New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16 - Page 41

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey Mona..
Loved the update..
Loved the way it all started all happy n flirtings but went on to ne sad n intense.
I hate that man ...I don't have words.. To tell them to leave the room..
It was yucks.

Waiting to know Zoya ki kahani.

Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
This was such an intense part Mona
I mean really wonderfully penned yaar👏👏
u definitely needed time 2 write this😊 
The starting was lovely
Asya were super hot ☺️☺️
not getting enough of each other & still thinking about baby
than came their playful side when they were clicking pix
wanting to know more about themselves
haye when Asad called Zoe his babies mommy😳😆
& than d seriousness just blown it away
Asad's past was really horrible it must have been heart shattering 4 him & Dillu
that pathetic man was a bloody bas***d🤬
Asad ka gussa was justified & i could imagine that scene. This Asad was scary😵
he thought Zoya didn't have a past but now she will share her past hope it wont b very painful

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey mona awesome update they r so sexy😳 so that is asad's past his father such😡 poor asad he witnessd such a thing 😭 now waiting for zoya's past plz continue soon😊Edited by shailu123 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Asad shared his past with Zoya which was painful. One side revealed & waiting for Zoya past to reveal. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
cannot wait for next update...
plz update soon i really want to know abouy zoya's past..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Quiet a lovely update 
It started off with the love romance 
Well love in baby making love in they don't know it is there yet 
All day they did making sure a baby would be conceived 
So now learning abt each other to know what traits their child will have 
I love when she said my baby he said our baby 
And how he called her his baby mommy 
So he shared his horrific past with her 
Omg what a gruesome story it was the audacity for tht man 
No wonder asad can't say father or abbu 
It was horrible and his wife and child had to see tht and he didn't stop 
He finished what he was doing 😡
So now he was walking away and she said she has a horrible past too 
One tht has left her broken 
So both their past make them don't want to be in relationships 
But them together can heal each other 
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautifully written!!
Loved it ...
time for Zoya's past
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Posted: 8 years ago
Long time.. I finally got a moment to spare to read dis fav story of mine
Wonderful update.. So Asad's past revealed. Can't believe his father was such a sick man.. And zoya's too!!! Waiting.. Update soon ;)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Me here 😉😆

Hey Mona, I loved loved loved the update. It had so many elements and emotions making it a well balanced update.


Loved how it began with romance 😳 and then highlighted the reason behind them not believing in relationships. Asad's anger, as if rolling off him, uff made me scared of him too. And I really don't have words to express what I felt reading the sight he and his mum were greeted to followed by the audacity of thatbman to tell them to go away 😡


Beautifully done part Mona. Absolutely amazing. Am so eager to read what past Zoya has... Can't wait for the next update. Please jaldi pen it down 😃


Love you loads sweetheart 🤗


Hey Choco di,😳

Thank you  so much for the appreciation!
Glad you liked this one too.

Ikr! Disgusting human being!

I'll try putting up the next part ina few days!

Love you so much! Mwah! :*

P.S: Thank you for all the help and support! ❤️