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New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16 (Page 19)

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 11:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by radadolcevida

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Really beautiful chapter and I am happy that you extend it to an SS, good job Wink
Coming to the chapter, it was really a pleasure to read it and well written, logically and perfectly. 
I love how your portray their hesitation, their attraction, their awkwardness. It was really well described.
So finally both realized the hhuge step that both toook for this deal and all the involvement. I must say that I love how they tried to convince themselves that they are only doing it for the deal and not for more, this part was really funny. 
I read one of your comment and you will detail later why Zoya took this kind of decision and why she don't want to have any attach. It will be interesting to go futher in the character, I feel that you are preparing something good. 
Your story was really good and it has been a long time I didn't been hooked so much to a story like yours.
COntinue to do your good job and God bless you dear.

Hey Radadolcevida,

Thankyou so so so much! Big smile Glad you found the story gripping and are enjoying reading it! Thank you for the kind words! Embarrassed Very motivating! 

Yeah, I had to change the story a bit, so yes, I've extended this beyond 3 parts! And again I'm not sure how in depth would I be going with the characters issues but I'll definitely do outline them. So yeah.

Hope you like the upcoming parts as well ! 

Loved reading your feedback! It's always great to know the readers view!! Hug


Thanks! God bless you too ! x

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nilusoni

Awesome part loved it 
Assad and zoya with their feelings were so nervous and excited 
Asya lunch date and after kiss so hot
Excited for next part 
Thanks for pm 
Plz pm me for next part 
Continue soon 

Hey Nilu,

Thankyou so much, glad you liked it ! Big smile

I haven't started writing the next part. But, hopefully should begin soon ! x
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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 11:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fatima30

Wow...they so can't resist one another! So well written I love it!
Is it safe to say this is no longer a TS??? lol

Continue soon

Hi Fatima, 

Thankyou so much! Glad you liked this part as well ! 

hahah.. yes it is safe to say this aint a TS any more.. Just not sure if it'll be a FS or a SS!

Big smile
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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 11:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jas91

Mona darling wonderful updt again
its always so entertainingStarStarStar
so ZOya was disturbed in d start ki she's getting affected by Asad
but both couldn't help it
both were in each other's thought all d weekWink
Dillu left 2 NY 2 Naj her story is sadOuch
so Asya met again & just like teenager getting excited 4 their dateLOL
both dressed 2 kill & d meeting which followed was just amazing
u did wonderful job once again Mona darlingClap
didn't I say it will b superhit like all ur other works
 
 

Hi Jassy! 

Thankyou so much! I'm glad teko acha laga yeh chapter bhi ! EmbarrassedBig smile

Thankyou, you are very kind with your words! EmbarrassedHug

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 11:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jas91

Originally posted by mona12345

Originally posted by jas91

Mona darling how r u?Tongue  Jassy , Mast hu main. Tu bata ?Wink
I m cool 2Cool
sorry 4 d late comnt  No problem ! Till  the time it comes.Tongue 

but i just loved d updt
it was super se bhi uparWink  Aww. Thankyou so much ! Glad you loved it ! Big smileEmbarrassed
it was shocking that Asad was ok wid it but later i realised here Asya r totally differentEmbarrassed othwise he would have given long lecture on Tameez & TehzeebLOL Oh! They're totally different from those shown in the serial! LOL
I know but Asya r stuck in d head like that na but I realized d difference soonishEmbarrassed
 
so AAK was smitten by Zoe 4 a long timeEmbarrassed
but due 2 her professionalism & uninterest 2 b in relationship he buried his feelingsOuch

1 thing 2 b noted is both r sexually attracted & admire d other , in d 1st part even in Zoya's POV she admires Asad's other qualities & here he does 2
so d thing is why can't they b 2gather-2gather LOL. D way Zoya suggested a honeymoon paradise ka idea yet she don't want 2 b wid AsadShockedConfusedLOL
they want each other but don't want strings attached??

