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Posted: 8 years ago
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<font color="#0066ff">Yep, very long -</font>

<font color="#0066ff">but it's nice to see u back here😳.</font>

<font color="#0066ff">How are u Doing?</font>



Am good navina. Thank u
How r u navi ??
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great concept... do continue



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PART - 2


UDAY - princess ur ok

MNAYTAH - am fine Uday

BOTH MANVEER GO DOWN FOR BREAKFAST .J AND VIJAY ALSO JOIN THEM FOR BREAKFAST

GIRI RAJ - beta Uday rishtha came for unnathi from Raigarh raj parivar . What do u think about Yuvraj Karan

J VIJAY UNNATHI MANVEER - they get shocked . THEY ALL KNOW that vijay and unnathi like each other

UNNATHI - she pinches Uday

UDAY - dad ab choti ka shaadi ke liye jaldi kyu

UNNATHI - yes dad I want to complete architect course . Pls I need an year time . Not now dad

GIRI raj - that's k beta . I just asked about it . Whenever u wanna marry u can

      AFTER BRRAKFAST UNNATHI GOES TO VIJAY AND TELL THAT HE SHOULD DO SOMETHING ABOUT IT

VIJAY - what should I do to pleade GIRI raj uncle

MNAYATAH - I think u should do something praise worthy .

UDAY - yes vijay banna , I have one thing . I handle Mehra industries project which is collaborated with jaigad and Devgad companies . It takes minimum 8 months . I think it's time to prove urself

VIJAY - do u think Brij mamaji is gonna let me handle it

J - don't worry vijay bai I'll handle dad

VIJAY AND UNNATHI LEAVE

MANYTAH - she throws up

UDAY - kya HUA princess ur ok

J -jiji ur fine

MANAYYAH - guys am fine chill

J - r u sure . Jiji r u pregnant

MANYATH - no ways j

J - can't say jiji , throwing up and all . Will go to doctor for clarification

MANYATHA - I can't become pregnant in single day j

UDAY - he stamps on MNAYATAH foot

J - wat ?? Kya mathlab

UDAY - j she means to tell on this single day not . Like she is on precaution pills

J - k Uday , she leaves

UDAY - princess wat were u about to do . R u going to tell her that we consummated out marraige yesterday after 2 months of marriage

MANYTAH - no Uday it just came out of my mouth . Don't worry they won't think ur gay

UDAY - princess now that's limit . No one would ever think of me me like That

MANYAT - I know after all u were a play boy rite

UDAY - not anymore now . A single woman man from now till death .

MANYATAH - I know . But Uday u lost ur charm these days don't u think

UDAY - I really princess . Do u want to see it back . He pulls her into room

MANAYYH - no Uday pls . I just said to pull ur leg

     AFTER A WEEK SOMEHOW UDAY MAANGE TO HANDLE PROJECT TO VIJAY .

AMITH MEHRA - he is owner of Mehra industries . He is 28 years old guy . Handling his business from 3 years alone after his father death in an accident . ( he has crush on MNAYTAH after seeing her in a party a month ago )
     
     ITS BEEN 6 MONTHS SINCE THE PROJECT STARTED AND VIJAY HANDLING IT VERY WELL . They also got much profit in it . GIRIRAJ AND DS AND BRIJ ALL APPRECIATED VIJAY

BRIJ - I think we should have a small party for our profits . Don't u think vijay

GIRIRAJ - it's been a long time . We should

J - yes it's party time

DS - k day after tomorrow we are having party at Devgad palace

MANVEER - yes done

UDAY - he gets a designed party wear frock to MNAYATH

          ON THE PARTY DAY MAYATH LOOKS STUNNING IN HER FULL LENGTH FROCK like a BARBIE DOLL

UDAY - princess Hume Marne ka iradha hai kya

MANYATAH - kya

UDAY - u look stunning , I feel like ... He holds her close

MANAYATH - Uday chodo we are in party , everyone is around

UDAY - tho kya am ur husband and I have right to

MANYTAH - she stamps on Uday feet and moves away

UDAY - bad move princess

AMITH MEHRA - hello Uday veer sing

UDAY - hello mr Mehra pls come .

BRIJ - welcome to da party young man

    PARTY GOES ON EVERYONE ENJOY PARTY.

