New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16 - Page 38

This content was originally posted by: jas91

res😃

unres

 

ok here I m wid my super late comnt😳😳

both part 5 & 6 were basically same wid Asad & Zoya's POV

1st it was Asad's

it stared wid him admiring d pic he snapped of Zoya widout her knowledge & thinking how beautiful she is inside & outside that's true😛

earlier d night Asad asked Zoya 2 shift 1 day b4 despo he is & even Zoya eagerly agreed😆😆

Gharke staff ko chute bhi de di aur same Room main bhi shift ho gaye MR Khan😆😆

his monologue that he felt he had given himself 2 her intentionally was very nice

true both have given themselves 2 each other widout their knowledge or they know but don't admit😉

they felt shy & embarrassed at start of d evening but later threw their sharmo hya our of KV😳

their sweet yet passionate kisses were magical 2 read

Soon both couldn't wait 4 more but Asad wanted 2 make it special & both groomed themselves 2 impressed each other I like what I see oops read😆😆

both shamelessly admired & complimented & finally claimed each other

D love making or I say baby making was very passionate & intense & at d same time overwhelming u gave it an emotional touch which should b there👍🏼

 

nxt came Zoys's POV

she was hesitant 1st but didn't wanna lose 1 extra night😉

she kept d dress simple & sexy were 4 later😳😆 

Zoya's checkout session zyada detail likha kyun Mona Darling KSG AAK hai isliye😳😉

She was touched wid Asad's small gestures like dismissing house help keeping in mind their privacy & calling Zoya all d week asking things she will need awe so sweet of him

All his care & gentleness has struck a chord in heart ❤️

she feel pampered precious cherished happy satisfied secure & at home in his arms.

Zoya agar itna sab feel hota hai toh what more u want just marry d man & do d love making & baby making as much u want 4 d rest of ur life.😉😆

Hahaha.. Hi Jassy! 😳

Kaisi hai? Kidhar thi tu?

I missed you so mch.  :(

Yes, very desperate to be with each other, spend some more time with each other, also, yes, they are stupid people who are unnecessarily complicating their lives, and making it difficult for me to write a balanced story! 😕😆

I think I'll just get them married and finish the story! Hai na?!😃😃😆

 

Mona darling Fantastic piece of work 👏👏

Aww! Thank you Janemann! :*

I know maine humor dalne ko bola tha but its ok I loved this style as well

Yeh story main humor shayad himilega, One because its a different story line and two because main likh hi nahi pa rahi ! 😵

Baby making process was big hit ab jaldi aage ka likho😃

Love u sweetu

Take care always🤗

Love you too , babydoll! 

You too! 🤗

 

P.S: Like always, I loved loved your comment! It's so sweet of you to leave back these detailed feedback!⭐️

Mwah! x

This content was originally posted by: cutie15

Whattt..???? Nooo 🤢
no no yr plzzz..
we are such lovely ppl..dont do this to us..
ab jldi se update and make us pls..
pls pls..

This content was originally posted by: jas91

 

Han ttu kar hold phir main btati hun tujhe😡😡

Hhaha.. Darr gayi main tere se! 🤢🤢🤣

 

yahan incomplete storiyan likhne aati hai kya

Hahhaaha, okay this really cracked me up, even though it shouldnt have! (besharam me :P)

 

aur hume wait karke stane ke liye😭😭

 

upar wala unres main jo I love u bola who cancel I hate u "turning my face other side"

Peace woman! I love you okay, and I love I love yous, dont change stuff! 🤔

Maarungi teko! 😳

Acha but seriously, sorry lekin aajkal likh nahi paa rahi main, toh thodasa time lagege... hopefully I'll complete the next chapter soon. Aaj hi start kiya hai, one parah- current status. so please be patient and non- violent! 😳😆

This content was originally posted by: radadolcevida

of course you can, 😃

but think about again 

 

This content was originally posted by: shailu123

no yaar 😭 😭 😭 continue this

This content was originally posted by: nnn

are you serious?????

Don't be so cruel

This content was originally posted by: mona12345

Hahaha,,

Hi Cutie,

you guys sure are lovley people!😃

Yeah, I'm facing a bit of a block right now. I'm writing at snails speed.. which is why ... But I'll try to work something out,

This content was originally posted by: mona12345

Oye I will keep giving my lovely comnts bus tu likti reh tabhi toh main comnt de paungi na. Take care muwaah🤗