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unres,
First, this chapter was mindblowing, exceptionnel, wonderful, brilliant and stratospheric and I can add more and more adjective to describe this one and it won't be enough.
I know you will say that I am exagerated a bit, but NOT-AT-ALL. First, because it was unexpected and second, because I didn't expected this kind of chapter and third, because this is what I love the most in stories: emotions.
You write, no... You painted such an amazing chapter, full of emotion, showing Zoya's inner battle between her mind and heart. And this is what I like to read and to write about.
Zoya's pov was really really beautiful, heartouching, you show so many shades of her: hesitation, confusion, clumsiness, confidence, even her love. This chapter is a delicacy and you describes very well the up and down in her heart, in her body and in her head. You didn't miss any part.
You gave me as a reader a beautiful travel throught all this different and mysterious compartment, heart, body and soul. You merged perfectly all of them, and because I am a girl, this chapter touched me more because I went throught all this battle in my life. Not in the same situation, but I can understand how it works, this non-stop battle between close partner but yet so far when feelings came in between. I feel like emotion was acting like a beautiful girl and the heart-body-soul were 3 youngs boys fighting for her 😆 (I know I am crazy 🤪and I assume).
I will finish with one word to describe your chapter, even if I know it will not make justice to how I feel after reading this. It is just P-E-R-F-E-C-T. You don't need to change any word in it, because the emotions that escaped from your chapter was in the right place. It was not only intense between character but the chapter was full of it.
Beautifull and well written piece. I am so glad that I came to your story.
I am in love with this chapter. Totally
Edited by radadolcevida - 8 years ago
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