PERSON - arrangementa are good . A beautiful party

AMITH - nice party but not as beautiful as u ur highness ( Manyata )

MANAYYAH - she feels little bit weird but smiles

UDAY - he stares at AMITH . In fact feels like hitting on his face

AMITH - Uday veer can I have dance with MNAYATAH if u don't mind

UDAY - he was shocked and couldn't answer

MANYTAH - sorry AMITH actually I don't feel confortable dancing with others than Uday and my dad . Sorry . Pls excuse me guys I'll be back . She leaves

UDAY - he gives a victorious smile .

AMITH - he curses his fate

UDAY - he really gets angry with this guy AMITH . " how dare this bloody ask me for my wife's hand to dance " . I know it's common . Even I dance with other rajkumaris when they come and ask for my hand . It's a courtesy . But when it comes to my princess am possessive . I can't imagine another man's hand on my princess and dance is far away

          PARTY IS OVER AND ALL OF THEM LEAVE .

UDAY - in his bedroom he is waiting for MAYATH . Where is princess . She dint come yet

MANYAT - from almost 2 weeks MAYATH feels weak and a different kind of craving and feelings . Also she misses her menses this month . SHE SPOKE ABOUt it to Komal 2 days back . Komal took her to hospital for blood test to confirm . As tool tests at home give wrong results .
      RESULTS WOULD TAKE TWO DAYS .

UDAY - he goes to look for MAYATH and finds her sleeping on couch in hall . Omg she dozzed off . Dint even change dress . He lifts her and take to their room and keep her on bed . Cover her with blanket and kisses her on forehead .

MANAYYH   - she smiles in sleep . Uday pls let me sleep

UDAY - he smiles and lie beside and curdle her

      NEXT DAY MORNING

MANYATAH - she wakes up soon and see Uday sleeping . Takes wash and go to hospital for reports


UDAY - he wakes up and doesn't find Manyata - where did she go so early . Dint even tell me . He gets ready and calls her but she doesnt pick her phone . May be she went to meet DS . He calls j and even she doesn't lift

UNNATHI - kya HUA dada u look so worried

UDAY - choti I have been calling MANAYYAH n j and they r not taking up their phones

UNNATHI - don't worry dada . May b they dint see or busy with some work

UDAY - k choti am going to office . Today I have important deal .

UNNATHI - k bai good luck

      DOCTOR - congrats MANAYYAH ur pregnent

MANYATAH - she feels happy

KONMAL - she gets excited and hug MAYATH . Am so happy beta . How many weeks doctor

DOCTOR - it's 3 weeks

KOMAL - small request doctor . Can u just hide the news

DOCTOR - yes maharani ji I understand this media . I won't reveal it unless u tell it in media

KOMAL - thank u . They leave

MNAYATH - ma y do u want to hide it

KOMAL - I don't want media mess and disturbance always behind u and all . We will reveal it after 3 months

MANAYAT - yes mom . She thinks inside to give news to Uday . She is happy

ADITHI MEHRA - younger sister of AMITH . She was a night stand of Uday in Oxford . Infact Uday stayed with her for 2 weeks . Generally he Would be only for a day with a girl . But this girl was found very sensitive . So slowly he got rid of her cleverly .

        UDAY SAID HE LIKED HER BUT PTACTICALLY HE CANT MARTY AS HE IS ROYAL AND SHE IS NOT . ALSO HE GOT ENGAGED TO DEVGAD PRINCESS AT YOUNG AGE . HE SAID HE HAVE TO SACIFISE AND ADDED MUCH MASALA AND DRAMA LIKE HE IS MAJBOOR N HEARTBROKEN AND ALL.
           
       ADITHI ALSO BELIEVED IT . BY THE TIME SHE GOT NEWS OF FATHERS DEATH AND CAME TO INDIA . LATER UDAY DINT TAKE HER CALLS OR ANSWER HER . NOW ITS BEEN 3 years since they saw each other


      



UDAY - in the way he finds a Phakir who knocks his glass . He opens to give money

PHAKIR BABA - he tells Uday " ur past will return back today which may effect ur present and ur future "

UDAY - he thinks it's ridiculous AND Gives money

PHAKIR - he smiles and returns back . Ek Kush kabari bhi ayega . Ek nanhe mehmaan aanewala thumari zindagi mein Jo thumari pyaar ko thumse hamesha ke liye cheenlega

