Originally posted by: -silentbang-Oh my my ...that was so so hawtt βΊοΈ.
Asad has realized his feelings for her ...hope zoya will realize soon that this deal is for life time and they love each otherUpdate soon π³
Originally posted by: -silentbang-Oh my my ...that was so so hawtt βΊοΈ.
Asad has realized his feelings for her ...hope zoya will realize soon that this deal is for life time and they love each otherUpdate soon π³
Originally posted by: SanKsgianOmg this i the sexiest ever...
Its no more a deal...this seems forever wala love to me...
Girl this is amaxing...
Originally posted by: SanKsgianThanks for sharing this yaar...
Continue soon please...
Originally posted by: SanKsgianCan't get enough of this one
Originally posted by: latanziaJust found this SS and read it in one go please update soon.
Wow Just fantastic
Originally posted by: sweet_tehsOmg it was so sos so so hot...
It was just amazing.How,they were first awkward then trying to relax.How Asad wished for a forever...Zoya was the more fearless here...Continue soon.
Originally posted by: suearmaniac
u deserve the appreciation π€
hehehe...try me m kinder than that π
PM me when u update nd i want that pm in my inbox soon
Originally posted by: radadolcevidares
unresSorry for the delay, I was a bit sick π but finally here I am π ~~ Hey Rada, no problem sweet heart. I hope you're doing well now?!πComing to the update, so finally the deal was signed between them, really it was a hot and intense between them. They didn't need any starter, they already made it and the chemistry between them was really well described. ~~ Thank you so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it! π³And of course, I don't need to precise that it was a hot update, and I really love how you introduce a subtle moment of emotion with Zoya's tear, when she knew that they were doing all of this for having babies, her emotion was palpable. It was not only a moment between man and woman, but it was a moment of two person trying to make a child.I really love this update and it hides many emotions : like their hidden emotions for the other, their hidden words of love and of course, the famous deal. ~~ It's so overwhelming for me, that you really get involved in each chapter and give such an amazing feedback. Makes my day!I love it and I am really curious now, how they will act after their love making, is it going to be like a hangover for them? Like we did and then we have to wait in each other side or should we continue until it works? How about this awkward moment between them, so expected or not? Are they going to be in confort still? Many thing to read and to explore concerning the emotions? ~~ About all that, lets read in the coming chapters.. I, myself have to decide as to how to take the story from here..πI appreciate also how you described Asad, he was falling in love with her and I felt that he forgot about the deal when he was in her arms π. ~~ He did, they both did actually! It was as if two lovers existed as one in a parallel world of pure love!Anyway, thank for this beautiful update and hope to read the next soon.
Originally posted by: ChocoBerryMona meri jaan..,.. Am waiting for the next chapter π
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