Originally posted by jas91
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ok here I m wid my super late comnt๐ณ๐ณ
both part 5 & 6 were basically same wid Asad & Zoya's POV
1st it was Asad's
it stared wid him admiring d pic he snapped of Zoya widout her knowledge & thinking how beautiful she is inside & outside that's true๐
earlier d night Asad asked Zoya 2 shift 1 day b4 despo he is & even Zoya eagerly agreed๐๐
Gharke staff ko chute bhi de di aur same Room main bhi shift ho gaye MR Khan๐๐
his monologue that he felt he had given himself 2 her intentionally was very nice
true both have given themselves 2 each other widout their knowledge or they know but don't admit๐
they felt shy & embarrassed at start of d evening but later threw their sharmo hya our of KV๐ณ
their sweet yet passionate kisses were magical 2 read
Soon both couldn't wait 4 more but Asad wanted 2 make it special & both groomed themselves 2 impressed each other I like what I see oops read๐๐
both shamelessly admired & complimented & finally claimed each other
D love making or I say baby making was very passionate & intense & at d same time overwhelming u gave it an emotional touch which should b there๐๐ผ
nxt came Zoys's POV
she was hesitant 1st but didn't wanna lose 1 extra night๐
she kept d dress simple & sexy were 4 later๐ณ๐
Zoya's checkout session zyada detail likha kyun Mona Darling KSG AAK hai isliye๐ณ๐
She was touched wid Asad's small gestures like dismissing house help keeping in mind their privacy & calling Zoya all d week asking things she will need awe so sweet of him
All his care & gentleness has struck a chord in heart โค๏ธ
she feel pampered precious cherished happy satisfied secure & at home in his arms.
Zoya agar itna sab feel hota hai toh what more u want just marry d man & do d love making & baby making as much u want 4 d rest of ur life.๐๐
Hahaha.. Hi Jassy! ๐ณ
Kaisi hai? Kidhar thi tu?
I missed you so mch. :(
Yes, very desperate to be with each other, spend some more time with each other, also, yes, they are stupid people who are unnecessarily complicating their lives, and making it difficult for me to write a balanced story! ๐๐
I think I'll just get them married and finish the story! Hai na?!๐๐๐
Mona darling Fantastic piece of work ๐๐
Aww! Thank you Janemann! :*
I know maine humor dalne ko bola tha but its ok I loved this style as well
Yeh story main humor shayad himilega, One because its a different story line and two because main likh hi nahi pa rahi ! ๐ต
Baby making process was big hit ab jaldi aage ka likho๐
Love u sweetu
Take care always๐ค
Love you too , babydoll!
You too! ๐ค
P.S: Like always, I loved loved your comment! It's so sweet of you to leave back these detailed feedback!โญ๏ธ
Mwah! x