UDAY - wat nonsense . Budda Paagal ho Gaya. Signal green and he starts car . Seriously what kind of crazy people are they . Kuch bhi bolthe


PRECAP - Uday is shocked to see ADITHI as his business partner ( as she is AMITH Mehra sister )

Secondly Phakir words keep ringing in his ears

Next MANAYYAH pregnancy news
He feels happy but remembers Phakir words . "Thumaara Khushi nanhe mehmaan thumari pyaar hamesha ke liye cheenlega " . He is kind of worried and searches for that baba ...
           Loads of drama to take place

       IF U LIKE IT PLS CLICK LIKE BUTTON AND COMMENT .THANKS EVERYONE FOR COMMENTS . Sorry for mistakes . Edited by puggyy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb update...

pls do pm me n continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: puggyy



Thanks
Will update in 2 days




Got It Dear... 😊 And About To Comment... 😊 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Just Read Update.. 😊 It Was So Beautiful.. 😳 Love It How Uday Is Helping Vijay For Hus Better Image Infront Of Griraj... 😊 And Wow Manyata Is Pregnant... 😊 And Ohhh Goshhh Uday's Past Is Returning... Hope They This Didn't Separate ManVeer.. πŸ˜” And Love The Way U R Creating Suspense... 😊 Continue Soon Plzzz Dear .. 😊 And Plzzz Make It SS or FF not OS.. Plzzz... Just A Small Request ... 😊 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow - great update!!
BTW - are u sure it's an OS, it seems like a short-story 😳.
Do update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update...
continue soon
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PART 3


UDAY - he reaches office and goes to cabin

PA - sir u have a meeting with AMITH Chopra today at 11 and he is here


UDAY - k send him to my cabin

AMITH - hi Uday , how r u

UDAY - am good . How r u ? Pls take ur seat

    BOTH OF THEM HAVE THEIR CINVERSATION

AMITH - I'll do with vijay bai and jaigad project will be handled by my sister as I can't manage both at time as I already have handful projects

UDAY - that's k AMITH , done

AMITH - I'll take ur leave Uday . My sister will meet u at 3pm

UDAY - that's k and he signs contract paper and AMITH leaves

     All day Uday is busy with work and calls MAYATH in between .

ADITHI MEHRA - she comes and meets Uday

UDAY - he first gets shocked and covers himself up . Hi ADITHI how r u and ur here ??

ADITHI - I have ur appointment Uv sorry mr udayveer sing

UDAY - wat ?

ADITHI - am ADITHI Mehra sister of AMITH Mehra

UDAY - omg !!!

ADITHI - r u okay Uday

UDAY - am fine . Anyways welcome to jaigad industries ADITHI

ADITHI - okay partner . I mean we are business partners rite

UDAY - ADITHI I want to speak frankly now . Let us forget out past now . We were young that time . We give a new start as business associates . Can u pls ADITHI

ADITHI MEHRA - okay Uday . I'll try to forget . But I wanna ask u something did u ever love me Uday or just played me

UDAY - pls don't get past .

ADITHI - answer me Uday pls

UDAY - we were young . I was just attracted to u . That's it . I only love my princess MANYATAH . I love her truly

ADITHI - she geta tears and wipes . I know I moved on . And it's time for me to . And am happy for u as u found ur true love .

UDAY - ADITHI will meet tomorrow

ADITHI - won't u invite me to ur house Uday as a friend at least . I wanna see ur wife

UDAY - surely ADITHI . Tomorrow I u and AMITH come for lunch to jaigad palace . I'll all n tell AMITH. Will have our project checked there only

ADITHI - k Uday

     UDAY LEAVES AND STARTS TO HOME . On the way he remembers that Phakir. Words " he is rite my past came today . May be its a coincidence , come on Uday don't get into such words ..am not superstitious " . He goes to home and his room

MANYTAH - Udayy she hugs her

UDAY - wah princess ithne romantic mood mein , Ba'ath kya hai

MANYATAH - will tell u first u go and have shower

UDAY - y do u have any plans to make out now princess

MANYATAH - chi Uday thum Bhi na

UDAY - he haves shower and come out in towel

MANYATAH - she is reading Some document and suddenly she feels like puking . She rushes to wash room and throw up

