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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 7:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ChocoBerry

Originally posted by mona12345

Originally posted by ChocoBerry

Absolutely rocking update Mona.

OMG kitna hot ending tha. Loved it completely.


So its all about having a baby but not being tied with marriage or with any restrictions of any relationship. That's interesting Smile. And am so glad Asad hasn't blown his head cause of her proposal Big smile as he himself has been wanting to adopt a baby as he's not interested in getting married. 


Waiting to see what they finally end up as. Will they stay true to the deal or break it for more like being together forever bWinkDay Dreaming


Loved it dear its just so so awesome ClapThumbs Up


Love you so so much dear Hug 


Oh and thanks for sharing such a unique concept and story with us Big smile



Chocoo Merii Jaaann !! Heart [ haha..snatching your line] LOL

That^ coming from you means a lot !! Thankyouu so  so much ! Big smileEmbarrassed
Yeah, I'd thought I wouldn't get a positive reception for this story since the concept is not very conventinal. I still think people aren't quite happy with the concept, safe to say, 'shocked' .But honestly I did modify the story a lot so that it fits the mindsets here. Idk, how I'm going to go about it further thoughConfusedStern Smile

AnywayLOL

I'm just so so glad you liked it ! HugHeart

Love you so much and more choco di ! Star

Mwaah ! x


Hahahaha LOL. No problem, use it as much as you can Big smile  ~~~ Fully intend to ! EmbarrassedBig smile "Choco Meri Jaan'


Sweetheart this is a good story and a unique concept so bound to have a mixed bag on the feedback.  Yea safely said Wink. But you know for my story Together a compromise Jo more, I had too got a lot if negativity to have made Zoya cry so much. So it's OK. Just take everything in your stride Thumbs Up ~~ ShockedOuch I absolutely loved that story! It was needed for her to cry so much! LOL But yes, Thankyou so much di , Your words mean a lot! Heart


And trust me, you are an amazing writer Big smile  ~~~ If you say soEmbarrassed [Modesty is soo my thing!ROFL]
But seriously .. Aap se learning! Reading and learning. Still to get there! Big smile


Mwah Hug  Mwahh Mwahh ! Hug

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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 8:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by radadolcevida

Originally posted by ChocoBerry

Originally posted by mona12345

Originally posted by ChocoBerry

Absolutely rocking update Mona.

OMG kitna hot ending tha. Loved it completely.


So its all about having a baby but not being tied with marriage or with any restrictions of any relationship. That's interesting Smile. And am so glad Asad hasn't blown his head cause of her proposal Big smile as he himself has been wanting to adopt a baby as he's not interested in getting married. 


Waiting to see what they finally end up as. Will they stay true to the deal or break it for more like being together forever bWinkDay Dreaming


Loved it dear its just so so awesome ClapThumbs Up


Love you so so much dear Hug 


Oh and thanks for sharing such a unique concept and story with us Big smile



Chocoo Merii Jaaann !! Heart [ haha..snatching your line] LOL

That^ coming from you means a lot !! Thankyouu so  so much ! Big smileEmbarrassed
Yeah, I'd thought I wouldn't get a positive reception for this story since the concept is not very conventinal. I still think people aren't quite happy with the concept, safe to say, 'shocked' .But honestly I did modify the story a lot so that it fits the mindsets here. Idk, how I'm going to go about it further thoughConfusedStern Smile

AnywayLOL

I'm just so so glad you liked it ! HugHeart

Love you so much and more choco di ! Star

Mwaah ! x


Hahahaha LOL. No problem, use it as much as you can Big smile


Sweetheart this is a good story and a unique concept so bound to have a mixed bag on the feedback.  Yea safely said Wink. But you know for my story Together a compromise Jo more, I had too got a lot if negativity to have made Zoya cry so much. So it's OK. Just take everything in your stride Thumbs Up


And trust me, you are an amazing writer Big smile


Mwah Hug

sorry to interfer, but IT'S a GOOD concept. I even started writing a story about, but more as an FF than TS. you were faster and your story is lighter than mine. 
however, your way to write it's so fresh and enjoyable, that i encourage you to continue to write. I agree you have such a great talent. 
 

