sorry 4 d late comnt No problem ! Till the time it comes.
but i just loved d updt
it was super se bhi upar Aww. Thankyou so much ! Glad you loved it !
it was shocking that Asad was ok wid it but later i realised here Asya r totally different othwise he would have given long lecture on Tameez & Tehzeeb Oh! They're totally different from those shown in the serial!
I know but Asya r stuck in d head like that na but I realized d difference soonish
so AAK was smitten by Zoe 4 a long time
but due 2 her professionalism & uninterest 2 b in relationship he buried his feelings
1 thing 2 b noted is both r sexually attracted & admire d other , in d 1st part even in Zoya's POV she admires Asad's other qualities & here he does 2
so d thing is why can't they b 2gather-2gather . D way Zoya suggested a honeymoon paradise ka idea yet she don't want 2 b wid Asad
they want each other but don't want strings attached??
They've their own reasons for not getting involved with each other or anyone for that matter.Yes, they've been attracted to each other from the beginning but never acted upon it because of their reasons!
[you'll know in the further updates as to why..]
ok so yeh raaz aage jake khulenge
1 more thing if Asad can adopt a child why can't Zoe. I mean why she wants 2 deliver herself otherwise she's so modern than why she want 2 feel motherhood herself
both r excited & looking forward 2 d process of making a baby but don't want 2 b 2gather this is confusing just a bit.
Yes, Her thinking is very progressive yet somewhere she is kind of reserved,youll know soon. and she doesn't want to adopt because she wants a child of her own. Being sodern doesnt mean you donot want to have babies?!!! kuch bhi haa Jaz !
that I understand Mona bas Zoya kyun aisa chahti hai wanted 2 know
And i know thoda confusing lagega jab tak full story I don't put up. Sorry, but you just got deal with the confusion! Ask questions, I'll answer w/o revealing the aage ka story if i can!
han ab mujhe samajh aa gya ki yeh baate story unfold hone ke saath pta challenge but I can get curious no Sure you can be curious. i like curious!
but anyways Asad is up 4 this deal happily & has signed it aswell wid a kiss he wanted 2 steal even when she was explaining him
& it was hilarious 2 read him asking qstns as if it was a business deal & Zoe's reactions
Hhahahah.. Thankyou Jassy. I'm glad you liked it !
who says they don't like d subject i like it, its tricky its bold but totally sold Mona darling wah ik tagline ka avishkar kar diya mene ~~~ Hahahaha.. And I must add I love your tagline !
Dekh maine tere andar ke writer ko jagah diya hai. Abh tu bhi likhna start kar !
na baba na yeh writing shaiting mujhse nahi hoti Hhaha.. arrey try toh kar. kya pata tu mast writer nikle !
I m unsure & underconfident
Hahahah.. Come see me , Love you too ! x
PS- BTW d most imp thing why u still hadn't changed it into SS it can't b a TS u can't end it in d nxt part. It can b easily extended we want 2 read their hilarious process of baby making omg i know it can b bold but i would love 2 read if u write it keeping d humor in mind it will b awesome. not that u can't write bold or havn't wrote in d past remember Turn it into SS i say it last time also u changed a TS in SS when i requested u do it this time 2 pretty plz
Okay, khush hoja, I'll have to convert this into a FS or a SS!
Yes, likhan toh zaroor hai, but bahut difficult hai mere liye waise likhna.. leme see and try ! Aur tujhe pata hai na, woh sab stories convert toh kar di maine to FS, lekin aage hold par chalegi ! Hopefully yeh complete kar pau main.
Yippee I m so so so happy wid this ab ayga mja
I know jaise hi thoda time mile uhain bhi resume karna I don't like unfinished stories I hope so too. I want to so complete them. I hate keeping you guys waiting like that !
I m sure u will do that sometime
& Tu humesah summer aur winter break main hi kyun aati hai age piche bhi ayegi toh we wont mind