New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16 - Page 15

Originally posted by: shailu123

So awesome update yaar n sexy also love it excite for next one continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

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Really beautiful chapter and I am happy that you extend it to an SS, good job 😉

Coming to the chapter, it was really a pleasure to read it and well written, logically and perfectly. 

I love how your portray their hesitation, their attraction, their awkwardness. It was really well described.

So finally both realized the hhuge step that both toook for this deal and all the involvement. I must say that I love how they tried to convince themselves that they are only doing it for the deal and not for more, this part was really funny. 

I read one of your comment and you will detail later why Zoya took this kind of decision and why she don't want to have any attach. It will be interesting to go futher in the character, I feel that you are preparing something good. 

Your story was really good and it has been a long time I didn't been hooked so much to a story like yours.

COntinue to do your good job and God bless you dear.

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Awesome part loved it 

Assad and zoya with their feelings were so nervous and excited 

Asya lunch date and after kiss so hot

Excited for next part 

Thanks for pm 

Plz pm me for next part 

Continue soon 

Originally posted by: fatima30

Wow...they so can't resist one another! So well written I love it!
Is it safe to say this is no longer a TS??? lol

Continue soon

Originally posted by: jas91

Mona darling wonderful updt again

its always so entertaining⭐️⭐️⭐️

so ZOya was disturbed in d start ki she's getting affected by Asad

but both couldn't help it

both were in each other's thought all d week😉

Dillu left 2 NY 2 Naj her story is sad

so Asya met again & just like teenager getting excited 4 their date😆

both dressed 2 kill & d meeting which followed was just amazing

u did wonderful job once again Mona darling👏

didn't I say it will b superhit like all ur other works

 

 

Originally posted by: jas91

awe so sweet 🤗

love u 2😊

Originally posted by: cutie15

omg.. I'm so loving this.!!
This just so interesting and gripping. .
nd asad and zoya are so intense..!!
Ahhh..loved it..
awesome
I love ur style of writing..!!
Update sooon...:)

Originally posted by: quirky_senorita

Its awesome.

Continue soon.

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

OMG THAT IS SERIOUSLY HOT MAN
READ ALL CHAPTERS IN ONE BIT...
LOVED IT SO MUCH

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

PLEASE PM ME YOUR UPDATES
LOVED IT TO BITS