Sushim and Ahankara [SushKara] OS - The Evil Love Story of Magadh - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: _barbie

   

my fav line ,   "I just wanted to gift your beauty with some more natural beauty." πŸ˜³

and this , -----> 
Ahankara put her head on Sushim's shoulder and her hands around his arm <------------  i want this scene included in the serial πŸ˜³


overall fantastic job done Bishti πŸ‘  i had this smile on my face throughout while reading it πŸ˜ƒ



Hehe. Glad I didnt dispapoint u! arey i wanted to write something adventurous πŸ˜†πŸ˜† But ended up getting romantic lol πŸ˜†
Thank u for reading dearie πŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: musicndance2

It was very romantic and sweet. Finally they got some time alone without interruptions πŸ˜†
I would request you to write one for Ashok too keeping in accordance with history. Also I would like if you continue this one. 😊



Thanks for reading and appreciating! 😊 This is over but I will surely write more on SushKara I love them so much πŸ˜‰
OK, do you want something on Ashok and Devi/Karurvaki ? Or a normal one?
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: melodica

Another beautifully written post Brish! β­οΈ

'Lost in Beauty' Rajkumar Sushim sounds so sweeet! β€οΈ

Luved it n will luv to read more.. 



sure dear πŸ˜‰ I will keep on irritating u all with my OSes 😈
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: love_chitra

amazing chapter!!!!

wish cv's see this..
ps; would anyone like to read an ff on bindharma? 
named as 'The Cupid's Mistake' ?



Me too wish they see it πŸ˜†
And yeah, sure we would love to read but if you include Ashoka, Sushim Justin and Noor in it πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: rima4ever

awesome update 


Thank u πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow! It was really nice, the way Sushim took Ahankara to the cliff-side (?)! The pace was cool enough for a really enjoyable read.
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Posted: 8 years ago
U didn't pm me but I read anyway. Short sweet and simple and as usual cinematic.
 
Btw looks like hum jnaha jnaha chalenge
 fighting and arguement bhi sath chalenge
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar



sure dear πŸ˜‰ I will keep on irritating u all with my OSes 😈


Will luv to get irritated den πŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi!!! My name is Ash😊 I Loved your OS on SushKara!πŸ‘πŸ‘ Looking forward to read more of it😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar



No Ashok's identity is not revealed. then Sushi cant be in such a good mood πŸ˜† Ashok is just participating in all the wedding preparations coz Bindusara said. πŸ˜ƒ
Thank u so much for reading dear.. so happy u loved it!


Dats true πŸ˜†
M eagerly w8ing 4 the identity revelation in the show πŸ˜ƒ
Always welcome dear. That really is a lovely piece of writing πŸ‘
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