They've their own reasons for not getting involved with each other or anyone for that matter.Yes, they've been attracted to each other from the beginning but never acted upon it because of their reasons! 
[you'll know in the further updates as to why..]
ok so yeh raaz aage jake khulenge Wink

1 more thing if Asad can adopt a child why can't Zoe. I mean why she wants 2 deliver herself otherwise she's so modern than why she want 2 feel motherhood herself 
both r excited & looking forward  2 d process of making a babyROFL but don't want 2 b 2gather this is confusing just a bit.Confused

Yes, Her thinking is very progressive yet somewhere she is kind of reserved,youll know soon. and she doesn't want to adopt because she wants a child of her own. Being sodern doesnt mean you donot want to have babies?!!! LOLLOL kuch bhi haa Jaz ! SleepyTongue 
that I understand Mona bas Zoya kyun aisa chahti hai wanted 2 know

And i know thoda confusing lagega jab tak full story I don't put up. Sorry, but you just got deal with the confusion! LOL Ask questions, I'll answer w/o revealing the aage ka story if i can! Wink
han ab mujhe samajh aa gya ki yeh baate story unfold hone ke saath pta challenge but I can get curious noEmbarrassed  Sure you can be curious. i like curious! Big smile

but anyways Asad is up 4 this deal happilyLOL & has signed it aswell wid a kiss he wanted 2 steal even when she was explaining himLOL
& it was hilarious 2 read him asking qstns as if it was a business deal & Zoe's reactionsLOL

Hhahahah.. Thankyou Jassy. I'm glad you liked it ! Big smile

who says they don't like d subject i like it, its tricky its bold but totally sold Mona darlingLOL wah ik tagline ka avishkar kar diya meneROFL ~~~ Hahahaha.. And I must add I love your tagline ! WinkWinkLOL 
ShukriyaTongue
Dekh maine tere andar ke writer ko jagah diya hai. Abh tu bhi likhna start kar ! Big smileApprove
na baba na yeh writing shaiting mujhse nahi hotiShocked Hhaha.. arrey try toh kar. kya pata tu mast writer nikle ! 
Love u
Take care
See uTongue

Hahahah.. Come see me , Love you too ! x

PS- BTW d most imp thing why u still hadn't changed it into SSShockedAngry it can't b a TS u can't end it in d nxt part.Disapprove It can b easily extended we want 2 read their hilarious process of baby makingROFL omg i know it can b bold but i would love 2 read if u write it keeping d humor in mind it will b awesome. LOL not that u can't write bold or havn't wrote in d past rememberWinkLOL Turn it into SS i say it last time also u changed a TS in SS when i requested u do it this time 2 pretty plzDay Dreaming

Hahahhaa.. ROFL

Okay, khush hoja, I'll have to convert this into a FS or  a SS! 
Yes, likhan toh zaroor hai, but bahut difficult hai mere liye waise likhna.. leme see and try ! Aur tujhe pata hai na, woh sab stories convert toh kar di maine to FS, lekin aage hold par chalegi ! Stern SmileDisapprove Hopefully yeh complete kar pau main.
Yippee I m so so so happy wid this ab ayga mjaDancingDancing
I know jaise hi thoda time mile uhain bhi resume karna I don't like unfinished storiesDisapprove I hope so too. I want to so complete them. I hate keeping you guys waiting like that ! Disapprove
 

& Tu humesah summer aur winter break main hi kyun aati hai age piche bhi ayegi toh we wont mindLOL

Hahahha.. Jab time milta hai likhna tab hi aati hu main! LOL
OS likh diya kar we wont mind but its ok jaise tu comfy haiSmile

I'M wanting to write an OS since some time now, lekin koi concept hi nahi samajh raha. Tu suggest kar kuch? I'll try writing! Embarrassed



Awww, Jasss ! Tune kitna saara likha . I loved reading it! Your comment I read do teen baar! Youre funny as well ! EmbarrassedLOL
 
Mwah ! love you ! x
awe so sweet Hug
love u 2Smile


Okay so this had gotten too long and colourful. Lol! I've replied to your comments in Purple ! 

Hhahah! 

x

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cutie15

omg.. I'm so loving this.!!
This just so interesting and gripping. .
nd asad and zoya are so intense..!!
Ahhh..loved it..
awesome
I love ur style of writing..!!
Update sooon...:)

Hey Cutie,Smile

Thankyou so so much ! So glad you liked it ! Big smile

I'll try! x
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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by quirky_senorita

Its awesome.
Continue soon.

Hey , 
Thankyou so much!Smile

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 11:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SanKsgian

OMG THAT IS SERIOUSLY HOT MAN
READ ALL CHAPTERS IN ONE BIT...
LOVED IT SO MUCH


They San,

Thankyou so much. Glad you liked it ! Big smile

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