Originally posted by: shailu123So awesome update yaar n sexy also love it excite for next one continue soon π
Originally posted by: shailu123So awesome update yaar n sexy also love it excite for next one continue soon π
Originally posted by: radadolcevidares
UnresReally beautiful chapter and I am happy that you extend it to an SS, good job πComing to the chapter, it was really a pleasure to read it and well written, logically and perfectly.I love how your portray their hesitation, their attraction, their awkwardness. It was really well described.So finally both realized the hhuge step that both toook for this deal and all the involvement. I must say that I love how they tried to convince themselves that they are only doing it for the deal and not for more, this part was really funny.I read one of your comment and you will detail later why Zoya took this kind of decision and why she don't want to have any attach. It will be interesting to go futher in the character, I feel that you are preparing something good.Your story was really good and it has been a long time I didn't been hooked so much to a story like yours.COntinue to do your good job and God bless you dear.
Originally posted by: nilusoniAwesome part loved it
Assad and zoya with their feelings were so nervous and excitedAsya lunch date and after kiss so hotExcited for next partThanks for pmPlz pm me for next partContinue soon
Originally posted by: fatima30Wow...they so can't resist one another! So well written I love it!
Is it safe to say this is no longer a TS??? lol
Continue soon
Originally posted by: jas91Mona darling wonderful updt againits always so entertainingβοΈβοΈβοΈso ZOya was disturbed in d start ki she's getting affected by Asadbut both couldn't help itboth were in each other's thought all d weekπDillu left 2 NY 2 Naj her story is sadso Asya met again & just like teenager getting excited 4 their dateπboth dressed 2 kill & d meeting which followed was just amazingu did wonderful job once again Mona darlingπdidn't I say it will b superhit like all ur other works
Originally posted by: jas91awe so sweet π€love u 2πOkay so this had gotten too long and colourful. Lol! I've replied to your comments in Purple !Hhahah!x
Originally posted by: cutie15omg.. I'm so loving this.!!
This just so interesting and gripping. .
nd asad and zoya are so intense..!!
Ahhh..loved it..
awesome
I love ur style of writing..!!
Update sooon...:)
Originally posted by: SanKsgianOMG THAT IS SERIOUSLY HOT MAN
READ ALL CHAPTERS IN ONE BIT...
LOVED IT SO MUCH
Originally posted by: SanKsgianPLEASE PM ME YOUR UPDATES
LOVED IT TO BITS
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