UDAY - kya HUA he runs behind . R u k

MANYTAH - am k don't worry

UDAY - don't tell me u ate roadside food ill call doctor

MANYATH - no Uday am fine and let me tell u again she vomits

UDAY - he holds her and help her . Princess I think food poisoning I'll call doc

MNAYATAH - she wipes with towel n tell . No Uday

UDAY - am going to calm doctor

MANAYATH - she gets irritated and follow him . Halkat vede kasmaunukane stop there I said not necessary na

UDAY - don't act as doctor now am calling and he takes phone

MANYATH - she takes phone and tell I know Uday already I have been to hospital

UDAY - wat u went to hospital and dint tell me . That's y I tell u don't eat all that road aside stuff . Uday keeps on blabbering

MANAYYAH - Uday stop it it's not food poisoning Am pregnent

UDAY - wat !!! Tell me again

MANAYYAH - she blushes and holds his hand and tell ur gonna be father halkat

UDAY - really MAYATH he hugs and kisses on forehead , r u sure

MANYATH - yes am 3 weeks pregnant

UDAY - am the happiest person on This earth now

     BOTH OF THEM GIVE NEWS TO FAMILY MEMBERS AND EVEEYONE IS HAPPY

VIJAY - so junior Uday is gonna come

UNNATHI - no it's junior Vasundara ( my mom .") .

UDAY - yes UNNATHI it rite .Mom always use to tell I'll be born as ur baby Uday in we last days with tears in her eyes

DS - she carcasses Udays head and tell . Yes Uday maharani Vasundhara Devi is gonna come back

     EVERY ONE IS HAPPY AND CELEBRATES THAT NIGHT . UDAY INSTRUCTS MANYTAH WITH ALL PRECAUTIONS DO'S AND DONTS

MANYATH - she is gonna Take coca cola

UDAY - ur not supposed to take aerated drinks in pregnency MANAYYAH . He takes away the glass

MANYTAH - how do u know Uday , did I do a gynaecologist course

EVERYONE - laughs

UDAY - princess I don't do a course but I read in a book . Soon after I got new I first read what to eat and what to not as ur a big mess

MANYATAH - she looks at him angrily

KOMAL - wat Uday said is true MANYATAH ur not suppose to take all these . Only fresh fruit juices

UDAY - Seema ki yuvrani ke liye ek fresh watermelon juice lavo

MANYTAH - I want mango juice not watermelon

UDAY - no watermelon is good in sumner also mango better not to take in first 3 months as it produces heat in body and not safe in first 3 months

VIJAY - UDAY BANNA SERIOUSLY THUM THO pregency ke baare mein research Koya hoga

UNNATHI - after all my dada does any work perfectly , he is Yuvraj Udaybeer sing

MANYATA - an busss Karo apne bai ka thaarif . Yeh tho halkat Veda hi hai

DS - MANAYYAH ur not supposed to tell ur husband like that

UDAY - ek yuvrani ko Shobha nahi dethe

J VIJAY - ha NAHI THO

EVERYONE LAUGHS

MNAYATAH - j and vijay ur Gonna pay for this . Uday thum bhi

DS - MANAYYAH aap Kaho

MANYATAH - sorry aap Yuvraj

UDAY - it's k DS MANYATH can call whatever she likes to

DS - but Uday beta I know if any other royal or PPP Listen they make news and especially Mahasabha ppl are particular about their rules and all

GIRI RAJ - maa sab tek keh raha hai . Uday I don't want this new to go out till 3 more months

DS - yes Uday I don't want to tell it still she is 4 months pregnent . Due to security issues and for privacy

UDAY - jee dad . I'll make it sure DS

KOMAL - I already asked doctor not to reveal it

BRIJ RAJ - acha Kiya Komal

J - but DS hOw can we hide . Wat if they see jiji tummy likes ball

MANYTAHA - j not ball k

UDAY - he laughs

MANAYATH - she stamps Uday feet

EVERYONE LAUGH

KOMAL - don't worry j . Tummy will start appearing form 14 th week and she is only 3 weeks now

MANYATA - really mom . I don't l know I should ask u many doubts

KOMAL - yes beta I'll tell . But I don't think u need my help wen Uday is around u . Think he must have read about it also

VIJAY - I tell u . Uday banna encyclopaedia

UDAY - vijay thum bhi na

   EVERYONE HAVE DINNER AND MANVEER RETURN TO JAIGAD PALACE . Uday tells about meeting with mehras to vijay and manytah.

