sorry 4 d late comnt No problem ! Till the time it comes.π
but i just loved d updt
it was super se bhi uparπ Aww. Thankyou so much ! Glad you loved it ! ππ³
it was shocking that Asad was ok wid it but later i realised here Asya r totally differentπ³ othwise he would have given long lecture on Tameez & Tehzeebπ Oh! They're totally different from those shown in the serial! π
so AAK was smitten by Zoe 4 a long timeπ³
but due 2 her professionalism & uninterest 2 b in relationship he buried his feelings
1 thing 2 b noted is both r sexually attracted & admire d other , in d 1st part even in Zoya's POV she admires Asad's other qualities & here he does 2
so d thing is why can't they b 2gather-2gather π. D way Zoya suggested a honeymoon paradise ka idea yet she don't want 2 b wid Asadπ²ππ
they want each other but don't want strings attached??
They've their own reasons for not getting involved with each other or anyone for that matter.Yes, they've been attracted to each other from the beginning but never acted upon it because of their reasons!
[you'll know in the further updates as to why..]
1 more thing if Asad can adopt a child why can't Zoe. I mean why she wants 2 deliver herself otherwise she's so modern than why she want 2 feel motherhood herself
both r excited & looking forward 2 d process of making a babyπ€£ but don't want 2 b 2gather this is confusing just a bit.π
Yes, Her thinking is very progressive yet somewhere she is kind of reserved,youll know soon. and she doesn't want to adopt because she wants a child of her own. Being sodern doesnt mean you donot want to have babies?!!! ππ kuch bhi haa Jaz ! π₯±π
And i know thoda confusing lagega jab tak full story I don't put up. Sorry, but you just got deal with the confusion! π Ask questions, I'll answer w/o revealing the aage ka story if i can! π
but anyways Asad is up 4 this deal happilyπ & has signed it aswell wid a kiss he wanted 2 steal even when she was explaining himπ
& it was hilarious 2 read him asking qstns as if it was a business deal & Zoe's reactionsπ
Hhahahah.. Thankyou Jassy. I'm glad you liked it ! π
who says they don't like d subject i like it, its tricky its bold but totally sold Mona darlingπ wah ik tagline ka avishkar kar diya meneπ€£ ~~~ Hahahaha.. And I must add I love your tagline ! πππ
Dekh maine tere andar ke writer ko jagah diya hai. Abh tu bhi likhna start kar ! π
Love u
Take care
See uπ
Hahahah.. Come see me , Love you too ! x
PS- BTW d most imp thing why u still hadn't changed it into SSπ²π‘ it can't b a TS u can't end it in d nxt part.π It can b easily extended we want 2 read their hilarious process of baby makingπ€£ omg i know it can b bold but i would love 2 read if u write it keeping d humor in mind it will b awesome. π not that u can't write bold or havn't wrote in d past rememberππ Turn it into SS i say it last time also u changed a TS in SS when i requested u do it this time 2 pretty plz
Hahahhaa.. π€£
Okay, khush hoja, I'll have to convert this into a FS or a SS!
Yes, likhan toh zaroor hai, but bahut difficult hai mere liye waise likhna.. leme see and try ! Aur tujhe pata hai na, woh sab stories convert toh kar di maine to FS, lekin aage hold par chalegi ! π³π Hopefully yeh complete kar pau main.
& Tu humesah summer aur winter break main hi kyun aati hai age piche bhi ayegi toh we wont mindπ
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