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Sorry for the delay, I was a bit sick 😕 but finally here I am 😃
Coming to the update, so finally the deal was signed between them, really it was a hot and intense between them. They didn't need any starter, they already made it and the chemistry between them was really well described.
And of course, I don't need to precise that it was a hot update, and I really love how you introduce a subtle moment of emotion with Zoya's tear, when she knew that they were doing all of this for having babies, her emotion was palpable. It was not only a moment between man and woman, but it was a moment of two person trying to make a child.
I really love this update and it hides many emotions : like their hidden emotions for the other, their hidden words of love and of course, the famous deal.
I love it and I am really curious now, how they will act after their love making, is it going to be like a hangover for them? Like we did and then we have to wait in each other side or should we continue until it works? How about this awkward moment between them, so expected or not? Are they going to be in confort still? Many thing to read and to explore concerning the emotions?
I appreciate also how you described Asad, he was falling in love with her and I felt that he forgot about the deal when he was in her arms 😉.
Anyway, thank for this beautiful update and hope to read the next soon.
Edited by radadolcevida - 8 years ago
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