Hey R,

No problem at all. Always feel free to say what you want to.Positive or negative! Smile

ANd thankyou so much !! Seriously, all that appreciation just motivates me ! x
Thanks buddy! Big smileBig smile

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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 8:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mona12345

Originally posted by ChocoBerry

Originally posted by mona12345

Originally posted by ChocoBerry

Absolutely rocking update Mona.

OMG kitna hot ending tha. Loved it completely.


So its all about having a baby but not being tied with marriage or with any restrictions of any relationship. That's interesting Smile. And am so glad Asad hasn't blown his head cause of her proposal Big smile as he himself has been wanting to adopt a baby as he's not interested in getting married. 


Waiting to see what they finally end up as. Will they stay true to the deal or break it for more like being together forever bWinkDay Dreaming


Loved it dear its just so so awesome ClapThumbs Up


Love you so so much dear Hug 


Oh and thanks for sharing such a unique concept and story with us Big smile



Chocoo Merii Jaaann !! Heart [ haha..snatching your line] LOL

That^ coming from you means a lot !! Thankyouu so  so much ! Big smileEmbarrassed
Yeah, I'd thought I wouldn't get a positive reception for this story since the concept is not very conventinal. I still think people aren't quite happy with the concept, safe to say, 'shocked' .But honestly I did modify the story a lot so that it fits the mindsets here. Idk, how I'm going to go about it further thoughConfusedStern Smile

AnywayLOL

I'm just so so glad you liked it ! HugHeart

Love you so much and more choco di ! Star

Mwaah ! x


Hahahaha LOL. No problem, use it as much as you can Big smile  ~~~ Fully intend to ! EmbarrassedBig smile "Choco Meri Jaan'


Sweetheart this is a good story and a unique concept so bound to have a mixed bag on the feedback.  Yea safely said Wink. But you know for my story Together a compromise Jo more, I had too got a lot if negativity to have made Zoya cry so much. So it's OK. Just take everything in your stride Thumbs Up ~~ ShockedOuch I absolutely loved that story! It was needed for her to cry so much! LOL But yes, Thankyou so much di , Your words mean a lot! Heart


And trust me, you are an amazing writer Big smile  ~~~ If you say soEmbarrassed [Modesty is soo my thing!ROFL]
But seriously .. Aap se learning! Reading and learning. Still to get there! Big smile


Mwah Hug  Mwahh Mwahh ! Hug


OMG Shocked. Learning from Me Blushing. Now I feel like hiding my face, sharam aa gai mujhe Blushing

HugHeart

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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 8:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jas91

Mona darling how r u?Tongue  Jassy , Mast hu main. Tu bata ?Wink

sorry 4 d late comnt  No problem ! Till  the time it comes.Tongue

but i just loved d updt
it was super se bhi uparWink  Aww. Thankyou so much ! Glad you loved it ! Big smileEmbarrassed
it was shocking that Asad was ok wid it but later i realised here Asya r totally differentEmbarrassed othwise he would have given long lecture on Tameez & TehzeebLOL Oh! They're totally different from those shown in the serial! LOL
so AAK was smitten by Zoe 4 a long timeEmbarrassed
but due 2 her professionalism & uninterest 2 b in relationship he buried his feelingsOuch

1 thing 2 b noted is both r sexually attracted & admire d other , in d 1st part even in Zoya's POV she admires Asad's other qualities & here he does 2
so d thing is why can't they b 2gather-2gather LOL. D way Zoya suggested a honeymoon paradise ka idea yet she don't want 2 b wid AsadShockedConfusedLOL
they want each other but don't want strings attached??

They've their own reasons for not getting involved with each other or anyone for that matter.Yes, they've been attracted to each other from the beginning but never acted upon it because of their reasons! 
[you'll know in the further updates as to why..]


