New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16 - Page 38

Posted: 8 years ago
are you serious?????
Don't be so cruel
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by jas91


res๐Ÿ˜ƒ
unres
 
ok here I m wid my super late comnt๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
both part 5 & 6 were basically same wid Asad & Zoya's POV
1st it was Asad's
it stared wid him admiring d pic he snapped of Zoya widout her knowledge & thinking how beautiful she is inside & outside that's true๐Ÿ˜›
earlier d night Asad asked Zoya 2 shift 1 day b4 despo he is & even Zoya eagerly agreed๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Gharke staff ko chute bhi de di aur same Room main bhi shift ho gaye MR Khan๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
his monologue that he felt he had given himself 2 her intentionally was very nice
true both have given themselves 2 each other widout their knowledge or they know but don't admit๐Ÿ˜‰
they felt shy & embarrassed at start of d evening but later threw their sharmo hya our of KV๐Ÿ˜ณ
their sweet yet passionate kisses were magical 2 read
Soon both couldn't wait 4 more but Asad wanted 2 make it special & both groomed themselves 2 impressed each other I like what I see oops read๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
both shamelessly admired & complimented & finally claimed each other
D love making or I say baby making was very passionate & intense & at d same time overwhelming u gave it an emotional touch which should b there๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
 
nxt came Zoys's POV
she was hesitant 1st but didn't wanna lose 1 extra night๐Ÿ˜‰
she kept d dress simple & sexy were 4 later๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜† 
Zoya's checkout session zyada detail likha kyun Mona Darling KSG AAK hai isliye๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰
She was touched wid Asad's small gestures like dismissing house help keeping in mind their privacy & calling Zoya all d week asking things she will need awe so sweet of him
All his care & gentleness has struck a chord in heart โค๏ธ
she feel pampered precious cherished happy satisfied secure & at home in his arms.
Zoya agar itna sab feel hota hai toh what more u want just marry d man & do d love making & baby making as much u want 4 d rest of ur life.๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

Hahaha.. Hi Jassy! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Kaisi hai? Kidhar thi tu?
I missed you so mch.  :(
Yes, very desperate to be with each other, spend some more time with each other, also, yes, they are stupid people who are unnecessarily complicating their lives, and making it difficult for me to write a balanced story! ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜†

I think I'll just get them married and finish the story! Hai na?!๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜†
 
Mona darling Fantastic piece of work ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Aww! Thank you Janemann! :*

I know maine humor dalne ko bola tha but its ok I loved this style as well

Yeh story main humor shayad himilega, One because its a different story line and two because main likh hi nahi pa rahi ! ๐Ÿ˜ต
Baby making process was big hit ab jaldi aage ka likho๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Love u sweetu
Take care always๐Ÿค—

Love you too , babydoll! 
You too! ๐Ÿค—
 
P.S: Like always, I loved loved your comment! It's so sweet of you to leave back these detailed feedback!โญ๏ธ
Mwah! x
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by cutie15



Whattt..???? Nooo ๐Ÿคข
no no yr plzzz..
we are such lovely ppl..dont do this to us..
ab jldi se update and make us pls..
pls pls..

Hahaha,,

Hi Cutie,

you guys sure are lovley people! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Yeah, I'm facing a bit of a block right now. I'm writing at snails speed.. which is why ... But I'll try to work something out,

Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by jas91


 
Han ttu kar hold phir main btati hun tujhe๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

Hhaha.. Darr gayi main tere se! ๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคฃ
 
yahan incomplete storiyan likhne aati hai kya

Hahhaaha, okay this really cracked me up, even though it shouldnt have! (besharam me :P)
 
aur hume wait karke stane ke liye๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
 
upar wala unres main jo I love u bola who cancel I hate u "turning my face other side"

Peace woman! I love you okay, and I love I love yous, dont change stuff! ๐Ÿค”
Maarungi teko! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Acha but seriously, sorry lekin aajkal likh nahi paa rahi main, toh thodasa time lagege... hopefully I'll complete the next chapter soon. Aaj hi start kiya hai, one parah- current status. so please be patient and non- violent! ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by radadolcevida



of course you can, ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

but think about again 

 

Hi Rada,

๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

You guys really give threat messages no๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜†

So, I'll ponder upon my decision! Pakka! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by shailu123


no yaar ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ continue this

Hi shailu,

I'm facing a bit of a writers nblock at the moment..
Some time please, i'll come around with the next part as soon as I can! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by nnn


are you serious?????
Don't be so cruel

Hhahah?

Cruel?

Okay, I won't be cruel! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Also,


I won't be serious!


Cool?

๐Ÿ˜›
Posted: 8 years ago
MONA!!!!๐Ÿ˜ก

Like really you put that message ๐Ÿ˜ฒ????


Am shocked ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ


I read all the threats you got and trust me, I will put an infinite sign to them all, utna threat hai mujhse. Better not try anything on this one. I love this story yaar 


Chalo ab start writing, one para a day, or two doesn't matter, what matters is that you are doing your best as per time.


Am waiting OK. Don't forget ๐Ÿ˜ณ


Love you dearly ๐Ÿค—
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by mona12345




Hahaha,,

Hi Cutie,

you guys sure are lovley people!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Yeah, I'm facing a bit of a block right now. I'm writing at snails speed.. which is why ... But I'll try to work something out,


Its ok.. take your time..but plz dont leave this story.. :)
All d best.. ๐Ÿ˜‰
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by mona12345


Oye I will keep giving my lovely comnts bus tu likti reh tabhi toh main comnt de paungi na. Take care muwaah๐Ÿค—

 

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