New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16 - Page 55

Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing chapter
Beautifully written
At the same time very passionate and intense
However the ending was unexpected 
Please continue soon
Eagerly waiting for the next part πŸ˜Š
Posted: 8 years ago
Where has Asad gone? I hope to get some breakfast...
but the MU now...
Poor Zoya...but Asad would never leave like this...
Please update soon...
Posted: 8 years ago
So hwwwt update☺️ love it but where did asad go😲 ponr zoya πŸ˜” continue soon😊Edited by shailu123 - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
Plzz don't separate my asya... 
Hope they confess soon... 
Posted: 8 years ago
nice update but where asad has gone. felt bad for zoya.
Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update 
It was wonderful to see them being there for each other 
They can comfort each other make each other smile and take the pain away 
So Zoya explains y she wants a child but her views change
Asad understand and didn't judge and happy she choose him 
So love the ice cream love making all the passion and intensity 
Love the slip up once by Zoe and twice by asad 
Oh no now asad is gone can't be reached his assistant too can't be reach 
And she is all alone feeling like her dreams has shattered 
So she is packed and ready to leave her deal broken 
Aww she acknowledged she was starting to love 
Where could he have gone work related 
Or maybe he think all night and went out o but a ring to be with her forever 
Propose her 
Continue soon 
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by Chandnii.




Reserved for Choco and Surbhi!πŸ˜ƒ
thanku for special ressing chandnii πŸ˜ƒ
Have unresed
Nd m dying to read more
Update pls
Posted: 8 years ago
Chandnii, I am so sorry, you will hate me πŸ˜­
my comment was really long , promise next time, I will be short (maybe one or two paragraph πŸ˜ƒ, promise i will start  diet πŸ˜†)
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by Chandnii.



Reserved for Choco and Surbhi! πŸ˜ƒ


Chandini πŸ€— tha k you for the Res.


I absolutely loved the update. So sensuous, uff. Fanning myself β˜ΊοΈ. The detailing of their love making ☺️ was done so flawlessly Chandini. A brilliant job dear πŸ‘


And then the morning after. Where one expects more romance and more ahem ahem! What did poor Zoya get? An empty house πŸ˜²


Her feeling used and left alone again is not baseless. Has a history to support that fate will play bi**h again in her life. But I felt happy seeing her strong (somewhat) take a decision and wanting to go away. 

I know it doesn't and wouldn't end here. Waiting to see how you take it further.


Loving the whole concept and your execution of the plot. Update jaldi OK!


Love you dearly Mo... Oops trying πŸ˜›... Love you dearly Chandini β€οΈπŸ€—


Posted: 8 years ago
Very Good and Well written chapt..
But again...the Cruelty strikes...and A Misunderstanding is created..
Why do i feel that...Someone yaa Dilshaad only must have come and Asad went to receive...her.
Starting part and Zoya's confession was good and I don't feel in any way she is wrong...about making a life for whatever reason she...said.
Interesting part..
Its a request plzz...don't let this seperation and MU for a longer time.
Continue soonish.

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