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New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16 (Page 12)

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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 4:39am | IP Logged
Mona darling how r u?Tongue

sorry 4 d late comnt

but i just loved d updt
it was super se bhi uparWink
it was shocking that Asad was ok wid it but later i realised here Asya r totally differentEmbarrassed othwise he would have given long lecture on Tameez & TehzeebLOL
so AAK was smitten by Zoe 4 a long timeEmbarrassed
but due 2 her professionalism & uninterest 2 b in relationship he buried his feelingsOuch

1 thing 2 b noted is both r sexually attracted & admire d other , in d 1st part even in Zoya's POV she admires Asad's other qualities & here he does 2
so d thing is why can't they b 2gather-2gather LOL. D way Zoya suggested a honeymoon paradise ka idea yet she don't want 2 b wid AsadShockedConfusedLOL
they want each other but don't want strings attached??

1 more thing if Asad can adopt a child why can't Zoe. I mean why she wants 2 deliver herself otherwise she's so modern than why she want 2 feel motherhood herself 
both r excited & looking forward  2 d process of making a babyROFL but don't want 2 b 2gather this is confusing just a bit.Confused

but anyways Asad is up 4 this deal happilyLOL & has signed it aswell wid a kiss he wanted 2 steal even when she was explaining himLOL
& it was hilarious 2 read him asking qstns as if it was a business deal & Zoe's reactionsLOL

who says they don't like d subject i like it, its tricky its bold but totally sold Mona darlingLOL wah ik tagline ka avishkar kar diya meneROFL
Love u
Take care
See uTongue

PS- BTW d most imp thing why u still hadn't changed it into SSShockedAngry it can't b a TS u can't end it in d nxt part.Disapprove It can b easily extended we want 2 read their hilarious process of baby makingROFL omg i know it can b bold but i would love 2 read if u write it keeping d humor in mind it will b awesome. LOL not that u can't write bold or havn't wrote in d past rememberWinkLOL Turn it into SS i say it last time also u changed a TS in SS when i requested u do it this time 2 pretty plzDay Dreaming

& Tu humesah summer aur winter break main hi kyun aati hai age piche bhi ayegi toh we wont mindLOL


Edited by jas91 - 11 May 2015 at 5:34am

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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 7:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by radadolcevida

I came across your story and I read both of the chapter. I must , woow, I really love it. Big smile
everything was really good, the idea, the writting, even the deal Embarrassed
Interesting to see that both were attracked to each other but acted only professionnal way. I really love her audacity and Asad's naughtiness. 
it's just sad that it's only TS, we would have enjoy their "fake" honeymoon or should I say that week to fall on love LOL
Brillant story and brillant idea, I really love. I hope you will update soon, can't wait to see how they will take the next step now.


Hey Radadolcevida! Smile

Thats ^ really sweet and generous of you. The appreciation really brought a grin to my face !!! Big smileEmbarrassed

Thankyou so much ! I'm so glad you liked it ! 
Yeah, Asad and Zoya here are very different characters from what they portrayed in the show! 

Hhahah.. I might have to convert this TS into a FS or SS. EmbarrassedBig smile


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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 7:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fatima30

This is written so so well! I love it!
A very very interesting story cannot wait to read on!
Asya want each other so badly...they'll break the deal pretty soon! lol

Update soon

Hey Fatima,

Thankyou so much. Glad you liked it ! Big smile

I'll try ! 


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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 7:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cutie15

This is jusr so amazing..!!!
Loved it .
this is very exciting. ..
looking forward to the next update. .
update soon plss..!!


Hey cutie,

Thankyou so much. Glad you liked it ! Big smile

I'll try. Haven't started yet though.
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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 7:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by radadolcevida

Originally posted by ChocoBerry

Originally posted by mona12345

Originally posted by ChocoBerry

Absolutely rocking update Mona.

OMG kitna hot ending tha. Loved it completely.


So its all about having a baby but not being tied with marriage or with any restrictions of any relationship. That's interesting Smile. And am so glad Asad hasn't blown his head cause of her proposal Big smile as he himself has been wanting to adopt a baby as he's not interested in getting married. 


Waiting to see what they finally end up as. Will they stay true to the deal or break it for more like being together forever bWinkDay Dreaming


Loved it dear its just so so awesome ClapThumbs Up


Love you so so much dear Hug 


Oh and thanks for sharing such a unique concept and story with us Big smile



Chocoo Merii Jaaann !! Heart [ haha..snatching your line] LOL

That^ coming from you means a lot !! Thankyouu so  so much ! Big smileEmbarrassed
Yeah, I'd thought I wouldn't get a positive reception for this story since the concept is not very conventinal. I still think people aren't quite happy with the concept, safe to say, 'shocked' .But honestly I did modify the story a lot so that it fits the mindsets here. Idk, how I'm going to go about it further thoughConfusedStern Smile

AnywayLOL

I'm just so so glad you liked it ! HugHeart

Love you so much and more choco di ! Star

Mwaah ! x


Hahahaha LOL. No problem, use it as much as you can Big smile


Sweetheart this is a good story and a unique concept so bound to have a mixed bag on the feedback.  Yea safely said Wink. But you know for my story Together a compromise Jo more, I had too got a lot if negativity to have made Zoya cry so much. So it's OK. Just take everything in your stride Thumbs Up


And trust me, you are an amazing writer Big smile


Mwah Hug

sorry to interfer, but IT'S a GOOD concept. I even started writing a story about, but more as an FF than TS. you were faster and your story is lighter than mine. 
however, your way to write it's so fresh and enjoyable, that i encourage you to continue to write. I agree you have such a great talent. 
 


@ radadolcevida most welcome to hop on anytime Hug


Mona, see I told you Cool LOL

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Originally posted by ak020203

So good..
Exciting

Thanks

Hey ak ! 

Thankyou so much ! Smile
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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 7:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jazz2010

Wow wow wow
a very good update
pls pls pretty pls continue soon Tongue


Hey Jazz ,

Thankyou so much. Glad you liked it ! 

Hhaaha.. I shall try ! 
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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 7:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MayurChan

Interesting part.

Thanks ! Smile

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