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|-Nisha/Viraj FF: Bloom- Ch 15/Pg 25||New update:Feb 7 (Page 12)

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Posted: 30 May 2015 at 9:48am | IP Logged
I fall short of words just to explain how much I love your work...
It gives me immense pleasure to read your ff...
Just love it...
P.s. nothing to my viru please...Smile

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Posted: 30 May 2015 at 10:37am | IP Logged
Wow...another update before time...i m having this feeling... that for u  its as additive to write as it is for me to read your stories...na? Bcoz u write that amazing. ...
THANKS SO SO SO MUCH...

Next update sooner please...


Don't mind but its not my fault at all... That now i m all the more impatient  for your next update...u only managed to break my patience. ...which i got after lecturing myself on and on ...
For  how writer needs their creative breaks and all... And thats too after this end of your todays post ... 


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Posted: 30 May 2015 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Another great update.
Ohh no is that Viraj met with an accident?
I am eagerly waiting for ur another update.
Do continue soon.

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Posted: 30 May 2015 at 9:21pm | IP Logged
Thanks everyone! Hug
Viru isn't going to die. That is ALL I can promise.
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Posted: 30 May 2015 at 10:17pm | IP Logged
A/N-

I know Viraj's postcards to his mother are an integral part of this FF. However, right now the postcards won't make sense because Viraj can't write. Eventually the postcards to Ma will return and then go away in the end. The point is I'll be portraying Viraj's thoughts like I do Nisha's whenever the postcards aren't there. OK?

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Posted: 30 May 2015 at 10:26pm | IP Logged

-7-


Nisha desperately tried to call Viraj up for the next few days. However, his phone had been damaged in the accident so, all she got was an automated response. Her anxiety peaked as the days passed. One day-

'Viraj Singh Rathore to be shifted to his Jaipur home, steady, say doctors'

Nisha heaved a sigh of relief.

***
Gayathri, being the opportunist that she was, wondered if her father's will could be tweaked if the only male heir died. While people pestered her with questions about Viraj's wellbeing, she pestered their family lawyer regarding the will. When it was ascertained that she wouldn't gain from Viraj's death, she decided not to prey upon him. Parasitism would have to suffice.

***

"Did you hear, Shekhs?!" A flustered Priyanka said to Shekhar. "Bhai's accident... How I wish I hadn't sent to check out the vintage pistol for you... " She slumped down in defeat. Somehow, she felt guilty for Viraj's state. 

Shekhar lifted her into his arms. Then he shifted her onto his lap as he settled down himself. He wrapped his arms around her even as she lay her head on his chest. 

"I know. Thank God you asked him to bring it." Shekhar said calmly. Priyanka lifted her head in shock. Shekhar pushed her head back. His arms held her tighter now. So much so, that she could barely move.

Shekhar started in a singsong voice "Once upon a time there was an iron smith. He would visit the gun-making factory everyday. Soon, he learnt how to make pistols. So skilled was he at his work that the Crown prince asked him to work specially for him. He settled in the palace, taking his son with him. The little boy was enamoured with shooting. The Prince would shoot everyday and he would learn. Eklavya... Then the little prince came. He got everything -the guns he wanted, the new shooting range... " Shekhar paused to stroke Priyanka's hair. She was sobbing softly, cursing herself.

"Still the iron smith's son didn't complain. He went on. Then he got tired of playing second fiddle... He wasn't ungrateful, mind you. He didn't tamper with the prince's rifle, no. Still, still the Prince ruined him. He had forgotten that the iron smith's son had the Princess... All along. His personal stress buster." Shekhar kissed her shoulder gently. She jerked him away. 
"I'll tell bhai everything! How you used me... I thought you loved me... I tolerated... Those bruises..." Her fists were clenched.

"Do that Priyanka. I'm sure he'd love to know what I did with you. Show him the marks. In fact, take these videos too. " He whipped out his phone and showed her the aforementioned videos.

Priyanka slid down to the floor. 

"Of course I do love you! You are Viraj's sister. No one else could have given me the joy of toying with him this way! You're special, sweetheart." Shekhar slid down next to her. "Stay too close to him and I will personally tell him how you and I are responsible for the accident. His best friend and sister. Ouch!" Snaking his arm around her belly, he pulled her against himself again. "If that doesn't break him, maybe we can show him how much we've enjoyed each other's company.I won't even be needed... You were going to tell him yourself weren't you? I'll be leaving tomorrow. Do what you want. I have nothing to lose." He waved his phone at her as he got up to leave. 