1 more thing if Asad can adopt a child why can't Zoe. I mean why she wants 2 deliver herself otherwise she's so modern than why she want 2 feel motherhood herself 
both r excited & looking forward  2 d process of making a babyROFL but don't want 2 b 2gather this is confusing just a bit.Confused

Yes, Her thinking is very progressive yet somewhere she is kind of reserved,youll know soon. and she doesn't want to adopt because she wants a child of her own. Being sodern doesnt mean you donot want to have babies?!!! LOLLOL kuch bhi haa Jaz ! SleepyTongue 

And i know thoda confusing lagega jab tak full story I don't put up. Sorry, but you just got deal with the confusion! LOL Ask questions, I'll answer w/o revealing the aage ka story if i can! Wink

but anyways Asad is up 4 this deal happilyLOL & has signed it aswell wid a kiss he wanted 2 steal even when she was explaining himLOL
& it was hilarious 2 read him asking qstns as if it was a business deal & Zoe's reactionsLOL

Hhahahah.. Thankyou Jassy. I'm glad you liked it ! Big smile

who says they don't like d subject i like it, its tricky its bold but totally sold Mona darlingLOL wah ik tagline ka avishkar kar diya meneROFL ~~~ Hahahaha.. And I must add I love your tagline ! WinkWinkLOL 
Dekh maine tere andar ke writer ko jagah diya hai. Abh tu bhi likhna start kar ! Big smileApprove
Love u
Take care
See uTongue

Hahahah.. Come see me , Love you too ! x

PS- BTW d most imp thing why u still hadn't changed it into SSShockedAngry it can't b a TS u can't end it in d nxt part.Disapprove It can b easily extended we want 2 read their hilarious process of baby makingROFL omg i know it can b bold but i would love 2 read if u write it keeping d humor in mind it will b awesome. LOL not that u can't write bold or havn't wrote in d past rememberWinkLOL Turn it into SS i say it last time also u changed a TS in SS when i requested u do it this time 2 pretty plzDay Dreaming

Hahahhaa.. ROFL

Okay, khush hoja, I'll have to convert this into a FS or  a SS! 
Yes, likhan toh zaroor hai, but bahut difficult hai mere liye waise likhna.. leme see and try ! Aur tujhe pata hai na, woh sab stories convert toh kar di maine to FS, lekin aage hold par chalegi ! Stern SmileDisapprove Hopefully yeh complete kar pau main.

& Tu humesah summer aur winter break main hi kyun aati hai age piche bhi ayegi toh we wont mindLOL

Hahahha.. Jab time milta hai likhna tab hi aati hu main! LOL



Awww, Jasss ! Tune kitna saara likha . I loved reading it! Your comment I read do teen baar! Youre funny as well ! EmbarrassedLOL

Mwah ! love you ! x
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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 8:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ChocoBerry

Originally posted by radadolcevida

Originally posted by ChocoBerry

Originally posted by mona12345

Originally posted by ChocoBerry

Absolutely rocking update Mona.

OMG kitna hot ending tha. Loved it completely.


So its all about having a baby but not being tied with marriage or with any restrictions of any relationship. That's interesting Smile. And am so glad Asad hasn't blown his head cause of her proposal Big smile as he himself has been wanting to adopt a baby as he's not interested in getting married. 


Waiting to see what they finally end up as. Will they stay true to the deal or break it for more like being together forever bWinkDay Dreaming


Loved it dear its just so so awesome ClapThumbs Up


Love you so so much dear Hug 


Oh and thanks for sharing such a unique concept and story with us Big smile



Chocoo Merii Jaaann !! Heart [ haha..snatching your line] LOL

That^ coming from you means a lot !! Thankyouu so  so much ! Big smileEmbarrassed
Yeah, I'd thought I wouldn't get a positive reception for this story since the concept is not very conventinal. I still think people aren't quite happy with the concept, safe to say, 'shocked' .But honestly I did modify the story a lot so that it fits the mindsets here. Idk, how I'm going to go about it further thoughConfusedStern Smile

AnywayLOL

I'm just so so glad you liked it ! HugHeart

Love you so much and more choco di ! Star

Mwaah ! x


Hahahaha LOL. No problem, use it as much as you can Big smile


Sweetheart this is a good story and a unique concept so bound to have a mixed bag on the feedback.  Yea safely said Wink. But you know for my story Together a compromise Jo more, I had too got a lot if negativity to have made Zoya cry so much. So it's OK. Just take everything in your stride Thumbs Up


And trust me, you are an amazing writer Big smile


Mwah Hug

sorry to interfer, but IT'S a GOOD concept. I even started writing a story about, but more as an FF than TS. you were faster and your story is lighter than mine. 
however, your way to write it's so fresh and enjoyable, that i encourage you to continue to write. I agree you have such a great talent. 
 


