No res 4 me katti ChanduπJASSSYY, How you been babe? You were missed !! π€Baby, I'm so sorry. It might have slipped my mind. Main kabhi aise res nahi karti na uske liye. But the changes were made even before I went on exile! ππ
updt was SuperbZoya explained her reason 2 have a babyShe just wanted 2 have some1 who will be hers only but that was outcome of her Mother who used 2 come in her dreamsBut I loved it ki now Zoe is more happy wid baby as its wid Asad whom she has fallen in loveπHaina , Thank god it made sense. I wasn't sure of what I was writing even! π₯±π
Their love making was hot & intense as always u write these parts wid easeπHhahaha... are you kidding me? It is sooo darn difficult to write intimate scenes. Takes me the maximum time to frame those scenes, especially.π³π
Both have had slip of tongue almost confessing their love but 1 qstn did other person caught that incomplete ILU or not ?That we shall know soon enough! Maybe! πD end was emotional Asad has gone somewhere & Zoe is thinking he left her π₯Ίher breakdown was absolutely fantastic she's blaming her cruel fate Trust is gone & shedding tears on her lost love.ππAb kar kuch Chanduπ‘πArey isme main kya kar sakti hu ? He wanted to leave toh left. Abh kya pata kaha gaya ho gaya hai yeh atrangi ! π
Originally posted by: nizahairu
I read 9parts in one go
Lovely upate
Plewse pm me
Asad kahan gaya???? Zoya π... An don't tell me u planning to take a leap where both AsYa think they left other as it was only deal and nothing more and hate each other :(
Hey Chandni...Just stumbled over this FF and I kicked myself for not reading it earlier :P
This is one interesting storyline and a great plot. I'm loving the way they've come to care for each other. Make them realise their feelings soon pleaseee :)I don't usually read mature stuff but here in your FF, you've written it so soberly that I'm impressed :) Great work hun.Last bit was confusing and heart-breaking as well...Hope the problems are cleared out soon. I dun wanna see Zoe suffering :(Continue soon dear <3
Originally posted by: suearmaniac
achaaw? Himmat he esa karne ki
asya fans ke naampe kalank bulaungi me tujhe agar esa kuch likha he
Update naaa plzzz...:(
Originally posted by: suearmaniac
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emotional blackmail karu fir maanegi kyaπ
Originally posted by: suearmaniac
where are you??
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