nd update soon coz that was hot nd
like amazon's punch line
i'll say
aur dikhao
aur dikhao ROFL


Hey Surbhi!Smile

Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed the update!Big smile

Hahahhaa, you're very kind!Hug
I'll try updating the next part sooner!

u deserve the appreciation Hug
hehehe...try me m kinder than that LOL
PM me when u update nd i want that pm in my inbox soon

Aww, thanks darling ! :*
I'll do that , mostly by tonight or max by tomorrow ! Wink

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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 9:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by radadolcevida

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Sorry for the delay, I was a bit sick Confused but finally here I am Big smile  ~~ Hey Rada, no problem sweet heart. I hope you're doing well now?!Big smile

Coming to the update, so finally the deal was signed between them, really it was a hot and intense between them. They didn't need any starter, they already made it and the chemistry between them was really well described.  ~~ Thank you so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it! Embarrassed
And of course, I don't need to precise that it was a hot update, and I really love how you introduce a subtle moment of emotion with Zoya's tear, when she knew that they were doing all of this for having babies, her emotion was palpable. It was not only a moment between man and woman, but it was a moment of two person trying to make a child. 
I really love this update and it hides many emotions : like their hidden emotions for the other, their hidden words of love and of course, the famous deal. ~~ It's so overwhelming for me, that you really get involved in each chapter and give such an amazing feedback. Makes my day! 
I love it and I am really curious now, how they will act after their love making, is it going to be like a hangover for them? Like we did and then we have to wait in each other side or should we continue until it works? How about this awkward moment between them, so expected or not? Are they going to be in confort still? Many thing to read and to explore concerning the emotions? ~~ About all that, lets read in the coming chapters.. I, myself have to decide as to how to take the story from here..LOL
I appreciate also how you described Asad, he was falling in love with her and I felt that he forgot about the deal when he was in her arms Wink. ~~ He did, they both did actually! It was as if two lovers existed as one in a parallel world of pure love! 
Anyway, thank for this beautiful update and hope to read the next soon. 
 

Rada, 

Thank you so much for this wonderful comment. I read and re- read your comment! Put a smile on my face! Glad you enjoyed reading! Hug

Another thing, the enxt chapter should be up either tonight or by tomorrow at the latest! Embarrassed

Take care! 
Mwaah! 


Edited by mona12345 - 08 June 2015 at 9:09am

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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 11:19am | IP Logged
Mona meri jaan..,.. Am waiting for the next chapter Big smile

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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
Mine Big smile

Unres Embarrassed


OK. I know I am a slow writer and even a slower reader. But itna slow bhi nahin that it would take me 2 hours to read that. Am telling you Mona, zaalim zamana dushman humara TongueLOLEveryone... EVERYONE! had something or the other to discuss with me tonight. N then, hubby dearest came back early from work n took my tab wanting to do office work Confused why did he even come back early was beyond me Angry


Anyways. I read the update And definitely loved it. This is not just a deal anymore am telling you. Its become much more from the time they have started sharing those kisses Blushing. Am now only waiting to see who realises first and who confesses first.


Loved it completely my sweetheart. Waiting for the next part already Embarrassed


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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ChocoBerry

Mona meri jaan..,.. Am waiting for the next chapter Big smile

Hi beautiful di! 

It's up! Big smileEmbarrassed

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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
Mine ;)
lol aaj me har ek ka thread stalk kar rahi hu
i hit the 1st like
unres
wow!!!
its just wow how a writer like u can write the same thing with 2 different person's prespectiveClap
great job



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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Well Similar to previous one
but
was on Zoya's pov
so,
I still it


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