@ radadolcevida most welcome to hop on anytime Hug ~~~ Agreeed ! Approve


Mona, see I told you Cool LOL  ~~~~ Yes, You're amazing, you know ?!!!!! LOLHeart

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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 8:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anopama

Oh wow what a deal 
I would definitely put one like tht on the table with tht sexy man 
But they sure this deal can just be platonic 
Bcuz they both have some serious sexual tension 
They have feelings they r denying 
Oh good asad definitely seal the deal 
Zoya want an all week thing not a one night thing 
Love it continue 

Hey anopama, 
How you been?Smile

Always good to hear from you ! Big smile I'm so glad you liked it !

Thankyou so much . Yeah well, lets see if they maintain theire distance post delivering the deal.. ! LOL

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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 8:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ChocoBerry

Originally posted by mona12345

Originally posted by ChocoBerry

Originally posted by mona12345

Originally posted by ChocoBerry

Absolutely rocking update Mona.

OMG kitna hot ending tha. Loved it completely.


So its all about having a baby but not being tied with marriage or with any restrictions of any relationship. That's interesting Smile. And am so glad Asad hasn't blown his head cause of her proposal Big smile as he himself has been wanting to adopt a baby as he's not interested in getting married. 


Waiting to see what they finally end up as. Will they stay true to the deal or break it for more like being together forever bWinkDay Dreaming


Loved it dear its just so so awesome ClapThumbs Up


Love you so so much dear Hug 


Oh and thanks for sharing such a unique concept and story with us Big smile



Chocoo Merii Jaaann !! Heart [ haha..snatching your line] LOL

That^ coming from you means a lot !! Thankyouu so  so much ! Big smileEmbarrassed
Yeah, I'd thought I wouldn't get a positive reception for this story since the concept is not very conventinal. I still think people aren't quite happy with the concept, safe to say, 'shocked' .But honestly I did modify the story a lot so that it fits the mindsets here. Idk, how I'm going to go about it further thoughConfusedStern Smile

AnywayLOL

I'm just so so glad you liked it ! HugHeart

Love you so much and more choco di ! Star

Mwaah ! x


Hahahaha LOL. No problem, use it as much as you can Big smile  ~~~ Fully intend to ! EmbarrassedBig smile "Choco Meri Jaan'


Sweetheart this is a good story and a unique concept so bound to have a mixed bag on the feedback.  Yea safely said Wink. But you know for my story Together a compromise Jo more, I had too got a lot if negativity to have made Zoya cry so much. So it's OK. Just take everything in your stride Thumbs Up ~~ ShockedOuch I absolutely loved that story! It was needed for her to cry so much! LOL But yes, Thankyou so much di , Your words mean a lot! Heart


And trust me, you are an amazing writer Big smile  ~~~ If you say soEmbarrassed [Modesty is soo my thing!ROFL]
But seriously .. Aap se learning! Reading and learning. Still to get there! Big smile


Mwah Hug  Mwahh Mwahh ! Hug


OMG Shocked. Learning from Me Blushing. Now I feel like hiding my face, sharam aa gai mujhe Blushing

HugHeart

OF COURSE ! 
hahahaha .. You're so cute na ! LOLHugHeart


Acha bahut buttering ho gaya ! LOLLOLnext update dedo hum besabr readers ko .Day Dreaming Plejj ! 
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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 8:44am | IP Logged
hello dear, 
if you don't mind I want to suggest your story to my readers (even if I guess you have many and in common ) during my next update Big smile of my story Asya: the crossing time

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