UDAY -manyatha take this milk

MANYATAH - Uday am full . Pls

UDAY - MNAYATH before bed if u take hot milk . It's good for I n baby

MANYATAH - Uday thum tho mere peeche pade . I should have become pregnent instead of me

UDAY - haha funny princess . I can do anything for u but can't get pregnent I guess

MANYATAH - Udayyy k I'll drink after a while

UDAY - that's my girl . He kisses her in lips

MANYTAH - pregnent mein kissing mana hai

UDAY - wat really ??

MANYTAY - book mein Nahi pada , she laughs

UDAY - acha ur pulling my leg . He pulls her close and tell " do u know I can even have sex in pregnancy with safety measure and positions , Be ready for it "

MANYTAH - chi besharan

UDAY - he smiles and leaves her .

       MANVEER WAKES UP AND HAVE BREAKFAST

DOCTOR - she checks MANYATAH and gives vitamin tablets

UDAY - anything about yuvrani pls first inform me and I should know everything doctor and I mention it again

DOCTOR - don't worry Yuvraj ji she is perfectly fine and I'll keep informing u . But next month u have to come to clinic for scan

UDAY - if u don't mind doctor I want to buy that machine n keep at home with a nurse . Can I come and do scan here

DOCTOR - that's fine Yuvraj ji as u wish

MANYTAH - Uday is that necessary . I'll go and come

UDAY - princess if u go frequently to hospital media will get to know for sure

DOCTOR - Yuvraj ji is rite ur highness . She leaves

MANYATAH - patha nahi yeh media ka chakkar kab katham hoga

UDAY - it will never end . N am sure we are going to have hard time after they get to know ur pregnent

MANYTAHA - we won't reveal it at all . Then no worries

UDAY. - ache after few months ur tummy will come out like balloon and u will become like baby elephant princess and everyone will know

MANAYYAH - udayy , kya kaha . She throws pillow at him and turns around

UDAY - he hugs her from behind

MANYTAH - Uday if I become fat I won't like me na

UDAY - princess . He turns around . Whatever u look like I just love u madly . Will love u forever till my last breath

MANAYATH - she covers his mouth and tell don't talk like that . I love u she hugs him . They r in lawn outside

AMITH AND ADITHI - they come and cough

MANYATAH - she immediately pushes Uday and move away

UDAY - he acts normal . " welcome AMITH and ADITHI ,pls come in "

AMITH - he looks at MANAYYAH and wish her

ADITHI - she to stares at MANAYATH

AMITH - she is my sister ADITHI . Have tells MANYATAH

MANYATAH - she tells hello ADITHI and gives hand

ADITHI - she is lost and stares at MANAYYAH

AMITH - he mives ADITHi and tell " hey ADITHI we're r u lost " I know Yuvraj is so beautiful and natural beauty but being a girl don't satre at her

UDAY - yeh Kameena tho always flirts my wife . I'll see this guy one day

ADITHI - yes brother she is indeed beautifull as u said . Uday I must say u have got a gorgeous wife , nice meeting u miss udayveer sing

UDAY - he feels bit tensed . He thought of telling to MANAYYAH about their past but after knowing she is pregnent he dint want to .

      ALL GO INSIDE AND HAVE LUNCH .

MANYATAH - u guys carry on with ur work . I'll leave

UDAY - ji MANYATH UNNATHI is there in her room .go to her

AMITH - Uday u don't she know about project . I mean to day Devgad projects also vijay is handling . Y is MANYATAH ji is not coming to office these days

UDAY - it's not like that AMITH . She UNNATHI and j are taking care of other works . I don't want to over burden her

MANYTAH - Uday is rite . I don't want to interfere in everything

ADITHI - that's interesting buth of u make a good pair

UDAY - thanks ADITHI , shall we go ahead with work .

MANYTAH - she is leaving

UDAY - he excuses and goes behind MANYATAH and tell " princess don't forget to take tablet , came to remind '"

MANYTAH - Uday that's k abhi thum jao , she pushes him

ADITHI - she looks at them and get angry , especially MANYATAH


PRECAP
   ADITHI - she acts good and everyone believe her and she try's to harm MANAYATH and baby

UDAY AND ANYONE - they doesn't know about it . Even AMITH doesn't know about her past or about her evil plans Edited by puggyy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
really nice update 😊
god this bro sis duo is too much I mean 1 is after uday n the other after manyata...
do continue soon n pm me if possible 😊