Destined Together - Part 11 on Page 10 (Page 9)

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Originally posted by Renu111

wonderful update suhana...i read both the parts ..Embarrassedpratigya confess her love and love starts i m worried is krishna 's past afftect pratigya or not.? i know she loves him bt it just my question.

Thank you Renu.Smile Yes i didn't want to reveal his past as i wanted some Kriya momentsWinkLOL. I was wondering on how this FF is received.  I see myself as a horrible writer and the way you people comment is an energy booster to me. Thanks a ton for all the commentsStar

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Suhana6 Goldie

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Posted: 15 May 2015 at 7:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Khushi96

lovely update Tongue
very intriguing ff, i look forward to what happens next with kriya, as you said kst past won't come up yet, so i wonder what will happen next its, a mystery  


Yeah Kushi. Its a mystery for now. I want ot keep their romance alive for sometime. As you might already know, i started my FF because i was badly missing krishna. Cry So a little shanti and romance before the storm. Big smile

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dhakarn IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 May 2015 at 11:22am | IP Logged
good part ... so kriya romance all the way , for now 

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Suhana6 Goldie

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Posted: 15 May 2015 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
Hola Kriya'NS. Today was one of those crazy days for me. I am awaiting a much needed weekend. Well here comes the next part - a mixture of emotions they have for each other. Hope the events and twists keep you hooked to the FF. Let me know if its turning boring or pointless. Or if it doesn't make any sense anymore.

Part 10

Krishna Kept starring at Pratigya while driving back home. Pratigya playfully turned his face holding his chin towards the road. Krishna smiled and continued to ride while occasionally stealing glances at her. Reaching home, Pratigya waved a bye and left to her room. Krishna watched her with his hands on his hips.

Krishna - "I have to teach this woman many things. She doesn't even know how to say a bye." He smiled and was surprised at his own change of behavior. Till last week he was an arrogant business man with attitude. Now he changed all of a sudden. No he didn't change; this was his true way of living. What he was living till yesterday was an outcome of his past. Krishna got saddened at the thought of his past. "I don't know how you will react Pratigya? I will never let my past come in-between us. I will keep you away from all that darkness." He told himself.

Pratigya was never that happy. She looked at herself in the mirror and admired her own beauty. She never felt so fancied about herself before. "This is all your magic Krishna. You made me feel who I am again. You're giving a hope and reason to love, laugh and live. What else can I ask for?" she thought to herself.

Pratigya got ready in her night clothes and saw Krishna and Komal at the dining area having dinner. They didn't wait for her. This got Pratigya miffed at both of them. She silently sat in the chair next to Krishna.

Komal - "Didi, Krishna jiju was just telling how I am going to go tomorrow to Delhi to continue my studies. Isn't that wonderful?"

Pratigya's eyes sparkled when Komal mentioned Krishna as her jiju. Pratigya nodded her head. Krishna looked at Pratigya and winked without Komal noticing them. Pratigya blushed and quickly hid her smile.

Krishna - "Komal, please don't go, I get scared with your sister alone." He teased Pratigya. Komal burst out in laughter while Pratigya looked on with her mouth wide opened.

Komal - "Don't worry jiju, I will call you every day." She said for which Krishna agreed playfully.

Initially they didn't wait for her and now they both were pulling her leg. Pratigya got irked and left the dining table. Komal and Krishna laughed at her.

Komal - "I think you know what you should do?"

Krishna - "Finish your dinner, I will be right back." He left Komal and followed Pratigya to her room. Pratigya sat on her bed with her hands folded. Krishna came in and stood by the door.

Pratigya - "So I scare you also. First you both forget about me at the dinner table and then you make fun of me. I won't talk to both of you."

Krishna looked at her smiling. "These small antics of yours made me fall for you." He sat beside her on the bed. "Pratigya, am happy you're mad at me and behaving like a normal girl of your age. I wanted you to be mad at me. I used to see you in the office, you were crying from inside and had a fake smile on your face always. I wondered why? Now that I know, I wished you lived openly and happily. You sad smiles hurt me Pratigya. I cannot see you that way ever again."

Pratigya was moved again to his care and concern for her. She had tears rolling down her eyes. Krishna looked frustrated - "See I don't like people who break their promises. You are not supposed to cry now." He retorted.

Pratigya wiped away her tears and smiled slowly. "And how am I scaring you that you need Komal for safety."

Krishna had to answer here or she seemed to be ready to attack and scare him in real. "Actually, you're not scaring me, but you're hurting me Pratigya."

Pratigya got worried - "Krishna, I don't know. Did I do something that hurt you? I am really sorry."

Krishna - "Yes, you should be sorry."

Pratigya - "But, what did I do?" she asked.

Krishna skid closer to her "You hurt me with your thoughts Pratigya. Every time I think of you, I want to be closer to you. I want to stay with you and talk to you all the time."

Pratigya quite understood his intentions and tried to suppress her smile.

