Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

For Dr. Khurana, with love REPOSTED, Epilogue, pg 36 - Page 27

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Shruthe thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
am lagging behind in this...
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EPILOGUE


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Thanks for reading.Edited by dqno1 - 8 years ago
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Thanks for reading everyone

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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely passionate update geet got drowned in his passion she forgets eerything once she is in maans arms the solitude and comfort she gets is only possible when he makes love to her he made her forget all her painand sorrow with his love geet told maan with real hesitation that she is pregnant making him estattic where he claimed that his princess will not like hetr mumma but will be like him e such a cutie he calls her rollu pollu with birth of their princess all the complaints of his mom dad flew away as they grcefully accepted her as their dil and now their world was complete ofcourse with maans constant teasing nad geets blushing
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This is simple story of couple fall in love,marry against family wishes,left house,kutch khatte kutch mithe emotions, miscarriage,
typical socity women and their taunting about pregnancy,husband wifes abudance love and passioon ,and patient for each other,no matter what other says,if husband wife love and protect each other, no one can win in their dirty game,and we can see in our day to day life some jelous people who will be never happy on your happiness and are alrways tries to find out some fault to make them feel lower but trust,love and respects win over jelousy and wh o log kabhi umka bura nahi kar sakte.
the theme is not new but how you pen down is important, and you did well spacing whole story in such a way reader dont feel bore but stay intrested and enthuastiticwith the each episode happening in story,and moral of story never speek words which hurts other one day water can come under own feet,no matter what people says,if husband wife doesnt affect and with trust and understanding and love can iovercome all the hurdals from their life Amen-
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Posted: 8 years ago
aww.. wonderful epi dear !!! ... just loved it and enjoyed it ! ...maaneet are blessed with baby girl mansi ... their life is full of happiness ... loved this sherni geet ..hihi ...maaneet teasings to each other ...amazing ...one more happiness come in their life ... seems their life is contented with joy now ..

...thanks for pm dear ..its great little beautiful story !..

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Posted: 8 years ago
Super romantic n perfect ending.
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that was update with full of passion and Maaneet.. so they've got a daughter now Maansi.. n second one is on the way.. loved the last part very much.. so playful.. Man's dialogues were hilarious.. thanq for the lovely SS.. it was simple and beautiful.. if u write more do notify me.. will definitely miss this story..
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lovel update wish u would do the second season of this ss it was fab yaar maan really taking care of their baby like a good daddy he really loves her geet as arranged for the night together but maan has diff plan he and his nautanki loved it he wanted to be hunted he faked that he is having pain like a good wife geet tended to his pain unaware of her naughty hubbys plan to be seduced maan wants her to massage his body geet lustfully looking at him maan ka plan is working coz as she massages hhis body she feel aroused he fake sleep aur madam starts to kiss him and all his control lost with his wifys body touching him and they got lost in their passion geet gave him good news that she is expecting again loved maans attayachar pati par their naughtiness and love makes them perfect
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Posted: 8 years ago
Absolutely Beautiful
they love just seems to grow with time and actually both are
mischievous with each other and now they are really happy with they
small family