New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16 - Page 63

Originally posted by: --CrazyForKSG--

Awesome update
well.written

Originally posted by: jas91

No res 4 me katti Chandu😭

JASSSYY, How you been babe? You were missed !! 🤗

 

Baby, I'm so sorry. It might have slipped my mind. Main kabhi aise res nahi karti na uske liye. But the changes were made even before I went on exile! 😃😆

updt was Superb

Zoya explained her reason 2 have a baby

She just wanted 2 have some1 who will be hers only but that was outcome of her Mother who used 2 come in her dreams

But I loved it ki now Zoe is more happy wid baby as its wid Asad whom she has fallen in love😃

Haina , Thank god it made sense. I wasn't sure of what I was writing even! 🥱😆

Their love making was hot & intense as always u write these parts wid ease😉

Hhahaha... are you kidding me? It is sooo darn difficult to write intimate scenes. Takes me the maximum time to frame those scenes, especially.😳😆

Both have had slip of tongue almost confessing their love but 1 qstn did other person caught that incomplete ILU or not ?

That we shall know soon enough! Maybe! 😛

D end was emotional Asad has gone somewhere & Zoe is thinking he left her 🥺

her breakdown was absolutely fantastic she's blaming her cruel fate Trust is gone & shedding tears on her lost love.😭😭

Ab kar kuch Chandu😡😭

Arey isme main kya kar sakti hu ? He wanted to leave toh left. Abh kya pata kaha gaya ho gaya hai yeh atrangi ! 😆

Originally posted by: -silentbang-

Hawwtt update 😳

Where are u asad ???

Originally posted by: nizahairu

I read 9parts in one go
Lovely upate
Plewse pm me

Originally posted by: Persiko

Asad kahan gaya???? Zoya 😭... An don't tell me u planning to take a leap where both AsYa think they left other as it was only deal and nothing more and hate each other :(

Originally posted by: _Annie_

Hey Chandni...Just stumbled over this FF and I kicked myself for not reading it earlier :P

This is one interesting storyline and a great plot. I'm loving the way they've come to care for each other. Make them realise their feelings soon pleaseee :) 

I don't usually read mature stuff but here in your FF, you've written it so soberly that I'm impressed :) Great work hun.

Last bit was confusing and heart-breaking as well...Hope the problems are cleared out soon. I dun wanna see Zoe suffering :(

Continue soon dear <3

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

achaaw? Himmat he esa karne ki
asya fans ke naampe kalank bulaungi me tujhe agar esa kuch likha he

anha kyu tease kar rahi he mujhe pls update dedena





ghanta thanku bolu me tujhe! Kya tali bajau? Wah wah kya badiya spoiler he!
Chandni joote padenge tujhe nd do tin me padwaungi samjhi


hawww!!!!
chandnii ki bacchiii😡

Originally posted by: ajanshul

Nice

Originally posted by: cutie15

Update naaa plzzz...:(

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

😭
emotional blackmail karu fir maanegi kya😛