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New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16 - Page 33

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Posted: 8 years ago
Wonderful part loved it 
zoya's pov all feelings and shyness is really so amazingly described 
asya feelings for each other and their not realizing that feeling 
asya romance is really hot
Thanks for pm 
Plz pm me for next part 
Continue soon 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Love the update 
So this was Zoya pov 
On the deal her feelings her expectancy her emotions 
Her getting what she didn't expect her feeling what she never thought she would 
It was brilliant a woman always has more words to more emotions 
Love tht this deal will will blow up in their face soon 
And can't wait to see who will break first 
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi mona,
Mmm well I don't know u much but let me tell u how happy I am that I came across this story of yours.
It is fantabulous, mind blowing, excellent, wonderful, full of emotions, a battle between mind n heart.
I love Asya here.
Just waiting for who will take the first step.

Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear its so beautiful updat
Their baby making became passionate love making & both felt home wiyth each other

Pls update soon

Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Edited by shailu123 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
wonderful. Amazing.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful...hot...sexy...
Really wanna see how this deal is ending up as right now it seems much more thaN deal...only this two needs go realize...
I m not getting on from last 2 parts. If possible old pm me when you update next
Thanks
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome part
loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Mine πŸ˜ƒ

Unres πŸ˜³


OK. I know I am a slow writer and even a slower reader. But itna slow bhi nahin that it would take me 2 hours to read that. Am telling you Mona, zaalim zamana dushman humara πŸ˜›πŸ˜†Everyone... EVERYONE! had something or the other to discuss with me tonight. N then, hubby dearest came back early from work n took my tab wanting to do office work πŸ˜• why did he even come back early was beyond me πŸ˜‘. 

Hahahha.. It's absolutely fine, Chocs. .. I understand! πŸ˜†πŸ˜Š You still find the time to stalk and catch your spot! πŸ˜³πŸ˜Ž

Anyways. I read the update And definitely loved it. This is not just a deal anymore am telling you. Its become much more from the time they have started sharing those kisses β˜ΊοΈ. Am now only waiting to see who realises first and who confesses first. 

Thank you  darling Choco! β€οΈ I wish I could keep it this simple and make them see right away why it shouldn't be a deal but more ! πŸ˜•

Loved it completely my sweetheart. Waiting for the next part already πŸ˜³

I haven't even thought about writing the next part! πŸ˜†

Probably after you post a couple chapters of your story! πŸ˜³


Love you ! πŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Mine ;)
lol aaj me har ek ka thread stalk kar rahi hu
i hit the 1st like

unres
wow!!!
its just wow how a writer like u can write the same thing with 2 different person's prespectiveπŸ‘
great job


Hey Surbhi,

Haha..

Aww, thank you so much, darling! πŸ€—