Originally posted by: Manyata5
Excellent update and am happy to see that they are putting everything in black and white. Koi problem hi nahi hogi in future.
Originally posted by: Manyata5
Excellent update and am happy to see that they are putting everything in black and white. Koi problem hi nahi hogi in future.
I am in awe of both of them..
they are so so adorable..
ahh.. this was so awesome. .
I wanna read more and more..this literally gives me goosebumps. .
loved their kisses.. π³
plz plz do update soon.. I love reading this one.. π
Originally posted by: nilusoni
Wonderful part loved it
Asad's hesitation and zoya's curious face amazingAsya talk wowAsya like each other but didn't understand itasya kiss hotExcited for next partThanks for pmPlz pm me for next partContinue soon
Originally posted by: -silentbang-
Nice update
So they cleared all their doubts ...what a way to shut up Mr khan π.Update soonπ
Originally posted by: NaughtyRiya
awesome update
well written
Originally posted by: NaughtyRiya
gud job
continue soon
Originally posted by: NaughtyRiya
thanks for pm
wonderful updt Mona darling ~~ Thankyouu so much. Glad you enjoyed it! πitna lazy na hua kar intzaar karke main crazy ho jati hunπ³π ~~ Hahah, bol ri hu, writer ban jaa tu. ππsoon kehke itna lateI thought is part main Asya deal ka kaam shuru kar dengeπ ~~ Haa, I thought so too, lekin youdo know woh part likhna mere liye kitna difficult hai, so kuch aur likh diya instead, I'm just glad everyone liked it.but Asad toh cluses pe atka hai Zoe ki happiness joh Asad ka call dekhke hui who bhi udd gayiπbut he just wants 2 make sure 4 d future of their babyZoe ka hurt hona bhi banta tha but acha hua Asad ne situation sambhal liI loved when Zoe was saying our baby kitni khushi hui yeh sunkeother MA scenes were Asay checking out & smelling each other & end ka make outππAsad ka line 2 stop her was brilliant Kal Sunday hai Zoya mat jaoπ€£u updated something else than expected but it was also lovely I enjoyedπ ~~ And I am glad you did enjoy reading! π
Asad Zoya talked abt deal issues... Still I don't know how it's going to work... Asad does wants kid but however the kid will be mostly with Zoya... How will they deal? what if some time comes when Zoya have to move to somewhere else or Asad has to shift his business??? The child however will be deprived for proper care from parents??? I am sorry Chandni...Didn't mean to hurt you but couldn't keep these doubts out of mind...
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