Krishna - "Again you're hurting me hiding your smile."  He said pointing a finger towards her cheeks.

Pratigya burst out in laughter and Krishna joined her. He took her in his arms and Pratigya rested her head on his chest. He lifted her face from her chin and moved forward to kiss her. Pratigya pushed him away and tried to escape. But Krishna had her hand in his. He quickly pulled her back. Pratigya came flying back and landed on Krishna who fell back on the bed. He slowly pushed back her strands.

Krishna - "I thought you were sorry for hurting me. Now pay your price for hurting me." He said looking at her intense.

Pratigya could hardly answer him back and was lost in the trance he just framed around her. His close proximity had mesmerized her. His roughly shaved cheeks, his perfectly curved jawline and his eyes, in which she saw herself; altogether took her to a different world. She involuntarily, let her fingers play on his cheeks. Krishna held her in both of his arms and slowly twirled her in the bed with him on her this time. He moved down to her nape and started kissing her passionately. He placed warm and lingering kiss on her cheeks. Pratigya closed her eyes and held his collar tight. Krishna let his hand slide through her waist and the bed and held her tight. Krishna kissed her eyelids causing her to breath heavy. He pressed his lips against hers. Pratigya welcomed his kiss and kissed him back. She brushed his hair and grabbed his collar tighter. Krishna lost in the moment put his hand behind her neck and pulled her much closer. Breaking the kiss he started to kiss her temple and bit her earlobe. Pratigya let herself away from his hold and breathed heavily. She was about to leave when Krishna held her back forcefully back on the bed. Pratigya turned pale all of a sudden. Flashes of her past started to haunt her.

"Where will you go? I won't let you go away from me." He said licking his lips disgustingly. Pratigya looked at him horrified. He had held her hand tight in his dirty hand.

Man - "Your boyfriend sold you and your sister to me. You belong to me and here now. You will do as I say now." He smiled evilly. Pratigya couldn't believe her ears. The man she trusted has betrayed them.

Pratigya had tears filled in her eyes and ready to flow down unstoppable. Krishna noticed his sudden change and got back on his feet. He pulled Pratigya from the bed and helped her back on her feet.

Krishna - "Pratigya, what happened? Did I do something wrong?" he asked her worried.

Pratigya didn't answer and stayed still lifeless in his grip. Krishna's worry started to bundle up.

Krishna - "Pratigya, speak to me." He jerked her bringing her back to reality. Pratigya watched him and got terrified. What was she doing? What if he is also like the one she trusted before? Pratigya pushed away his grip from her shoulder and looked at him disgusted through her tears. Krishna confused, couldn't make out what was happening.

Krishna - "Pratigya, your silence is killing me. Tell me what happened. I am not able to see you in this state."

Pratigya confused at her own thoughts and emotions couldn't control herself from bursting out - "Why should I trust you. He also helped me the same way you did? He also made me feel there is nothing to worry about and sold my dignity and pushed me into darkness. I thought I liked you, but I am not sure. What is happening has questioned me and I can't let anything happen wrong again. I want to leave. I can't stay with you anymore." She said tearful.

Krishna - "Pratigya, what are you saying. Don't you trust me anymore." He asked almost broken from within.

Pratigya - "I want to Krishna but I am scared. What name should we give our relationship? You hardly know me and I hardly know you." She said frantic.

Her questions angered Krishna. Krishna looked at her expressionless. He held her hand and walked as fast as he could. His grip had Pratigya whining in pain. Krishna ignored her and literally dragged her to the little temple in his bungalow.

He left her in front of the mandir and went inside for a moment and returned back.

Krishna - "I didn't want this to happen like this but; you have left no option for me." He shouted loud. He came close to her and took out a black beads necklace from his pocket. Pratigya looked at him shocked. What was he planning to do? She stepped back while he moved forward towards her until she had nowhere to move. She was confused and tears dropped down. He put the necklace around her neck. He picked a pinch of sindoor and filled her maang. Pratigya closed her eyes wet in tears.

Krishna - "I wish you could have trusted me better Pratigya." He left broken leaving pratigya alone.

Edited by Suhana6 - 15 May 2015 at 1:52pm

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Suhana6 Goldie

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Posted: 15 May 2015 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dhakarn

good part ... so kriya romance all the way , for now 

Yes yaar Smile

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rekrn IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 May 2015 at 4:47pm | IP Logged
Finished reading the last few updates. 

Enjoying your FFClap.  

Even though Kriya love each other they still have a lot in their past to get through. 

K is so thoughtful taking care of P and Komal.

Curious about K's past, I hope P doesn't misunderstand him when his past is revealed.

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Posted: 15 May 2015 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
nice update suhana...pratigya loves him bt she needed time to forget her past and krishna's love definately help her... krishna married to her ...and upset with her...update soon

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Clap Clap Clap for the wonderful updates...
Krish married PShocked in a hurry
waiting for pratz reaction abt marr

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