Rima 3S: AANKHEN (part 2, 3 + epilogue updated on pg.11) - Page 5

Originally posted by: rima4ever

thanks for the pm
loved the character sketch
superb start

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

omg brilliant and awesome TS 👏
loved the concept 👍🏼
Trishna was such a true best friend of madhu
now what madhu did the she's so heartbroken by her past 😲
i think there wil be some misunderstanding
by the way loved RishBala Hug 😉
thanks for pm and update both the new TS's soon !! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: manna43

Nice cs n topic selection is very good.emotional update.continue soon.

Originally posted by: AR_RK

Interesting start.loved it.

Originally posted by: omama_raza

awesome story.

adorably written.

Originally posted by: ashitha235

Very nice concept. 

One line which touched me was when madhu thinks its only the world which reminds her of her disability and show their sympathy. It was very touching and true also. More than increase in the blind population it is how they are being treated in the society. Its really very sad.

You have written it very beautifully. I think you know many things about visually impaired people as you have mention about the subjects and some information about this disability. It is very nice story.

Looking forward for the next part to know why madhu thinks she killed her friend.😊

Originally posted by: ..BlackSwan..

Why did madhu call RK by the name Trish used to call?? She just donated her eyes or brain too? 😆 well jokes apart I really RK won't start seeing madhu in a SISTERLY way. 😉 as there was marriage talks I guess he's going to be her pati. ❤️ well how is she responsible for trishna's death? Same question is running in my mind. You have chosen a very different and sensitive concept Sudha..😳 plz carry on soon.. Thanks for PM.