New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16 - Page 40

wonderful part

Wow It's amazing
It's so beautifully written
Perfect mixture of intense, pains n emotions
It's superbly written

Amazing. Loved it.
Asya scenes r good.
Asad's past is so sad.
Next zoya's past will be revealed.
Continue soon.

Wonderful update...

Ouch, it must be very traumatic to see one of his parents in a compromising position... I can easily understand Asad's anger. Zoya seems to have a dark past too... Loved the progression of their relationship, both are building a relation based on trust.

Very good update !

awesome update
like it
thanks for pm

Very Good and well written part..Chandini.
For a 11yr old to witness such a scene is horrifyingg..and can have a huge bad impact on his mind..
AsYa part was wonderful...
Next is Zoya's past..
Update it soonish..

Originally posted by: mona12345

Hi sweet tehs,

For starters wou can call me Chandni! 😊

Aww, thank you so much for all those lovely adjectives! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it so far! 😳

np! 😊

interesting 

So the couple is discussing their past...