Priyanka sat weeping on the floor as it sunk in-What she had before her, was a stalemate.





Edited by -Saraswati- - 03 June 2015 at 7:08am

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Posted: 30 May 2015 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
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"Hello, may I speak to Viraj Sir?"Nisha said expectantly.
"I'm sorry ma'am, he's unavailable. May I know, who's speaking?" The receptionist replied
"Nisha Gangwal here." Nisha said.

Gayathri snatched the phone.
"Viraj can't shoot. This is it. You have no business rubbing it in. Lakshya is done with." She hissed.
"No, not until Viraj Sir says so."

He can't give up. It'll take time maybe. "He'll be back. I have the patience to wait till he recovers. Can you put me through now?"

"I'm not his freaking secretary." Gayathri fumed at Nisha's audacity.

"Miss Nisha, why don't you come and see me tomorrow?" Viraj's voice suddenly intervened.

Gayathri turned red as she remembered that Viraj's penthouse had a connection to the Lakshya landline.

***


Ma,
Don't mind my handwriting. The doctors have assured me that it'll be steadier in a while. Presently, I'm confined to a wheelchair-Multiple fractures.

They said that they're not sure if I will be able to walk again. In their knowledge, the spinal injuries were not serious, not enough at least. "Wait for a year or so." I have no idea how.

Not having you around has made me accustomed to doing my own things. Now, there's pretty much nothing I'm capable of. I can't even change my own clothes. There is something completely demeaning about having someone else do basic things for you. At times, it feels a little humiliating.

Added to the unease, is the realisation that everyone else sees me differently now. Buaji speaks to me as if I am five... Or mentally challenged. She is bent on making a hotel chain out of Lakshya. Priyanka has vanished, probably because I am useless to her now. Shekhar, too...

Miss Nisha called up at the reception today, I've called her here tomorrow. She deserves the truth. She can't pin her hopes on me. Maybe I'll put her through to other institutes. 

Ma, please be back.

Love 
Viraj

***
A/N- Red= Nisha's thoughts.
Blue= Viraj's postcard to Ma.
I know that this may feel a little off...I have a plan. Promise! Just leave your honest feedback. 


Edited by -Saraswati- - 17 June 2015 at 3:50am

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Posted: 30 May 2015 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
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"Hello Sir!" Nisha said softly. 
A cervical collar around the neck, crepe bandage around the elbow. Seated in a wheelchair across the sofa he smiled at her. " 'Morning, Miss Nisha! Come in. Come in. "

What have you done to yourself? She tried hard to blink back her tears... And failed. 

"This is why I don't meet people." Viraj remarked.

What? "I'm sorry Sir." She hastily tried to smile. I'm not here to make you feel worse.

"So, what's the plan Miss Nisha?" Viraj asked.

How can you be so... Normal, as if this is one of our ordinary lunches... "I don't know. You tell me."

"Will you listen to what I say?" He raised an eyebrow. 

"Of course, Sir. There's no one else I would listen to. "

"Get yourself enrolled in another sports academy." Viraj said, weighing his words.

How can you even..."No." She replied bluntly.

"You said you'll do what I say."

"I trusted you to say something better." Nisha retorted. 

"Miss-"

"I'm not discussing this Sir. Here my mother made some gajar ka halwa for you."

Viraj sighed. "Ask Daadji to keep it in the fridge."

"No, eat it fresh. You'll like it better." Without waiting for his response, she brought a spoon and set the tiffin in front of him. She took care that the spoon faced the unbandaged arm.

"No. Miss Nisha, just because I am in a wheelchair doesn't mean that you can force me to do things. At least, I can expect some respect from you... Or can I?" He snapped at her.

What's wrong with your other hand? Without voicing her conclusion she picked up a spoonful of halwa and held it to his lips. 

He glared at her.

"Humour me. Please."

He opened his mouth to the delicacy that always melted him.

***
Ma,
This is not right. I had it all planned. I even asked her to leave but she wouldn't hear of it.

Then she gave me that gajar ka halwa. A mother's cooking... I didn't want her to see my hands tremble. I don't want her to pity me. Yet she knew. Although she is the only one who still argues with me. Everyone else... Oh, forget it.

She's becoming a habit. I think she's used to me, too. This not right.

Love
Viraj


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